New Asya SS: A gift from life, chap 15, 04-05-15 COMPLETED - Page 47

Radha Bravo dear👏

Hi Jas, this is for you dear 😉, note for readers who want to know more about the characters.

I am absolutely not hurt at all, I like to exchange with my readers and I feel that I disapointed other with this chapter, anyway, I can explain why I choose this twist and not as you suggest. You will notice that in all my story, I always write what used to happen in their mind, the fight that they have between what they really want to do, what they should do and what finally they will do. And this chapter summarize exactly this way of thinking.

Fisrt, I will describe Zoya's psychology for this part : she took a decision that she rejected, as a mother and as woman, but she was force in some way or she choose the easy way, just to go with the flow and to protect her daughter, knowing that she will pay a lot : her family, her happiness and her love. Taking, this road, she choose to sacrifice many for one person. The price was expensive for her that what s make her hate herself, a lot. I can say to take such a big step, you must be crazy and mother are crazy (in a nice way of course). At the beginning of the story, she didn't estimate her woman part and she decided that she failed in it, but will never fail as mother. And that's why her decision was like this, and to precise, she took her daughter's side more than to go back to Sufian. But knowing Asad, he revealed in her, this part of woman, who was broken for years and he healed and gave her confidence with his love. At the end, it was like he put her in front of the mirror telling her : look how much you are beautiful. And as a woman, being beautiful is really important. In some way, he forced this woman to go out from where she was and to have equal voice as her motherhood (this can explain why she was selfish).

When in the car, she accepted to marry Sufian, I can garantee that no matter how much you are rebel or free in your mind, you will after sometimes succumb to the pressure, especially when you are weak and you felt alone and miserable. I can perfectly describe because it happens in real life. Living abroad, with tradition, slowly, she would have married Sufian. And like as he said, you decide to come with me and the marriage was predictable. And she knew it but lie to herself. When you give a bit, other will ask to give more.

Other point, when Zeenat said the last sentence, there was , for me, two hidden meaning. First, to show that no matter how they appreciate Asad, they will always love Zoya more, and if she decided to step in this road knowing exactly the consequences, she must be crazy or totally convinced. Giving another chance, it's really hard. Only your family will give you a lot of chance but in life, is often a second last chance. And the second meaning, it's that we will always be here only for you. When Zoya narrated her story to Asad, she precised that her family forced her to choose between Sufian and them, thinking that she will choose them naively, but the truth was not. Zeenat first time, didn't gave her a choice, but in this chapter, she told her that no matter all the wrong decision that she will take, they will be always forgiveness here for her and only love. Family are blessed always.

Coming to the part, that you didn't like. As I said, Zoya was in mess, she was rejected in some way by everyone (this is HER decision). How do you feel when nobody understand your decision ? When no one approve it and rejected it ? It happened in your life or other to feel alone and to have to fight to proove. And I can say it's really a painful battle. She felt alone and the only person who never judge her was Asad. She was selfish for sure, there was no doubt in it. Everyone pointed to the weakness of her woman side and the only person who love this part is Asad. She wanted to be love, knowing the pain, most of her life she lived in pain, it will change nothing for her. For Asad, I agree that he choose to quench his thirst, it was more animal than reason who talked here. But, maybe this is my weakness, I don't know what is to be a parent so I can not judge how deep this feeling can be and how strong it can be. All the feelings, that I describe, I went throught but this one, is a stranger for me. Asad and Zoya gave to their passion, knowing that when the sun will raise, they will come back as they were before, parents. So their responsabilities or their promess was still not broken. It was just man and woman who love each other and both were selfish. They felt helpless for all this mess, Zoya don't want to fight and Asad can't force her. They were weak and they made love. I don't say that making love makes you weak, but when you are desperate and feeling lonely, you are looking for someone who can tell you how much you are beautiful no matter how you are wrong. This phase in psychology is called regression. When you take your decision, you are an adult but you became scared or lost with the consequence, you just want to hide, and you became like a baby who need to be pampared, and this is what Zoya went through, she had a emotionnal regression and for a change, she needed someone and didn't want to be alone. I hope I explained all the point. I don't want to convince you at all, I just want to highlight my way to think.

