OS: His Sparkling Eyes (Note page 10) - Page 9

Originally posted by: SmileyStar

Hello Everyone!

I can see everyone's seething with anger at me for killing Asad 😆 BUT the story had a lesson in it. Under 18 people shouldn't be allowed to drive 🤣

And people you have to realize that as Najma123 pointed it out in plain words, 'The impact of this story lies in Asad's death.' I planned that I wanted to write a story in which Asad died at the end and then I wrote this accordingly. So Asad kay bachnay kay tou chances hi nahi the to be honest😆 (Whoever has watched Pyare Afzal can place the blame on that drama because though it made me cry buckets, it also made me appreciate tragic endings because they stay with you longer than happier endings 😆)

And people I have another tragic OS in mind, something I've had sketched in my head and it looks pretty good (I'm pretty excited about penning it down too) but all your sadness has me worried. Should I pen it or not? 😕 Will you people like to read it??!

Please don't ask me to write a happier one instead because this sad one won't let me write anything until its on the paper and out of my head 😆

I really loved dis one.. it was something different. .
Ya another sad os is welcomed. .
Nd after that a happy one as well...;)

Jee go a head... Aur rulayiye Hume...
:'( :'( :'(

Bas u hv to promise us u ll start new ff :-*
Pretty plz... Plz start a new story...

Amazing OS Fari dii! :D

aap likho!
but i m nt going to read it!!
as i have said earlier too !!
Sad stories and sad endings depress me!!

I come here read here happy stories just to escape from the harsh realities of life not to read realities here too!!
Sorry if i hurt ur feelings but i can't bear it!!

Originally posted by: SmileyStar

Hello Everyone!

I can see everyone's seething with anger at me for killing Asad 😆 BUT the story had a lesson in it. Under 18 people shouldn't be allowed to drive 🤣

And people you have to realize that as Najma123 pointed it out in plain words, 'The impact of this story lies in Asad's death.' I planned that I wanted to write a story in which Asad died at the end and then I wrote this accordingly. So Asad kay bachnay kay tou chances hi nahi the to be honest😆 (Whoever has watched Pyare Afzal can place the blame on that drama because though it made me cry buckets, it also made me appreciate tragic endings because they stay with you longer than happier endings 😆)

And people I have another tragic OS in mind, something I've had sketched in my head and it looks pretty good (I'm pretty excited about penning it down too) but all your sadness has me worried. Should I pen it or not? 😕 Will you people like to read it??!

Please don't ask me to write a happier one instead because this sad one won't let me write anything until its on the paper and out of my head 😆

So true.
Tragic endings have such an impact in them and while I still hate you for killing Asad ;) I dont want a second part cause it would spoil it. I really loved this one.. all these feels.
Just the way I loved Dastaan.
I really gotta watch Pyare Afzal..

Hey dear I would love to read your work on asya.

Wonderful OS
Zoya always ready for excuses for being late
Asad sparkled eyes took her attention & she love it.
Ending was sad.
Thanks for pm

another sad one? Hmm ok

Originally posted by: SmileyStar

Hello Everyone!

I can see everyone's seething with anger at me for killing Asad 😆 BUT the story had a lesson in it. Under 18 people shouldn't be allowed to drive 🤣

And people you have to realize that as Najma123 pointed it out in plain words, 'The impact of this story lies in Asad's death.' I planned that I wanted to write a story in which Asad died at the end and then I wrote this accordingly. So Asad kay bachnay kay tou chances hi nahi the to be honest 😆 (Whoever has watched Pyare Afzal can place the blame on that drama because though it made me cry buckets, it also made me appreciate tragic endings because they stay with you longer than happier endings 😆)

And people I have another tragic OS in mind, something I've had sketched in my head and it looks pretty good (I'm pretty excited about penning it down too) but all your sadness has me worried. Should I pen it or not? 😕 Will you people like to read it??!

Please don't ask me to write a happier one instead because this sad one won't let me write anything until its on the paper and out of my head 😆

Red : I agree with you on this...

My favorite piece by you. ❤️ But I won't say anything more because it was too sad. 😭

Beautifully tragic and an amazing OS. :)

-Fari.