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Posted: 10 years ago

Very wistful emotions Mahu..
touches deeply.

Can't wait to see what happens..
Sanam seems to be melting. .
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Posted: 10 years ago
This chapter was so good ! I really love the way Aahil takes every chance he got with sanam. The man is still in love and he wants an another chance.

Come on sanam let go of the past ! So stubborn like her mother lol

I really love the way you incorporate mixed feelings for both parties : anger, confusion, love, compassion... Simply beautiful !

I hope sanam will give them a chance : they clerly deserve their happy ending. Stop running and face your past!
Edited by evedallas1 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
That's awesome part loved it
Saahil feelings towards each other wow
San am is so stubborn and confused regarding her feelings that she can't think straight
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Happy to see that seehaan eagerly want saahil to reunite and doing their efforts for it
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Rehaan revealed lots of things related to past
Omg saahil on same place
I hope saahil reunite soon
Thanks for pm
Plz pm me for next part
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
First things first, a LONG chapter. Thanks a ton for it! Please keep it this length. :P And, I really loved this chapter. It had so much in it! Sanam, Aahil, Rehan and Seher... Everyone... Well. To start with, the scene in the restroom was very, very well edited. Crisp and to the point yet it was profound in its content. Both know that they feel something. Aahil knows Sanam feels something for him but refuses to accept. And they kissed. I should probably be jumping that they kissed and I am... But more than that, more than romantic or sexual, I think, what I felt in gallore here, was love, intense love... Passionate love... Okay. I am gonna post this. And make a new comment. From phone. :P Hope you dont mind...
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Posted: 10 years ago
One word missy wooow...what an update...mind blowing...emotional and apt ...Go I have to search for new adjectives for u
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Posted: 10 years ago

Oh...I love this chapter. It's so emotionally charged and so heavy on the heart 😭.

Very beautifully written 👍🏼.
I'm very curious and can't wait for the next update!
TQ for the pm!
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update..
Luved it..song selection at dargaah was beautiful it gives divine feeling..
Plz update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Yes, I am continuing... I really liked how Sanam responded to it. I mean, it showed that she still loved Aahil. Her body knew she belonged to Aahil. Yes, I didn't know they actually consummated. That was very nice and extremely sad at the same time.. They had made love, they knew they loved each other and they were separated. I would really like if you could put that in sometime? What actually happened then, and how SaHil felt terrible coz, they were actually a couple, yet separated. Your wish though... :) I so loved Aahil and Sanam and Rehan, Sanam upset with Seher, and Seher dejected too, since she wants Sanam happy... Aahil's monologue was awesome... Rehan hit a sixer... When he talked to Sanam... Loved the update!!!! Do update soon. <3
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Posted: 10 years ago
That was an amazing update
Ahil poured his heart out and finally Sanam is reacting
Rehan's words were definitely what nailed everything down for Sanam, what a great brother he is
Sanam wohoo she's finally giving in, love it
Thanks
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Posted: 10 years ago
Res... I need to gather my thoughts <3

Ures!

*sigh* This chapter was heavy and bursting with emotions! Sheer brilliance 👏 Really I needed some time to reread and take it all in, enjoying each part before actually commenting! Trust me, I loved it!

"You felt exactly what you're trying to cover up. Sanam I know you. I gave myself to you," he spoke with so many emotions attached to his shaking voice."

That was so touching! I love when he said, "I gave myself to you" That was beautiful! For a guy like Aahil who has been with numerous women, this means so much. They have all been with him at the physical level, but no one has touched him emotionally other than Sanam! She is the only one he has surrendered his heart and soul too! He belongs to her! He is safe only in her arms! The only woman he as ever made love to was Sanam! Beautiful 😭 The emotional feeling behind the physical act It means so much to him! Poor baby 😭


Aahil felt himself lean in as his mind began to get clouded. They were so close. So dangerously close.
"You want this as well, don't you?" Aahil spoke huskily.

Hawt ☺️ Its always dangerous when they get close 😉 The temperature gets very high 😆


"But I won't lose hope, because loosing hope would mean the end of us. I pray that love will remind you of what we had. I still hold on to that feeling. I won't let go, Sanam. I won't. I will prove myself to you that I am worthy of your love."

He stumbled back as his eyes glistered of unshed tears. "I only loved you, Sanam. And it shall remain that way."

I love Aahil ❤️ This part made me tear up so much 😭 No Aahil you can never lose hope! You can never let go 😭 This reminds me of whats coming on the show... His love is so pure ❤️ Yes Aahil prove it to her! Make her realize how deep your love is! Damn this was so so good!!! He only loved her and always will 😭 My SaHil feels!!! Love u so much for writing parts like this <3

I also loved the way u described how he reacted to the truth! Thats exactly how I expected him too! Very descriptive and well written! ⭐️ It was painful to read about the pain he went thru!!!

"I've seen him cry, Sanam. I always thought that no one could match my Bhai. But I was wrong. He met you, and fell in love. I've seen him stare at the moon every single night in the hope of you coming back to him. I've seen him cry in front of Allah. He has changed. Perhaps for the better, I don't know. All I do know is that he's in pain and he still misses his Begum."

Beautiful Yes Sanam, he needs you! He needs his Begum! Please go to him, heal all those wounds! Girl, notice all the signs! Even God wants you guys to be together! The dargah part was also beautiful I hope they get to talk!


This was so gorgeously written! You made me tear up in while reading this! So many emotions! Passion, pain, the need for each other!!! It was awesome!!! I cant praise u enuf! Cant wait for the next update, esp knowing what I know 😉 Ur too awesome girl 🤗 Plz update soon and thank u so much for this lovely update and the pm ❤️
Edited by Raingoddess - 10 years ago

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