Plz end this sad part And gave some happy lovely family scane,

Originally posted by: radadolcevida

Hi Jas, this is for you dear 😉, note for readers who want to know more about the characters.

I am absolutely not hurt at all, I like to exchange with my readers and I feel that I disapointed other with this chapter, anyway, I can explain why I choose this twist and not as you suggest.

Hi Rada 1st I m happy u didn't mind my POV , I wanted 2 know ur POV 4 why u took this route & I didn't wanted u 2 do any changes in story I just suggested d slap😆

You will notice that in all my story, I always write what used to happen in their mind, the fight that they have between what they really want to do, what they should do and what finally they will do. And this chapter summarize exactly this way of thinking.

Exactly I have noticed in last 2 stories its more or Asya's emotions that r highlighted their inner battle btw mind & heart

Fisrt, I will describe Zoya's psychology for this part : she took a decision that she rejected, as a mother and as woman, but she was force in some way or she choose the easy way, just to go with the flow and to protect her daughter, knowing that she will pay a lot : her family, her happiness and her love. Taking, this road, she choose to sacrifice many for one person. The price was expensive for her that what s make her hate herself, a lot. I can say to take such a big step, you must be crazy and mother are crazy (in a nice way of course). At the beginning of the story, she didn't estimate her woman part and she decided that she failed in it, but will never fail as mother. And that's why her decision was like this, and to precise, she took her daughter's side more than to go back to Sufian. But knowing Asad, he revealed in her, this part of woman, who was broken for years and he healed and gave her confidence with his love. At the end, it was like he put her in front of the mirror telling her : look how much you are beautiful. And as a woman, being beautiful is really important. In some way, he forced this woman to go out from where she was and to have equal voice as her motherhood (this can explain why she was selfish).

I m not questioning her decion why she chose Sarah over Asad any1 in her place would have done d same considering d woman she was in d start of d story it was just Sarah & her Asad came later & bcame her world but 4 her new found happiness she can't ignore her love & responsibility 2wards her child so there is no problem wid her choosing Sarah

When in the car, she accepted to marry Sufian, I can garantee that no matter how much you are rebel or free in your mind, you will after sometimes succumb to the pressure, especially when you are weak and you felt alone and miserable. I can perfectly describe because it happens in real life. Living abroad, with tradition, slowly, she would have married Sufian. And like as he said, you decide to come with me and the marriage was predictable. And she knew it but lie to herself. When you give a bit, other will ask to give more.

I have nothing 2 add I know this thing myself that's why I was appalled wid what she did

Other point, when Zeenat said the last sentence, there was , for me, two hidden meaning. First, to show that no matter how they appreciate Asad, they will always love Zoya more, and if she decided to step in this road knowing exactly the consequences, she must be crazy or totally convinced. Giving another chance, it's really hard. Only your family will give you a lot of chance but in life, is often a second last chance. And the second meaning, it's that we will always be here only for you. When Zoya narrated her story to Asad, she precised that her family forced her to choose between Sufian and them, thinking that she will choose them naively, but the truth was not. Zeenat first time, didn't gave her a choice, but in this chapter, she told her that no matter all the wrong decision that she will take, they will be always forgiveness here for her and only love. Family are blessed always.

