Asad-Zoya FF: The Sun Has Set Chapter 12 Page 102 - Page 19

Originally posted by: sweet_tehs

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Wow getting a second spot on ur story is wonderful.

Well yes I agree with u that this is a mystery n u can't reveal much.

But again here a little change is that dilshaad is zoya's ammi n not asad's.

N yes I agree zoya is zoya n still not zoya.

We can count this chapter as kind of introduction to everyone's character.

Waiting for asad completely n for the mystery to unfold.

Thanks for the pm n continue soon.

Please can't u update a little more regularly like u did with heartbeat warfare?

Originally posted by: sweet_tehs

I know this is not the thread but I wanted to share something with u.

I had not seen the movie Aisha before n ended up watching it today.

N through out the movie I have remembered u n ZPAD.

I was only relating all the characters with ur story n believe me I found ur story much much much better than the movie.

The description of each character was much better in ur story than in the film.

Originally posted by: fobeidy

interesting start, will be able to give a proper feedback once the story starts to develop.

Originally posted by: --Arpita--

Loved the chapter..
Want to know how Zoya become ZOya😉
Update soon...
Sure the man is Asad or Zoya's Ahsaan...Continue soon
really soon...

Originally posted by: -ABI-

Interesting 👍🏼

Originally posted by: EMOksgian

thx fr pm :) update is gud bt very late :( plZ update regularly ...
regarding update lots of mystery oh gd I'm still confused waitng fr next updt and sum carity !
do pm me

Originally posted by: A.Hajnal

Amazing as always...I don't think there is even one story of yours that I won't love...😳

Originally posted by: asadzoyaqubool

Gud update😊

d way u portrayed zoya was gud

so rashid n dilshaad r zoya's parents

ws d otr person asad

continue soon

thnks fr d pm

Originally posted by: SurbhikiPankhi

I think I'm already in love with this story! And the fact that it's a story is even more exciting! I love the start! It's so poetic!

Thank you.

And, thank you for noticing the start. Lot of thought went in there.😳

I don't see much difference between this Zoya and the show's. I think this is how the show's Zoya would've been, had she grown up in India. 😳

Yes, in current chapter, she is very much of Zoya that we know, but Zoya that we met in first chapter, not much, right?

Rain is but a mere obstacle, when you have to watch your favorite. 😆

Of course...😛