Brilliant!!! Absolutely fabulous, this is a fantastic chapter writing, narrative and plotting wise. 👏
I am not a tea drinker, lekin after reading that sequence I wanted to taste that cuppa tea. Lucky Ayan!!
This chapter, the current, the present and Ayan of course. His family, I am glad as of now, he has one that is close knit and caring. Really enjoyed reading how this was portrayed, with Nikhat and him having the teasing sibling banter, and Shireen enjoying every bit of it fondly. Nikhat pregnant with her situation contrasting with Zoe's pregnancy. How much a loving family can make a difference. So well done.
I like how the whole ACP situation is dealt with, not only Ayan is a gutsy good samaritan, but also a good detective. So after Zoe is safe in the hospital and he knows ACP Khan is not going to let him off easily, he digs up the story behind the whole Ahsaan/ACP Khan thing. I like how he follows up, and rationalizes and reasons with the stunning fact of 2 identical people who are not twins, 70's ki bollywood wali movies ko bhi list main check maar diya. 😆
This is crux of the story is right here, or so I think, the dilemma, are there two separate men, is it the same guy, how, when, where, why...all the questions are spinning away. Seems like the story is doing what it intended to 😉, I cannot wait to find out.
Little details how it was handled, Ayan subtly mentioning that Zoe is pregnant, ACP's momentary flashback to her stomach, very intimate, he noticed but did not realize, this realization came from Ayan. I bet Ayan was looking for his reactions too,
So the file says the man is exactly the same except for that birthmark. Ayan is going to keep this case, he knows, he cannot let this one go.
Really liked how ACP Khan handed out night shifts to Ayan. How Sinha whistles and tries to annoy Ayan, these little details, they make this update so readable.
Thoroughly enjoyed it!!
Off to the next chapter comments 😳
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