New Asya SS: A gift from life, chap 15, 04-05-15 COMPLETED

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PrettYSmile

@PrettYSmile

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Posted: 10 years ago

#441

Yess!!...

I loved this chapter...what an emotional flow...
Cried with salim n asad...poor kid!...

Sufiyan is nothing but an egoistic jerk!!...

Update next part soon!!

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kobeb

@kobeb

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Posted: 10 years ago

#442

Wonderful as alwayss, keep up the hard work sista! :)

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Mayur Chan

@MayurChan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#443

Hey Rada...
Thanx for the PM...
Well this was a flawless and Excellent piece of writing...
Just hope that things start falling on the right place soon for them...
I am unable to arrange proper words...when I am more into the story...And now I am still under its effect...
As I was reading the update...I was having just one question...
Why..?
Why..?
Is this happening...?
Still Will be eagerly waiting for the next part...
Continue soonish..

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KeyaHira2

@KeyaHira2

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Posted: 10 years ago

#444

AAAHHH

OH MAH GOD

Im like exploding right here

Im speechless

🤗

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anopama

@anopama

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Posted: 10 years ago

#445

Res

Unres

Omg what can I say about this update

Finally got my quiet time to read

If I can give u an award I would well done bravo

U have it all nailed the sadness the pain the hurt the tears the angst

Then the love the passion the commitment the trust the pleasure

Loved it it started off sad but by the ending I was grinning from ear to ear

I felt for the kids they both lose something precious

Even though Sarah gain but she lost more

Poor Salim I felt for him all lies

Aww Asad pain he promised his son it will always be just us forever

Oh a part I love was at the beginning asad rubbing sufian nose in to it her love for him

And he can bet his life oh he made sufian fear

Sufian is a selfish ass no one ca tell me he is doing right he is just thinking of his self

Aww she kissed him to warm him but he left her she break down

Omg tht bas***d is thinking marriage 🤢

Glad Zoya left and her heart took her home

Love it after tht he sent her away but he couldn't see her leave

She faints he undress her eyes close awww

Then she offered herself and boy did he took it all

He definitely did all of it from head to toe every inch every cell

Aww she was pained at first but the harshness but she didn't complain

But then he took Mrs Khan with the only thing tht has been between them love

Nothing but pure and immense love

Love the multiplication table will try it ...lol

All night being love by the Man U love all night long no barriers no nothing just u and him

Haha it was funny her going home all daze loved it

Sufian is fuming his ego should run another man had her them an she loves

Can't wait for more

Comtinue soon

Edited by anopama - 10 years ago

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kaju27

@kaju27

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Posted: 10 years ago

#446

again crying crying and crying 😭
nobody is happy with zoya's decision not even sarah becoz she has to leave everyone behind...
sufiaan is just being selfish nd dont want to see past his illusion...i really wanted zeenath to slap him..
i agree with salim nobodody thought abt him...
well end was really a slap on sufian's face as asya cumsomated..really happy for that...i wonder what he will do now...
update next part soon like this one bt it should be end of sufian in that nd asya together...

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captjs

@captjs

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Posted: 10 years ago

#447

Please continue soon... one of the best stories i ve read in this forum... can't wait for the next update

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sj_qh_kabhi

@sj_qh_kabhi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#448

Omg..! You wrote this chapter so beautifully..!
I mean it had a perfect play of emotions.. do well described I vould feel zoya's and asad's pain..
I'm feeling so bad for zoya.. plz let sufian go away and let zoya feel happy.. she deserves it..!
Mind blowing update. . I so cant wait to read what will dufian do now.. hope he leaves..! Update soonish plzzz...!

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Sumi Roy

@LoveSonu2408

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Posted: 10 years ago

#449

lv it.u write all the emotions so well.asya's misery-thr love,its a realy emotional updt.& being a emotional person ths stry brought tears in my eyes.ur previous ss "the runway bride"-missing tht ss also.if u cn pl gv epilogue to tht ss.thnks 4 PM.continue soon.