Asad-Zoya FF: The Sun Has Set Chapter 12 Page 102

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Antara123

@Antara123

Sparkler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#481

Hey Noe.

Nice to see your update. I am not sure if I got a PM, anyway reminding you. I am one of your regular readers. xD

I like this story. But it is a little weird.xD

I am guessing as and when the story progresses, things will get clearer.

I am not particularly into this story, like I was into Heartbeat Warfare, probably because of the same reason.

I SO miss Heartbeat Warfare. That was one of the best stories I ever read. LOL

Anyhow, this is really good. I don't really like Zoya's character though. I didn't like her character in Zoya Proposes... also. LOL.

I like your Asads. All of them.

Anyhow, keep us intrigued.

Update sooner dear.

Love

Naj

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Preeti

@FaultInMyStars

Dazzler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#482

AWESOME UPDATE!

And please please update soon! ^_^

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roshni_A

@roshni_A

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#483

at last u r back...waiting eagerly for this updt...hummm..the story is getting interesting with every new chapter...Ahsaan is really a mysterious character...his missing employee record is also very intriguing ...i am waiting for asad and zoya's meeting...its really great to see someone taking up animal trafficking as theme...

pls updt soon and send me a pm ..

tc..

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aashiqua

@aashiqua

Voyager

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Posted: 9 years ago

#484

Please pm me next time...am having hectic work schedule...still I will try to read your work

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EkPagliLadki

@EkPagliLadki

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#485

Loved the update. This is yashasvi_88 or Ek PagliLadki. It would be great if you are able to send PMs.

* please update Shaad aand Jannat FF. I have been waiting to read that.

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Noe123

@Noe123

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 9 years ago

#486

Originally posted by: sruthykarthika
Interesting story dear. And a misterious one too. Soo much miseries are hidden here and there. Let's see where this story leads to. Waiting for mistery to unfold.
Plz pm me.

Thank you, new reader!

Will PM you.

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Noe123

@Noe123

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 9 years ago

#487

Originally posted by: MayurChan
Wonderfully Written Part Noe.
Its so good to see you back again..and i hope you won't disappear again like this..
Well Update was their was so many things to catch hold on...
Still felt really bad for Zoya...but this is not pity...it is just a sad tragic phase in her life...
not much of AAK...in this...and i think Ayaan will help Zoya...while her stay in Kolkata.
What was that part in Garden.?
Continue soon.

Thank you.

I am also glad to be back and see all of you.

Part in garden or jungle? Hmm...hope it will become clear in next parts! My too much familiarity with the subject made me oblivious that others may not get it. Will correct it.

Zoya's current situation is tragic. How she deals with it that is to be seen!

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Noe123

@Noe123

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 9 years ago

#488

Originally posted by: aseelashah
wow an update from u after ages.
And its getting pretty interesting

Pls pls update soon

Asad had an accident before.

I cant wait more

thanks for pm

Thank you for coming back.😊

Asad didn't have an accident but he was gravely injured on a previous mission.

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Noe123

@Noe123

Dazzler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#489

Originally posted by: ..Radiance..
Firstly thank you for updating and yes I m still reading this story so I deffo want a pm. oh I really sympathise with zoya . In a city full of strangers on a mission to find husband with a cute baby bump hidden under burkha. hmm so this is how asad got injured. who is that man several kms away ?? oh god this is the most suspense wali story I have ever read. cont soon :) 😳

Thank you.

Glad that you liked the part.

Zoya with cute baby bump - makes a nice picture but reality is harsh for her

Will send you PMs.

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Noe123

@Noe123

Dazzler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#490

Originally posted by: anopama
Nice update
Poor zoya feels so sad for her she has no one
She wants her ashaan
I still do believe asad is ashaan
He was undercover got injured and now he don't remember tht part of it
He don't remember Zoya
I really hope I am right
Only thing is who was with birds and slingshot with birds
Continue soon

Thank you.

Hmm...so what about him being quite far from where Ahsaan was supposed to be...as in his mission was no where close to Darjeeling? 😉 Keep guessing.

Working on the next part. Will update in a day or two.