Ok so this was something I didn't understood earlier thanx 4 clearing it dear

Coming to the part, that you didn't like. As I said, Zoya was in mess, she was rejected in some way by everyone (this is HER decision). How do you feel when nobody understand your decision ? When no one approve it and rejected it ? It happened in your life or other to feel alone and to have to fight to proove. And I can say it's really a painful battle. She felt alone and the only person who never judge her was Asad. She was selfish for sure, there was no doubt in it. Everyone pointed to the weakness of her woman side and the only person who love this part is Asad. She wanted to be love, knowing the pain, most of her life she lived in pain, it will change nothing for her. For Asad, I agree that he choose to quench his thirst, it was more animal than reason who talked here. But, maybe this is my weakness, I don't know what is to be a parent so I can not judge how deep this feeling can be and how strong it can be. All the feelings, that I describe, I went throught but this one, is a stranger for me. Asad and Zoya gave to their passion, knowing that when the sun will raise, they will come back as they were before, parents. So their responsabilities or their promess was still not broken. It was just man and woman who love each other and both were selfish. They felt helpless for all this mess, Zoya don't want to fight and Asad can't force her. They were weak and they made love. I don't say that making love makes you weak, but when you are desperate and feeling lonely, you are looking for someone who can tell you how much you are beautiful no matter how you are wrong. This phase in psychology is called regression. When you take your decision, you are an adult but you became scared or lost with the consequence, you just want to hide, and you became like a baby who need to be pampared, and this is what Zoya went through, she had a emotionnal regression and for a change, she needed someone and didn't want to be alone. I hope I explained all the point. I don't want to convince you at all, I just want to highlight my way to think.

Ithink since I don't know about psychology much I didn't get this whole scenario of mind's thinking ways but still I will b back 2morrow 2 read this reply again & than I will comnt on this last piece of ur comnt thanx 4 ur reply Rada it cleared few doubts & i'll go through last part 2morrow as I have 2 go now See u around & I m happy cuz ur r such a sweetheart TC 😊

Originally posted by: jas91

Ithink since I don't know about psychology much I didn't get this whole scenario of mind's thinking ways but still I will b back 2morrow 2 read this reply again & than I will comnt on this last piece of ur comnt thanx 4 ur reply Rada it cleared few doubts & i'll go through last part 2morrow as I have 2 go now See u around & I m happy cuz ur r such a sweetheart TC 😊

Like I always say you writing a good story, you know where you're going with this narrative, I see you have left a note, point fair made, life and its trials and tribulations aren't always black and white, these also fifty shades of grey. 😉

Originally posted by: p_s05

Like I always say you writing a good story, you know where you're going with this narrative, I see you have left a note, point fair made, life and its trials and tribulations aren't always black and white, these also fifty shades of grey. 😉

J'ai lu la 1ere partie je lirais la 2and plus tard Incha-Allah... Tellement emouvant, ma pauvre Zoya on dirait un automate, elle veut partir loin de tout 😭 ... La partie avec ses parents adoptifs etait trop emouvante, les larmes aux yeux ! Et la partie avec Dilsaad trop dure, elle a vraiment ete tres rude avec elle... Et les deux petits bouts qui ne comprennent rien a ces histoires d'adultes... Rha la la trop d'emotion

Je reviens plus tard pour commenter la 2eme partie, je ne sais pas du tout ce qui m'attend... Suspense suspense

Dans le mp tu dis qu'il y a une partie"mature" envoie je t'en prie 😳

Oh aussi j'irais lire ta nouvelle histoire quand j'aurais le temps Incha-Allah

I love this update...each and every characters feelings of pain and angst have been described beautifully...
I cried with all of them...

I hate Sufiyan he is so delusional...he's playing blind when he so knows love is Asya...
Please bring happy moments back soon...the poor little kiddies are suffering so much
I know Asya are suffering too but I can't bear seeing children hurting this way 😭

its a best update of dis story !! very strong one potryed everything very strongly wheather i.e kids frustration or elders everything vs perfect ... luvd Sarah's observation ability and salim truly behaved like boys ven dey got angry hats off to ur thinking + writing Rada !!!
I thought sufian vl realise his mistake ven he holds salim bt no I vs wrong he is vs and vl be a moron :/
Zoe boldness vs needed and it vs not at all out of place ...
watg fr next cheerful update bdw :)
update soon plz