Asad-Zoya FF: The Sun Has Set Chapter 12 Page 102 - Page 50

Originally posted by: asifiqbalsh

Awesome update dear
Zoya met commissioner & told him abt ahsaan. He told her to meet asad & listen to him. Ayaan wanted to help her but in dilemma what to do. Animal part trafficking case & Ayaan was surprised that he attend the meeting as well. Asad team was dead & he was nearly dead but saved by nearby villager. Wanted to know abt ahsaan disappearance. Update soon plz. Do pm me. Thanks

Originally posted by: FaultInMyStars

AWESOME UPDATE!

And please please update soon! ^_^

Originally posted by: roshni_A

at last u r back...waiting eagerly for this updt...hummm..the story is getting interesting with every new chapter...Ahsaan is really a mysterious character...his missing employee record is also very intriguing ...i am waiting for asad and zoya's meeting...its really great to see someone taking up animal trafficking as theme...

pls updt soon and send me a pm ..

tc..

Originally posted by: najma123

Hey Noe.

Nice to see your update. I am not sure if I got a PM, anyway reminding you. I am one of your regular readers. xD

Glad to see you. Will send you PMs.

I like this story. But it is a little weird.xD

It is. I agree.😃

I am guessing as and when the story progresses, things will get clearer.

I am not particularly into this story, like I was into Heartbeat Warfare, probably because of the same reason.

I SO miss Heartbeat Warfare. That was one of the best stories I ever read. LOL

Thank you. But as a writer, I need to expand my horizons. Can't keep writing same type of stories, can I?

Anyhow, this is really good. I don't really like Zoya's character though. I didn't like her character in Zoya Proposes... also. LOL.

Hmm...I can understand why Zoya is not liked. She is weak, cry-baby, in need of her man. We like strong characters. That's what make them heroes and heroines. But Zoya here is nothing of that sort...I hear yaa...but that's where lies growth. I have told this is Zoya's story of becoming Zoya. A journey...

I like your Asads. All of them.

I also like Asads. All of them. 😳

Anyhow, keep us intrigued.

Update sooner dear.

Love

Naj

Thank you for being a loyal reader and for an honest opinion.😊

Originally posted by: aashiqua

Please pm me next time...am having hectic work schedule...still I will try to read your work

Originally posted by: EkPagliLadki

Loved the update. This is yashasvi_88 or Ek PagliLadki. It would be great if you are able to send PMs.

* please update Shaad aand Jannat FF. I have been waiting to read that.

Originally posted by: Noe123

Oh...yes...it has been 4 months since last update. 😳

Thank you for warm welcome. I am seriously overwhelmed.

It is indeed different from Kahani. When you mentioned that plot is still quite similar to Kahani, I really had to scratch my head to understand 'How'? Now I see your point. Vidya Bagchi finds that her husband had a look-a-like Milan Damji. Here, Zoya's husband has a look-a-like ACP Asad Ahmed Khan. This has been turned out to be an unintentional coincidence. This Kahani is way too different.

😊

Will send PMs.

Originally posted by: jas91

No need 2 thank Noe I've been reading ur stories since long I guess past 2 years...so definitely I love ur concepts & story telling 😃

Actually honestly speaking even I havn't seen Kahani😆 but I have read its story on wiki & how this FF is moving is quite similar so that's why I asked that ...is it based on that backdrop like ur previous FF Zoya proposed was adapted on d famous novel? Khair I m quite positive u'll give ur own touch.😉

& yeah I always look forward 2 ur unique & well analysed stories so keep writing followed by d Pms u do & we readers keep shower love & appreciation😉

LOL this is d most sensible comnt I wrote in a long time 🤣