SS: If I Stay [Alpha] pg24

Antara123

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Posted: 10 years ago

#21

Intriguing... Is Asad into drugs? Do continue... Its a mystery... If I stay? ... And if you can PM... It would be great.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#22

OMG! wht a chapter👏

ASAD!!!!! Mr. Jerk Ahmed Khan😡🤬

My poor Zoe😭

Continue soon... And i want Asad to suffer like helll

he hurted my Zoe too much🤔

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princess101

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Posted: 10 years ago

#23

I am loving this story so much so intense

hope Asad suffers after what he did and Zoya gives him a hard time to

but please at the end a happy ending please

please PM me when u update

update soon

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countingstarz

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Posted: 10 years ago

#24

This is really good , though what the heck is up with Asad , is he a druggie ? 😆

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jessateurbrain

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Posted: 10 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: princess101
I am loving this story so much so intense
hope Asad suffers after what he did and Zoya gives him a hard time to
but please at the end a happy ending please
please PM me when u update
update soon

Thank you so much. I always appreciate invested readers.

I will add you to my buddy list now.

I don't anything about the future. I haven't written a whole lot of plot yet.

Let us hope things go the way you want them to.

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jessateurbrain

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Posted: 10 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: rosamale
Oh My😲 i didnt expect such an intense chapter when i started reading. I must say you are a brilliant writer👏 I loved it.
What is going on with Asad.😡 HE is acting like a jerk.
Poor Zoya.

Haha. you are in for quite the ride honey. Thank you for the praise.

He is acting strange so we know there is something wrong. wish he'd hashed it out

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jessateurbrain

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Posted: 10 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: Chahanya
Thank you for the warning
What is up with Jerk Khan?

you are welcome.

I am not comfortable writing straight erotica but sometimes I get quite close.

let's see what the story demands. 😊

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jessateurbrain

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Posted: 10 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: sageflower7
Yipes! What's Asad's problem !! 😡
Gripping stuff... 👏

@bold that's what I like to hear.

😆

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jessateurbrain

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Posted: 10 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: cale
Nice prologue...
Please pm me next update 😳

see chapter 1 also.

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jessateurbrain

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Posted: 10 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: Nitya_Suresh
This is so good.. I love it.. So intense..
What is wrong with Asad? How can he act like a jerk to her.. Poor Zoya.. :(
And he left her? Freaking hell!!
I am so hoping that he realizes his mistake..
Looking forward to what happens next.. :)
Please so pm me..:)

Thank you. Something is wrong with her. She knows it. He knows it too.

But he isn't ready to deal with it. No one can force other people to act according to their will.

Let's see what happens.

Added to buddy list.

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