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Esha

@Raingoddess

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: canoodle
I hope Aahil is just being a drama queen and nothing has actually happened to him! Loved this part, can you fly to wherever it is that they write this show and take over please. Update soon :)

-Meera

Hey thank you so much 😳 I think almost every writer on this forum produces much more intelligent work than the actual cvs do 😆 Well as for Aahil, you will see what his plan is in the next part 😉 He is a but of a drama queen but he is ARI 😉 I am glad u liked it so much! Hope u like the next part too! I will update soon and pm u as well! 😊 Thanks again!!

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Esha

@Raingoddess

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: Suku_SwaRon
Haila esha😆 a cliff hanger, don t do this to us readers and fans. The story update super cool. The narration the best, This is the way the story should go in QH, seher repenting and sanam strong. Well waiting for the Sequel, jaldi karo ji

Yes Suku a cliffhanger 😉 I am so bad right 😆 Thoda sabar karo 😉 You will see what happens in the sequel! Thanks for your comment! 😳 I promise to give readers n fans something enjoyable in the next update 😉 Hope u like it! I will update soon n pm u! Thanks again for liking n commenting on the story!!

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Esha

@Raingoddess

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: MysticRiver
Good..👍🏼

Thanks!

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Esha

@Raingoddess

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: sahil333
Great update Esha 👍🏼.

I loved his flashbacks. So beautifully incorporated .

How I miss those days... sigh!

TQ.

Thanks! I miss those days too! Hope you like the rest as well 😊 I will update soon!

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Esha

@Raingoddess

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: 1788shreya
Wow!!👏
What a surprise!
What u did?
Hang the story in middle
This surprise of urs is not acceptable so please complete it soon
And regarding ur concept its mindblowing
Beautifully written
Read it in one go
Loved it so much

Lmao I promise to make it up in the sequel 😉 Thank you so much for your comment! I will update soon! I hope u like it! Thanks again for liking and commenting on my work! These comments mean a lot 😊

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Esha

@Raingoddess

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: bloomnskyrules
I would love to read a sequel to this. Update soon, please.

Thanks! Yes i will update soon! Plz do read that n lmk wat u think!

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Esha

@Raingoddess

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: Pagalpinky
That was really good
Nowadays ahil is just crying but I want to see that old passionate anger again
And you portrayed it so nicely
I like how you changed him at the end and he's going to show her his ari side
ahhh so excited for the next part :)
Thanks

Thanks! Yea I miss the old Aahil n Sanam! I will update soon. Hope u like it! Thanks again!!

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Esha

@Raingoddess

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: kmh2lover
I read this a few days back and didn't have time to comment but I wanted to let you know that I love the story line you have chosen for this and I really like the way you write, it's quite descriptive yet flows well :)

Thank you so much for taking out the time to comment! Means a lot! I am glad u liked it :) :)

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Pragya

@Ms.Sherlocked

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#49

I just read this!!

😲

Esha, you little you...😆 What the hell was that ending?! It sure was a surprise man! Accident hogaya Rehan ke Aahil bhai ka? You see I can't say "Aahil" and the "B" word I just used in the same sentence, while I am talking about Aahil. Its that underlying code, I never break! 😆😆 So I used "Rehan ke Aahil bhai" 😳😆

Anyway, I am kinda hyper today and I can't seem to put a finger on the reason why?😆

I loved the last part man! Glad that you made it Threesome 😆 Can I just say I loved how you incorporated that note vali memory again into the story?! Awww!! That was so cute! The way he traced fingers over that paper...😆

Lol I just love when he wants to deny the facts of his heart and fails miserably in doing the same 😆 Poor guy! This is awesome! Yes yes for the sequel!!