OS: His Sparkling Eyes (Note page 10) - Page 10

Originally posted by: SmileyStar

Hello Everyone!

I can see everyone's seething with anger at me for killing Asad 😆 BUT the story had a lesson in it. Under 18 people shouldn't be allowed to drive 🤣

And people you have to realize that as Najma123 pointed it out in plain words, 'The impact of this story lies in Asad's death.' I planned that I wanted to write a story in which Asad died at the end and then I wrote this accordingly. So Asad kay bachnay kay tou chances hi nahi the to be honest 😆 (Whoever has watched Pyare Afzal can place the blame on that drama because though it made me cry buckets, it also made me appreciate tragic endings because they stay with you longer than happier endings 😆)

And people I have another tragic OS in mind, something I've had sketched in my head and it looks pretty good (I'm pretty excited about penning it down too) but all your sadness has me worried. Should I pen it or not? 😕 Will you people like to read it??!

Please don't ask me to write a happier one instead because this sad one won't let me write anything until its on the paper and out of my head 😆

Originally posted by: SmileyStar

Hello Everyone!

I can see everyone's seething with anger at me for killing Asad 😆 BUT the story had a lesson in it. Under 18 people shouldn't be allowed to drive 🤣

And people you have to realize that as Najma123 pointed it out in plain words, 'The impact of this story lies in Asad's death.' I planned that I wanted to write a story in which Asad died at the end and then I wrote this accordingly. So Asad kay bachnay kay tou chances hi nahi the to be honest😆 (Whoever has watched Pyare Afzal can place the blame on that drama because though it made me cry buckets, it also made me appreciate tragic endings because they stay with you longer than happier endings 😆)

And people I have another tragic OS in mind, something I've had sketched in my head and it looks pretty good (I'm pretty excited about penning it down too) but all your sadness has me worried. Should I pen it or not? 😕 Will you people like to read it??!

Please don't ask me to write a happier one instead because this sad one won't let me write anything until its on the paper and out of my head 😆

Originally posted by: princess101

RES

OMG UR BACK IM SO HAPPY GLAD TO SEE U BACK 😃

OMG that was amazing so much I loved it

BUT...

I WANT ANOTHER PART PLEASEEE

It is a request please give it another part please

where Asya reunite pretty please Fari pleaseee

P.S I just noticed how both are names are so similar

My name is Faria and loads of my friends call me Fari to 😃

All i have to say is that it's one of the beautifullest story i read in a while.

Fari di u should pen down that os u r talking about .

Originally posted by: SmileyStar

Hello Everyone!

I can see everyone's seething with anger at me for killing Asad 😆 BUT the story had a lesson in it. Under 18 people shouldn't be allowed to drive 🤣

And people you have to realize that as Najma123 pointed it out in plain words, 'The impact of this story lies in Asad's death.' I planned that I wanted to write a story in which Asad died at the end and then I wrote this accordingly. So Asad kay bachnay kay tou chances hi nahi the to be honest 😆 (Whoever has watched Pyare Afzal can place the blame on that drama because though it made me cry buckets, it also made me appreciate tragic endings because they stay with you longer than happier endings 😆)

And people I have another tragic OS in mind, something I've had sketched in my head and it looks pretty good (I'm pretty excited about penning it down too) but all your sadness has me worried. Should I pen it or not? 😕 Will you people like to read it??!

Please don't ask me to write a happier one instead because this sad one won't let me write anything until its on the paper and out of my head 😆

Aww u nailed it girl!!! 👏 such an awesome os I don't know about sparks in asad's eyes but this story surely have some sparks 😳 the ending is so touching 😭 imagining asad's death is hard n sad but may be its the reason which makes dis story more beautiful n amazing!!
I so love ur writing n looking forward for more of ur magic!!
Love yah!!! 😳 😉

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