SaHil FF : Remember me ...? *Part 5 and 6 page 15*

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evedallas1

@evedallas1

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Posted: 10 years ago

#91

It was Amazing ! 😛 and 2 chapters at the same time you spoil us 👏 god I love the chemistry btw your characters it's like we found the old Aahil and sanam in the show. Our girl isn't shy at all lol she knows what she wants and she wants her husband. Lol I notice you always put a great love making scene before the real drama begins :) 😆 good think Aahil finally told her the true about their wedding and relationship ! Yes ! Sanam sends him good replies he should have ask himself why she ran away and not believe his dear ammi , why she changed after his love confession. Good sanam show him his stupidity lol

"Aahil, I respect your devotion to your Ammi. Don't get me wrong. That's your right. But, if you don't have it in you to love your wife equally, and not even give her some importance in your life, or even trust her at all, you had no business getting married in the first place. .."

Wow this is so good ! You wrote great lines girl :) now Aahil heard her accusations against the devil aka Tanveer ... What will he do ? Will he believe sanam or again Ammi will win the game. God I can't wait to see what you will prepare ! Great chapters ! I hope you will also complete tangled love very soon your suspense is killing me 😆

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Mandy

@MrDarcyfan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#92

Just loved the two chapters. The lovemaking was hot, and the conversation about the past had a lot of home truths in it. That was great. I loved his Sanam logically questioned him about how he could just accept his Mother's words and not question her. Good one!

Now waiting to see what happens next!

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Pragya

@Ms.Sherlocked

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Posted: 10 years ago

#93

Yayyy Anii!! Double Dhamaka! Like "1 ke saath 1 *free* *free* *free* 😆😆

How awesome was those parts?! I can't actually remember except the hot lovemaking session though 😆

Such a fast paced and crisp writing.⭐️

I just loved how you incorporated that scene from the show. That was just gorgeous. ❤️ The way he made her remember of all those things of her Dhaba and when he put that ring! :')) On the actual show, the ring was for...Ugh! 😡 Thank you for this scene!

And how the mood suddenly turned up. HOT! I love Sanam man, no doubt! She proved it again. "Kiss me.." How HOT was that?! Aahil as usual was being a little hesitant, great I love him that way! 😆

And the rest. God, I was actually holding my breath! That last scene in the show on that Dhaba, I am sure it would have turned out in THIS way only if those friends wouldn't have come. I am so GLAD you actually brought them to a hotel room. Or else Sanam would have had no qualms doing It RIGHT THERE! 😆 Poor Aahil 'lets get a room okay?" 😆

Like Evedallas said. you always give such session before the drama actually. Seems legit. Keeps them out of all frustration and tension😆

And the second part. Jeez!! So much happened so quick! I SO LOVED how he told all their journey. It was like reliving those scenes again. Sigh!

Good thing he is actually questioning now! Yes yes, idiot! Why din't he go looking for her? Why no demand for answers? Good Sanam good! She always brings sense to him, even when she has a memory loss! 😆

OMG! The last scene! 😲 Ani, your such a troublemaker for all the weak hearts! God that was such a TWIST. She yelled and she fainted. So...

She is gonna get back her memory now...?? 😲

Awesome! Can't wait for that! Aahil man! Oh god! This is just too interesting to wait!

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Tamara27

@Tamara27

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Posted: 10 years ago

#94

Goodness me! How late I am.

Sagey, this is for chapter 1.

OMG! Poor Sanam.

I didn't watch the epi... couldn't bring myself to, but man! Now...

And you know what? Poor bloody Aahil. They're all just little puppets on strings, aren't they?

I wanted Sanam to leave him in the show. I wanted consensual separation - from her side. So thank you for this. Though heartbreaking, I wanted this.

Sure it takes a strong woman to stay, but I honestly believe it takes a stronger woman to leave, so thank you for giving this to me. To us.

I miss you, my dear Sagey!

Alright, all for now; I'm off to read the next part.

Love you!

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Nitya Suresh

@TheAutumnFizz

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Posted: 10 years ago

#95

Loved it!! The lovemaking was hot! Like super hot! I seriously loved how patient Aahil is with Sanam.. Even though he was at fault in the first place but his love did overpower a lot after Sanam's accident..
Loved the conversation between Aahil and Sanam.. Logical Sanam.. Hoping to see something close in the serial.. Alas that ain't happening..
So Begum Sahiba found them and Sanam recognized her.. Yess!
Looking forward to what happens next!!

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fanraya

@fanraya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#96

Amazing two chapters, Great work..

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darkice7_12

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Posted: 10 years ago

#97

Great update! Thanks for updating two chapters at once.I can't wait to see how Aahil is going to react to sanam's accusations after promising to do better. update soon!

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Esha

@Raingoddess

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Posted: 10 years ago

#98

Two awesome chapters! Now this is what you call a treat 👏 Brilliant! The love making was hot ☺️ As usual Sanam was the bolder one 😉 Also I love how similar Sanam and Aahil are to their initial characterizations! Sanam asked some really logical questions! The scenes play out so naturally and I love the flow in your story! The chemistry, tension, use of those old moments, everything was just perfect ⭐️ The ending... All I have got to say is I cant wait for the next part! Plz update again soon 😊

Edited by Raingoddess - 10 years ago