AsYa SS: Epilogue Updated 1/15 Pg-37 - Page 17

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: asifiqbalsh

Nice update
Emotional reunion of mother daughter
Asya baby born & asad decided Ahsan as his name. Waiting for asad plan executed with the help of zeenat soon.
Thanks for pm



Thanks!!
Will continue soon
Special proposal coming soon 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: jas91

Baby boy is born🥳

Zeenat came & their reunoin was beautifully penned
Asad named him Ahsan lovely name
They r going 2 b engaged awe lovely😃



Yes!!
Thank youuu!
I know love that name
Yes special proposal coming soon 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: asyaa4ever221

Loved the update
Thanks for the Pm
Zeenat came an accepted zoya and Asad
Ahsan Ahmed Khan (love the name)
Zeenat and Asad making plans for marriage interesting
Overall wonderful update
Do PM me next update
Continue soon



Thanks!
Your welcome
Yes she did
Me too
Yes they are
Special proposal coming soon 😉
Thank youu
Sure
Will doo 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Aww reminds me of John
Yay
Finally theyre gonna get married
Whippee
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: KeyaHira2

Aww reminds me of John
Yay
Finally theyre gonna get married
Whippee



Yes it did!
Yes finally 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: -hotsauce-



Hey!
It's Hafsa but you call me whatever you like 😊
Thanks youuu!
Yes the reunion was emotional, had difficult writing it haha
Yes she did
Love that name
Yes now he is a father of child so he will have to stop
acting like a kid
Will do soon
This story will have an happy ending
The original story had so much drama and it critical situation that I didn't
add
I just wanted to focus on Asad and Zoya relationship and the baby
And no twist promise 😊


Helloo...Hafsa.. 😳
So it is nice that this will go on pretty easy without a twist...Anything with ASYA is win win for us...
Continue soon..
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: MayurChan


Helloo...Hafsa.. 😳
So it is nice that this will go on pretty easy without a twist...Anything with ASYA is win win for us...
Continue soon..



Yes!
I like to read happy and positive stuff
So decided to keep this simple
Will do soon 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Chapter 7

A week later...

Zoya came home with Asad; Zeenat had allowed Asad for now to take Zoya back to his house because they needed time to get used to the atmosphere and taking care of the baby. Zoya felt at ease being at home but she didn't know that she would be busier due to the baby.

Asad had taken care of baby, and let Zoya rest for a while. He was enjoying his time with his son, he felt blessed and lucky to have a child in life. He was whispering to the baby and saying sweet stuff to the baby.

A year later...

Asad had completed senior year, Graduation was tomorrow and Zoya had move back with her mom after getting the baby use to both the parents. They would still be together in school, because Zoya had join school and she would give the baby to Zeenat till she came back. Asad and Zoya were a hot couple and the girls would get jelouse and when they found out about that they had a baby together the girls would get in to fight with Zoya, saying that she is not even pretty to be with a hunk like Asad, but Asad always stood up for her, he promised her to keep her happy and never let her cry and he kept that promise. Ahsan had started walking and he would only say mii and paa.

Zoya was happy for last couple of day because she had heard Ahsan say the word "mii ing" (mi ring). Zoya had been pressuring Asad for a proposal but Asad told her that he didn't want to get married now, She would try to bribe him by having sex with him or anything that would make him agree on marrying her, but he would change the topic whenever she would talk about it, he want to surprise her and ask her at a time she would least expect it. She had been suspicious because Ahsan would talk about a ring.

It was Graduation day; Asad was getting ready in his gown. He was appointed to speak at graduation because he was a valedictorian. Asad had been the top student in his class, when Zoya found out she was really excited for him.

Flashback- Couple of days before Grad

One night Asad walked into the Zoya house, but she was in the bathroom and Ahsan was in the room playing with his toys, Asad walked up ho him and ahsan said "paaa" Asad took him in his lap and kissed his chubby cheeks "How is my baby doing, I have to show you something, promise me that you wont say anything to your mama, okay" Ahsan clapped his hands showing excitement, Zoya was still in the bathroom. Asad took out a velvet box from his pocket and showed Ahsan, he open the box and ahsan tried to grab it "hey hey buddy this is a ring for your mama, isn't in pretty just like her." Ahsan giggled and he put the ring back in his pocket when he heard a clicking sound. Zoya came out of the bathroom and Asad talking with his son, she smiled at them. Zoya walked to Asad and kissed him on the lips "Zoya what are you, Ahsan is right here." "Come on he is young he doesn't know what all of this is." Ahsan crawled out the room and just Zeenat walked in she took Ahsan in her arms and told zoya that she should spend some time with Asad. Zoya smiled at her, she went to her with Ahsan and Asad got up and closed the door, he came back to zoya and took her in a hug, she wrapped her hands around his neck and hugged him back. "Zoya, Im the valectedetorain in my class and I'm going to speak to the parents and student, imp nervous." "Don't worry, imp so happy for you don't worry ill be there sitting in the front row." Asad smiled at her and kissed her "Thank you, love you." "Love you too".

End of Flashback

Zoya was getting ready, she wore a black knee length dress and she had light make up, Zeenat came in her room and told her to put a little more make on and she wanted to tell her to change her dress but she didnt want to be obvious, She knew what was going to happen today she was excited, Zoya was finally getting her wish.

Ahsan, Zoya and Zeenat got to the school, they went in to auditorium and it was decorated beautifully. She went up to the front row and sat down. Her phone vibrated, she took her phone and saw a message from Asad it said

Asad: I love you

Zoya smiled at the text and she texted him back

Zoya: I love you tooo, good luck I'm here with you.

Asad smiled at his phone, he was preparing his speech, and he took out the ring from his pocket and said "It is finally time Zoya, you will be mine forever."

I know I said I would update after 45 likes but, I will be busy for next two weeks and then my classes will be starting and being a IT major I have a hectic schedule. Thanks for the wonderful comments. Please press the like button and comment on this update as well :D

I am starting an another AsYa story and that is going to be an FF, That is a story of AsYas journey rom Engagment to wedding. Should post it soon when i get couple of chapter written down, hope you guys like that story as well 😃

Next Update: 45+ likes

Edited by -hotsauce- - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Res
unres...

Good job Dear👏

Ahsan Asad Ahmed Khan... wah kia naam hai... 😳😆

AsYa were tooo cute as always

Wohooo proposal coming up🥳

waiting eagerly for the next update😃

Update soonish...😉
Edited by yumna.imad - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Love the update
U always stop when we get to the good parts
So Asad turned out to be an amazing father he took care of his baby as zoya recover
Then she move back with her ammi
So he did not propose right away I thought he was going to
But he waited until he finished school so nice
So a year passed Asad abt to graduate he is valedictorian wow
Tht was a surprise I never knew he was a good student
So all the girls r jealous of zoya and fights with her but she has her knight
So is Asad gonna propose to her on the stage after his speech
Can't wait for his speech is he going to like talk of his life his family
Can't wait but have too 😭
So a new story yay
Once it is asya I am there waiting
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