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Noe123

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Posted: 10 years ago

#241

Originally posted by: ChocoBerry
Loved the update Noe. Am loving the way the story is developing. The whole Ayaan scene was super cute and added a hilarious quotient to the story.

Thank you. Glad that you liked the scene.

My heart went out to Zoya and the pain she feels at not having her husband by her side in a time when she needs him the most. The hormonal changes and the emotional distress that she is experiencing can not even be imagined. I feel so sad reading about her.

Yes, it is very sad and the ride is going to be bumpy.

Waiting to read what happens next. I love the way you develop the love between Asad n Zoya. Like it happened in Heartbeat Warfare.

Thank you. I am amazed to know how much Heartbeat Warfare is remembered even now. Thank you, truly. I will try...pyaar aur aisa kuchh...😳

P.S. have sent you a buddy request. Please do accept.

I have accepted it.

Thank you for lovely comments.

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Noe123

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Posted: 10 years ago

#242

Originally posted by: ..Radiance..
Wow what a good chapter it was :)
I love ur execution style. It is so descriptive & gives the reader an opportunity to actually make them feel engaged & leaves them craving for more. 😃
When I reached last paragraph, I was like why it had to end so soon lol . I know it was pretty long but the reader in me is very greedy cos I think this make me involved in the story as you are. . 👏
The introduction of Shireen was great.😊
The banter b/w Ayaan & Nikhat was very good. :)
And the mystery continues of Ahsan and ACP Khan.
My gut feeling says that both r same but I can also b wrong. But Asad is in Kolkata for last 6 months cos of transfer from Bhopal and Zoya should b about 3-4 months pregnant ( I don't know any of these pregnancy things ). So sab golmal hai lol .
Continue Soonish.😉

Thank you very much.

It is my aim to feel readers very involved in the story and feel what characters are feeling. I am glad that I am succeeding.

And, yes, it was a long chapter 😉

I really liked writing Shireen's intro scene. Glad that you appreciate it.

Yes, Zoya is little more than 4 month's pregnant. And, yes, Asad got transferred six months ago. But, life happens to people every day and people live their life without ever crossing many others' life, right?

Thank you for reading and commenting. 😃

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Noe123

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Posted: 10 years ago

#243

Originally posted by: Shubh007
AWESOME + INTERESTING UPDATE...👏

LOVE IT...

EVERY SCENE IS MIND-BLOWING...👍🏼

UPDATE NEXT PART SOON...😊

Thank you.

Next update - Next weekend...😊

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Noe123

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Posted: 10 years ago

#244

Originally posted by: AsyaManeet
Asad 😕 or Ahsaan?! And Bechara Ayaan 😔 He is so good hearted! waiting ACP khan's reaction on picture of Ahsaan!

Yes, Mr Bechara, Ayaan!

Asad's reaction - always worth-watching! 😉

Thank you for reading and commenting.

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Noe123

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Posted: 10 years ago

#245

Originally posted by: asifiqbalsh
Awesome update
Asad told ayaan to shift her in hospital. His punishment was not bad. He was not bothered. He wanted to help Zoya for finding her husband. He was shocked to read Zoya file. The way he conveyed his msg to Zoya was wonderful. Waiting for asad reaction after seeing file. Continue soon plz. Thanks for pm

Thank you very much.

Ayaan thinks that his punishment is not bad. Maybe, he is a night owl. But, for many it will really be a punishment...that too for one month...yikes...ACP Asad Ahmed Khan...how calmly he delivers decision. 😛

And. yes, Ayaan here comes with brains and sensitivity...😃 (and a truck-load of naivety)

Thank you for reading and commenting.

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Noe123

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Posted: 10 years ago

#246

Originally posted by: swapno
It is a solid chapter 👏
I just enjoyed each line of it..😳
I know I am judging the characters so early but still I am sticking with that Asad was in Darjeeling as Hussain...I don't know why I am sticking on it but the man's character made me to think of it. I am hoping that I will get a surprise later...
Yes you cleared it by now that there is no birthmark and both are different...!
But he was curious about Zoya ..well may be I am making a fuss out of it 🤓
I can imagine anything while reading I think 😆
I am pakaoing you now...!
but really liking the different platter in my dish especially when you are the cook Noe...
I guess it is a bad comparison..!
so signing off here...!

loved it... thank you for this awesome story 🤗

Thank you.

Come up with, develop your theories as much as you can. With suspense stories, ball is in readers' as much as a writer's court. 😉

Yes, there is no birthmark on Asad's arm. 😃

Now the curiosity - Wouldn't a senior police officer care about a person who fainted in his office under suspicious circumstances? Isn't that his duty? But yes, you can imagine as much as you want...

And, I am glad that you are liking the new dish prepared by this cook, I just need to add more masalas and keep the dish spicy and surprising enough...😃

Thank you for lovely review.

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Noe123

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Posted: 10 years ago

#247

Originally posted by: Asyalover
Nice but i wanna see asad zoya scene again.

Sure. When time is right, you will get to see their scenes.

Thanks for reading and commenting. 😊

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Noe123

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Posted: 10 years ago

#248

Originally posted by: --Arpita--
It was a beautiful update...
Not much Zoya...but loved the last Zoyaan convo and Asad-Ayaan convo...
Continue soon..
Thanx 4 pm...

❤️

Thank you. Glad that you liked the update. 😃

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Noe123

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Posted: 10 years ago

#249

Originally posted by: FaultInMyStars

A very very nice update...The best thing is it is so realistic and you can easily imagine everything. I am in love with your way of writing and the way you portray your characters...and this is the umpteenth time I am saying that and I am gonna keep saying forever xP
I want Asad to have been Ahsaan somehow (can't help it!) , but I hope they are two different people.
Would love to read more of the flashbacks. This Ahsaan guy really has me intrigued.

And...Shireen's introduction was like really nicee! Loved it!

Update soon!

<3

Thank you very much. I am lucky to have so much love and appreciation from readers.😳

Many readers have this contradictory wish of Asad being Ahsaan and yet not. What shall I do? What shall I do? 😈

Super glad that you liked Shireen's intro scene. I very much liked writing it.

And, who is this little lady in the gif? Which Disney story that I can't recognize? Scratches head...

Thank you for reading and commenting.😊

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Noe123

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Posted: 10 years ago

#250

Originally posted by: kajenilious
ya allah each chapter s cmpltly dif frm othr when i startd readng 3 chapy i doubtd tat is it d same story whch i read...den i cnfrmd cng cmnts above d update...nd wat was tat asad ACP nd zoe pregnent telng ahsan who has same luks as asad hmmm dey r so many thngs to unfold...bt u also mentnd tat asad s recently got trnsfrd to kolkata nd also he has been n hospital for 1 mnth so i gues he lost hs memory..tat s wat can i thnk now...
bt dis story hookd me up nw...cnt wait fr nxt...update soon

Uh..oh...it is going to be a bumpy ride both for characters and readers (and writer too). We are going to take path unknown. 😛

You had to go and read comments to confirm? Haila...I know in an episodic story such a format can get confusing. Let me see what I can do.

Lost memory seems plot of the season😉 Whether it is the case here or not that only time will tell.

Keep reading. Thank you for your comments.😃