#2||AsYa FF: Strings, Tying Us Together||CH Twenty Five(B) ~Pg 146

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AditiJ

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Posted: 10 years ago

#581

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Abi

@-ABI-

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Posted: 10 years ago

#582

unres
WOW Aditi it was a emotional, plus a bit funny&absolutely Awesome Update

Well I am glad there is another Chatterbox; Hina who can give a good competition to Zoya(though I doubt,if anyone can win Zoya) 🤣lol

Mother&Son scene are emotional

&
about Zoya&Aseemah being related to eachother
(a suggestion for a future track)
How about Zoya&Aseemah a long lost twin sisters;
Aseemah death wasn't a accident but was a pre-planned murder&Aseemah's killer trying to kill Zoya assuming her to be Aseemah.
Asad comes to know about it
(Aditi atleast give this Idea a thought)

I l❤️ve the whole update&enjoied it alot
"CONTINUE SOON"

Edited by -ABI- - 10 years ago

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Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#583

very well written update..thank you for the PM..👍🏼

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Divya.S.R

@Divya.S.R

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Posted: 10 years ago

#584

Loved the update.. Like how your gradually bringing in the doubt of aseemah and zoya being related.. 👏

Also the anguish and turmoil in both their minds and heart was fabulous aditi...

Waiting for them both to realise their unnamed feelings and also how asad would react to his recent discovery of her smile being similar to that of aseemah.. 😃

BTW.. Good example with the dhoom 3.. 😉😆

Sorry for the delayed and short comment..😳

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jottjott

@jottjott

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Posted: 10 years ago

#585

nice update...zoya and aseemah might be twins thats interesting!!!

thanks for the PM

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Arpita_Mirage

@Arpita_Mirage

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Posted: 10 years ago

#586

Awesome
Yeh twins ka baat toh mere man me pehle se hi tha ..
I hope everything will be fine and they realise their feelings
Continue soon
soon means really soon not like this update...😊

Edited by ammusjyoti - 10 years ago

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Gulaabo

@Gulaabo

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#587

heavy duty update...
full of emotions
continue soon
p.s- Abhi thodi kanjusi...time nai hai na...maaf kar de!

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Abi

@-ABI-

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#588

unresserved on page:87
2nd comment after Chapter-20😉

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A.S.K

@ToughStuff

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Posted: 10 years ago

#589

Awesome update!! emotional!!! HINA! kahin DM toh nahi! So Are Aseemah and Zoya related??! Agar related hue toh kya hoga!!!!!! me will be inactive till April !! let the PMS coming in!