Asad-Zoya FF: The Sun Has Set Chapter 12 Page 102 - Page 24

Originally posted by: swapno

And the story begins with a bang...it is really refreshing way to narrate!

loved the subtle details of Zoya's childhood!!

there was pain, hardship yet their life is blessed...

I love Zoya in a certain extent and I also want her character to grow...

but it never happened!!

Anyways..the mystery man is Asad I guess and he was there only to solve his case...

what an endearing introduction...loved it!

Awaiting for story to move and wondering how he and Zoya got along...!

Beautiful...

Thanks for the PM 😳

Originally posted by: potternerd

Wow both chapters were so different from each other !!!

Is this gonna be a present-past-present past story ?

Lovely characters in chapter 1

I think it's too early to speculate about zoya's character

No brownie points for guessing that the man zoya met was Asad !!

It was funny how he kept looking at the road and not her (assuming her cotton dress had become transparent !!!) (typical asad btw...hope the guy is asad and not someone else lol)

Nice that zoya has different set of parents

It would be lovely to read about Dilshaad being a mother to Zoya

But then it makes me wonder who would be there on Asad's side ?

Asad's mom has always been his greatest strength !!

Wonder what you have in store for us:)

Looking forward to the next chapter :)

Originally posted by: sweet_tehs

Res

Unres.

Haha I think I am also getting a promotion like ACP Khan in the story.

Last time I got second spot to comment n this time 1st.

Congratulations for your promotion! 😃

It's a first for me too.

So I want this comment to be very good too n I hope I can.

To begin with, the opening paragraph was very nice n had a different ring to it.

I don't think shireen had such a nice intro in any other story.

Thank you. I also liked writing that part very much. 😊

Like Ayaan here.more matured n sensible also responsible.

He respects his ACP also too much to not let his reputation tarnish.

Ayaan hero-worshipped Asad in the show. "Bhai ka dil 'dariya dash samandar' hain". Same continues here. Not exactly hero-worship as he hasn't worked with him for long time but it is the same feeling with less intensity. He is mature and responsible - that I agree.

Well there was no Zoya much but liked the entire convo between asyaan in his cabin.

N the way ayaan received his punishment from asad.

Ha ha...I am glad. My favorite part here after Shireen's intro scene.

Well a little hints here n there were asad was the only child has maybe cleared a lot of doubts that he dint have any twin.

You are paying attention. Very important.😉

Since you haven't given out much details about ACP khan yet there are numerous things going on in my head with this mystery.

Like was asad an undercover cop on a mission.

But knowing u I know this will not be the truth as this is so very cliched.

I know it will turn out to be a 360degree from what we think.

Keep guessing and coming up with theories, that's all I can say.😃

Zoyaan part was delicate n cute too.

Of course Zoya will not accept this so easily that this person is not her ahsan.

N any sane person would do the same if they see an exact replica of the person u r dying to find out.

Absolutely agree! That too in Zoya's emotionally turbulent state. Impossible!

But I hope this agony for Zoya gives her some hope n ends soon.

Whatever u r planning but I want a happy ending for Asya.

As I said, this is a mystery and everything about it is a mystery. Read at your risk.

I know there will be lots of fb scenes n I'm looking forward to it.

Yes, past needs to be known to understand present.

That's it.

Don't know y I'm writing such super long comments for everyone today.

Hope u like it.😊

Yes, I liked it very much. Thank you.😃

Originally posted by: shailu123

Awesome update ayaan is so sweet he is helping her so much poor zoya its so hard 4 her its really interesting continue soon 😃

Originally posted by: KeyaHira2

OMG

OMG

Im with Zoya here

Asad is Ahsan

Ahsan was a under covered cop

And his real name is Asad

Idk

I Love it

Originally posted by: asadzoyaqubool

Amazing update

👏

ur way of writing has kept d suspense quite intriguing😊

wid every update d curiousness is increasing

continue soon want to read more

thnks fr d pm😊

Originally posted by: Amin21

Wow

Brilliant update yaar👏

asyaan scene was so so lovely to read⭐️

Felt very bad for zoya😭

but whats all this going on yaar?!

eagerly waiting to read further how will asya reaction to the situation.

Loved ayaan-nikhat's convo😊

each and every part was the update was just👍🏼

update soonish

waiting

Originally posted by: MysticRiver

Intriguing Update..Well Written...👍🏼

Originally posted by: aarzoo50

loved the update...
beautifully written...
zoya's hopes hv been crushed by the info ayaan gave bt she still wants it to b wrong...
poor ayaan went a lil out of way ti help her... n got what!!! nyt shifs... trust me there is nothing horrible than the nyt shifts... chahe ayaan ki police wali ya meri hospital wali 😔 😭
asad is not ahsaan but y do i hv a feeling that ahsaan is asad...
i made a very poor guess... lyk asad went to darjeeling on a secret mission as ahsaan n kaam khatam to he went back.. but thn wont he be even thodu sa concerned abt zoya... or is he too gud at masking emotions...
plz continue soon...
waiting fr the revelation although none seems to b coming up soon...

Originally posted by: SurbhikiPankhi

Ooh interesting update Noe! <3

The guy chapter 2 definitely seemed like Asad, is Asad actually Ahsaan with retrogade amnesia? 😳

Nahh, wouldn't make sense also with the birthmark, twins? Asad's face got changed? Idk and I'm currently out of theories! I love this story! <3 it's so confusing! Pretty sure we'll find out more later though.

Poor Zoya baby! <\3 and her mother died as well. I've never felt this bad for her, okay excluding heartbeat warfare but she had Humeira! Idk this is sad.