Asad-Zoya FF: The Sun Has Set Chapter 12 Page 102

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nilusoni

@nilusoni

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#201

gr8 update

thanx for pm

plz pm me for next part

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Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

Trailblazer

+ 10

Posted: 10 years ago

#202

Intriguing Update..Well Written...👍🏼

Edited by MysticRiver - 10 years ago

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Mehreeeen

@SurbhikiPankhi

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#203

Ooh interesting update Noe! <3

The guy chapter 2 definitely seemed like Asad, is Asad actually Ahsaan with retrogade amnesia? 😳

Nahh, wouldn't make sense also with the birthmark, twins? Asad's face got changed? Idk and I'm currently out of theories! I love this story! <3 it's so confusing! Pretty sure we'll find out more later though.

Poor Zoya baby! <\3 and her mother died as well. I've never felt this bad for her, okay excluding heartbeat warfare but she had Humeira! Idk this is sad.

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-.-Mariam-.-

@-.-Mariam-.-

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#204

Nice update..

Continue soon..

Thnx for PM..

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ChocoBerry

@ChocoBerry

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#205

Loved the update Noe. Am loving the way the story is developing. The whole Ayaan scene was super cute and added a hilarious quotient to the story.

My heart went out to Zoya and the pain she feels at not having her husband by her side in a time when she needs him the most. The hormonal changes and the emotional distress that she is experiencing can not even be imagined. I feel so sad reading about her.

Waiting to read what happens next. I love the way you develop the love between Asad n Zoya. Like it happened in Heartbeat Warfare.

P.S. have sent you a buddy request. Please do accept.

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Morsmorde

@Morsmorde

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#206

Wow what a good chapter it was :)

I love ur execution style. It is so descriptive & gives the reader an opportunity to actually make them feel engaged & leaves them craving for more. 😃

When I reached last paragraph, I was like why it had to end so soon lol . I know it was pretty long but the reader in me is very greedy cos I think this make me involved in the story as you are. . 👏

The introduction of Shireen was great.😊

The banter b/w Ayaan & Nikhat was very good. :)

And the mystery continues of Ahsan and ACP Khan.

My gut feeling says that both r same but I can also b wrong. But Asad is in Kolkata for last 6 months cos of transfer from Bhopal and Zoya should b about 3-4 months pregnant ( I don't know any of these pregnancy things ). So sab golmal hai lol .

Continue Soonish.😉