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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: aseelashah

Wow its super duper amazing update dear

And the pics are cherry on top

I cant wait to read more

Pls update soon

Loved it soo much

Thanks for pm


thanks aseela😛
glad you like them
next update tonight hopefully
glad you did
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: suearmaniac

oye kaha gayab thi????
college life started?? wowie ka zowie
congo shongo

ps. i knw m super late


oye gayb tu hogye thi pata hai maine kitna miss kiya tujhe
yeah it has😛 par abhi eid holidays so am here
thanko thanko

you are super se upar wala late
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: suearmaniac

and the maha chapter was great
who says it was hopeless?
the very thoughtful writer u are habiba🤗
and i just love u for writing this amazingly❤️
with the pictures in between it was magical to read


thanks sue😛
am so glad you liked it!
It was hopeless end in start but now it is turning better😉
thoughtful? What is so thoughtful in me?
And i just love you soo much for your come back
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: suearmaniac

and thoda tym nikaal and read my ff madam
aap pehle thread pe hena shayad??
ya fir doosre pe he
i remember u commented many months back about u wanted an update
and u haven't even read aage kya hua
pagal ladki
mene 4th thread chaalu kar diya he
jaldi aaja


o madam tery FF maine read ki time nikal kar han wo mai 2nd par hun shayd wahn tak read ki thy jahn asd get to know about zoya past i guess maybe i didn't coment or maybe i did! Didn't remember!
Kya puchty ho yar i have pms above 200 and am just not able to open any of them other than the chats one
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Welcome everyone! Here's an update for you all. Hope you all will enjoy it. I feel this update as filler but it has solid points too especially it's second part will contain them.



Chapter 15 (a) - Safe Under Your Wings
This chapter is dedicated to ksen

It was a beautiful day with cool breeze playing with her room's curtain and sun rays peeping through window. She tossed and turn trying to hide her face from the shining sun but failed. She sit on bed groaning and moved her hairs that tickled her face. She felt something sticky on her right hand and looked at it. She was shocked to find the ointment applied on it. She frowned thinking how this happened and that's when she noticed that she is in her hotel room while yesterday night she was with Asad. She gasped as she remembered what happened yesterday and how she slept on Asad's shoulders and he must have brought her here.

She looked around and found a first aid box with a paper on it. She frowned confusely and took the paper in her hand. She recognised it to be Asad's hand writing. She traced her hand on it before reading the note.

I have treated your hand but I don't know where else you are hurt so there is first aid box and rest you know.

She looked at her hand and smiled thinking how he must have treated his hand. Zoya looked at the paper again and found something more written in hand she furrowed her eyebrow and read it.

and please get a phone and call me

Phone? Zoya thought confusely and that's when reality dawn on her that she lost her purse and her phone in that fire.

"Allah Miya! What's wrong with me? How can I forgot that I lost almost my all belongings but my room key was also in my purse then how did Mr Khan brought me here?"Zoya exclaimed confusely

She came out of bed and thought to change when she walked on something. She took a step backward and saw the key dropped on ground. She took it in her hands and looked it for a minute and she got to know what must have hapened. She shook her head with a smile.

Asad woke up with immense pain in his back. His whole body was screaming in pain as he sit with the support of bed. He closed his eyes trying to compose himself. After a moment, he feels little better. He opens his eyes and took his surroundings. He was still in the same clothes that he wore last night. He remembered coming home late and sleeping without changing. He came out of bed and noticed that his clothes were messed and also burnt at some places. Asad went for changing and only then he noticed the injuries on his back that must have came when he fall down while saving Zoya. He shook his head and treated his back with much difficulty. After getting completely ready, he took some pain killers to kill the pain in his body.

Asad came in dining room and looked around but found none. He was confused to see the kitchen and dining table empty. He was standing and thinking when Najma came to him.

"Ami apki shadi kai kuch kamon se bahir gye hain aur Tanveer bhi unke sath hain"Najma spat Tanveer like it was venom in her mouth

Asad feels Najma's curtness. He looked down ashamed of stooping so low infront of his family. Asad's eyes turned red as he tried to control his tears. He noded looking down, controling his pain.

Najma looked at Asad dropped head and her own tears filled up in her eyes as she feels her father-like brother feeling so low infront of her. For the first time in her life, she has saw her brother head down or else he would walk with his head held high. She felt the immense pain in her heart as she saw his condition today. Taking all the courage she speaks

"please don't marry Tanveer"Najma said helplessly, her eyes brimmed with tears as she spoke the burden of her heart

Asad looked at Najma abruptly. His eyes that were filling up with tears suddenly changed into shock and surprise expression.

Najma pursed her lips trying to control her sobs. Her bhaijaan eyes piercing through her face, scaring her from the outcome.

"she is not a right girl"Najma told with her face showing all her fears and sadness

Asad was overwhelmed. He was shocked and happy. Shocked to hear all this from Najma and happy to know she still cares. Being speechless with all the emotions and not able to speak anything he hugged Najma tightly.

Najma was startled with the hug but she felt happy. She let out the breath that she was holding and smilingly rejoiced her bhaijaan warmth that she was missing from so many days.

"I know"He slowly whispered shocking and confusing Najma

Najma broke the hug and looked at him confused.

"you know she is not right? Then why did you scream on Zoya for her always?"Najma said confusely

Asad closed his eyes remembering his wrath that he used to throw on Zoya. He regret those days. He opened his eyes and looked at his baby sister looking at him with her big confused eyes. He smiled wistfully.

"I got to know late! So much late that now I have to pretend to marry her but don't worry I will not marry her"Asad said touching Najma cheek

"you will not marry her? But will pretend? But why bhaijaan? You can break the marriage now too right?"Najma looked at him

Asad shook his head - "I cannot! I have to prove my innocence to everyone! To myself"

Najma holded Asad's hand and looked in his eyes - "Bhaijaan you are innocent. I know! I heared Tanveer saying that to someone on call."

Asad looked at Najma hopefully - "you? How? When? And why didn't you tell me? You are speaking truth right?"

Najma noded her head and asked him to sit so they could talk properly. Settling themselves in hall Najma told her story with tears. Asad was touched with Najma care and was feeling guilty too for not believing Zoya and placing that doubt in his own sister mind. He placed his hand on her head and assured her that he and Zoya will not let anything goes wrong.

"Zoya? Isn't she in Newyork?"Najma exclaimed

Asad noded his head in no - "no she is living in a hotel in Bhopal, in this very same city. We meet everyday"

Najma was shocked and confused. She demand to know all which Asad did easily.

"don't worry bhaijaan now am with you two and I will prove Tanveer lies. I will help you both"Najma said softly with a small smile

Asad looked at her with smile feeling happy to get his baby sister back.

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It is short! I know but it is just part 1 of chapter 15, part 2 will come when I will start to write it and will complete it but for now this short update so to not let you all forget the story.

Thanks,

Bubye!!
Edited by Asshi... - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
wow beautiful update loved it thank you for pm.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Itna chhotu sa update😕
Maza nahi aaya...

Anyways...
I loved Asad n najma's scene...
Very very very comforting...

Continue soon..
Edited by sweet_tehs - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
I loved it
You're right
I almost forgot about this story
Im so happy Najma is helping them now
Cant wait for the next chapter
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Posted: 10 years ago
very nice update
now najma is going to help asya
very excited for the next part
thanks for the pm
thanks for dedicating to me

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