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Posted: 9 years ago
An Brilliant work Noe 👏👏
I m always a fan of ur detailing in every story😊
U go 2 d depth of it b4 posting it
Undoubtedly u r fvrt amongst us all😃
This updt was also Excellent 👏👏
Zoe was growing fond of Ahsaan & Dillu noticed it😉
Loved d detailing u put there how Zoe noticed Dillu & Ahsaan being close
Her little hint of doubt if her mother would have wished a son & all that part was wonderful
Like every1 its still a mystery if Ahsaan & Asad r same but Ahsaan gave me a feeling like him sitting & enjoying Dillu's company hearing past stories has something 2 do wid his hiden intensions...while Dillu & Zoe have some other things going in mind he was actually persuing his own motives🤔
He doesn't look at all attracted 2 Zoe than how come they married & why?😕
So many qstns & we'll get answers once d story unfolds
U r keeping us on d edge of our seats wid d mystery Noe😆
will wait 4 nxt part😊

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Noe123



No, this story is not based on 'Kahani'. If it was, I would have shared it with you all like I have always shared before. The similarity starts and ends with a pregnant woman searching for her missing husband. Yes, it is a suspense story and a part of it is set in Kolkata, but those similarities are shared with many other movies, too and do not mean much. This is a very much original story.😊

And, you should watch Kahani. It is a great gem of a movie.

Thank you for being a loyal reader.😃


Just to say thi...
In KAHANI Vidya Balan's character pretended to be pregnant...
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Posted: 9 years ago
While reading about Darjeeling and hot parathas and rain...i just remembered this old album song PIYA BASANTI RE..such a beautiful song it is...
Anyways...this part was all past..
Mostly about Zoya...and how all she was discovering Ahsan day by day...
Ahsan is a mystery which isn't going to be solved till we have all the sources and info about him in our hands...
But he seems to be connected with this city from starting...
Felt so sorry for Dilshad...how was her life with Rashid...how she survived without him and dreamt of a better future for her daughter...but in a way it was good that she left this world before Witnessing the same cruel game played by Destiny on her daughter...
Continue soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
What a beautiful update yaar
Love it
Ahsaan character is so confusing😕
But zoya-ahsaan's story is interesting.
Next update asya's meeting😃
Can't wait
Hope to have it ASAP.
Very wonderfully written
Love it😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
Noe superb update
I think Ahsan has some personal agenda.

But couldnt find what may be that

I like Ahsan & Zoya.

I am eager to know whats happening next

Pls update soon

Thanks for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update.
Zoya and her Ahsaan..😳
Ahsaan and Dilshad getting comfortable with each other..
Zoya wondered whether her mom had a wish for a son...
Do continue soon...
Excited to see ACP Khan and Zoyas encounter..
😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
wonderful update coz it really make the reader wonder what's going to happen next
hmm so dilshad is also aware of the attraction of zoya for ahsan.
I don't know what to guess coz any of my questions aren't to get their answer pretty soon 😆
haha after reading ur note I have started to take an interest in ahsan zoya story. The scene u wrote o my god such a cute scene it was ...eating parathas yummy
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Posted: 9 years ago
nice update
ashaan a mystery zoya is trying to unravel even myself
I still tend to believe they both r the same
he just couldnt be a botanist he had to be more
related in some way or something as he wanted to know the history
too much hindi and i am left confused at times
but continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice update
Liked the way Ahsan spending time with dilshad & discussed history of tea gardens. Zoya self questions abt having a son instead of daughter was good. She wanted to spend time with Ahsan. Wanted to know more abt Ahsan as u still make suspense whether Ahsan & asad is same or two different people. Waiting for next update soon. Thanks for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
She was talking. Allah only knew what! The Sun was setting. He could not see it as it was on the other side of the balcony, but its dying rays still reached this side illuminating her hair giving them color of rich henna; burnishing her smooth skin. She had thin golden colored bangles in her hand...maybe four...in both hands...of a design that reflected light. Her hands constantly moved as she talked and rays of the setting sun danced on those bangles as they jingled and created music. Her kohl-lined eyes looked almost brown; color of a strong tea brew. She seemed to shimmer which was very confusing. He dumbly tried to follow the path of slanting rays not realizing that it was just golden thread in the embroidery on her dress. His body reminded that he needed to breath...deeply...and deeply he did taking in fragrance of henna in her hands.


<<< This.


This right here.


Noe. You always come with something extra. Always. I'm shipping Ahsaan and Zoya so bad. And there's only one more past chapter to go? I want more!


So intrigued now! Well more than usual! What when why who! And most importantly, how!

Thank you so much for the update Noe love. You're amazing. As is the chapter! I can only imagine what all it would have taken you to write and give meaning to your writing. Already looking forward to the next chapter! :)

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