Seher Aahil OS I Am Sorry!

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shreya

@1788shreya

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#11

Omg!!!

Its lovely

Well written

Loved ahil n seher confrontation

Plz make it a TS where we can see their real bickering n how sanam roll her eyes while watching them doing so

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iykyk

@iykyk_3

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#12

Awesome OS! 👏

I always wanted to see a beautiful bond between Seher and Ahil. But never got to see that in the show.I hope that we'll get to see it in the future.

Loved your OS to the core. ❤️🤗

At last Ahil forgave Seher! Ahil-Haya bond was really endearing. I want to see such a bond between Seher-Ahil too.

Do write more Esha. And please do pm me for your future works. 😊

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sahil333

@sahil333

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#13

Nice OS.

My heart went for Aahil 😭

His love and everything is gone.

The one who got away with it so easily

Love the bonding between Aahil and Haya, it was so endearing.

Would love to see he has found his Sanam.

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sahil333

@sahil333

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: RKholic
Awesome OS loved it 👏 😳 Please continue it 😊

I love your DP 😉 😃

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Antara123

@Antara123

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#15

That was a cute one. I realised that I don't hate Seher as a character. What I detest is the fact that I don't like SaHil being sidelined for them and her or her. That is all. Stuff like these are brilliant! Loved this. A Jiju-Saali relation is damn cute!

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Pagalpinky

@Pagalpinky

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#16

That was sweet
Nice story
Glad you kept the haya ahil relationship intact
in the show I could totally see it playing out like this
Thanks

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sanah12

@sanah12

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#17

Awww it was beautiful os
Loved it loads!!
Aahil finally did forgive her
Loved the part where aahil asked her if she knows how to make coffee 😆
I find this jiju-saali relationship really beautiful haya seher r like aahils sis wow.
I really wish to see saali- jiju relationship in Qh..
Wish sanam was there to see this..hope she cums back soon...
Thanks for the pm

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Esha

@Raingoddess

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#18

Thank u so much for such an awesome response 🤗 Its so overwhelming and wonderful to read all these comments! 😳 I was a bit hesitant to post it but the positive response made me really happy! I promise to reply to each comment as soon as I can! Thanks again everyone! Lots of Love, Esha ❤️

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minnie2308

@minnie2308

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#19

Raingoddess...that's some name😆...koi ladki hai jab wo hansti hai, baarish hoti hai...😆😉

Or are you inspired by Peter's book😛

I wont lie, I did an eww.. Seher Aahil OS.

But a few lines into it and I knew it's going to be good.

Although I do feel some indifference is in order for Seher, I am OK if she asks for forgiveness and gets it. I am also glad that she feels sufficiently sorry.

And I super like that Sanam has left this gang of jerks 😆(Aahil- the jerk lead, Rehan- chota jerk, Seher-female jerk ) for good for some time. let them stew in their juices and miss her.

But I am sure they will find her and fall at her feet-- all of them😆

Edited by minnie2308 - 10 years ago

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mahwash

@Mahu34

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#20

Oh God, you beautiful writer!! 👏

I loved how we saw a side of Seher here. I so liked it. It was so refreshing to read Seher's thoughts.

I absolutely adore the relation between Aahil and Seher. I was smiling like I don't know what.. Awww, that was damn cute.

I was so happy to know that he forgave her, even though that he was in pain. But he has finally forgiven her from the bottom of his heart. ❤️

"She had kept the purity of their relationship, Seher had not."

This line touched my heart! I just knew what I was reading is going to be so damn good.

And the fact that Rehaan and Seher are so cute together. Ugh! I want to pull their cheeks..😆

"Now please smile. I want that same Sunehri who made me laugh all the time." Rehan tickled her until she started to giggle."

The following dialogue is so powerful that it really touched my heart. It's always a delight for me to read about Aahils inner turmoil. The whole phase was so beautifully written. 👍🏼

"I had made her do so many stupid challenges. Just to prove that I was a bad person, one who was stronger and more powerful than her! I was arrogant and cruel myself. Drinking, spending nights with various women and throwing money everywhere was all I did..."

And the comedy is still there! This is so Seher. I had laughing so much by reading this.

"Don't stomp on my feet again. If you do, I might just take back the maafi I gave you."

Oh the love, Aahil! The pain and passion is still in you. The promise of his that he'll find her and bring her back brought tears in my eyes. Indeed he needs her.

"I have forgiven her Sanam. Now come back home. I want you back Miss Dhabevaali. I need you. Please come back. Your Jallad Jin needs you!" He said as a tear silently came down his cheek."

The very last dialogue had me actually wanting more. It was so beautiful and it really touched my heart. 😳

Esha! My darling, thank you for this beautiful piece of writing - yet again! I will be looking forward for the other story. Update soon!