OS: His Sparkling Eyes (Note page 10) - Page 8

Originally posted by: ankiecool

go ahead dear aur rula lo hame
but pehle ek promise karna hoga ki usk baad ek happy ending wala os bhi milega!

Originally posted by: SmileyStar

Hahaha you're making me feel zalim zalim 😆

I'll try writing a happy one after that. But when I can't say because abhi meray mind mein bus sad sad OS hi hain 😆

Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty

Pyaare afzal..

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Originally posted by: ankiecool

Hahaha zalim lol
its okie first sad wale ko bahar nikalo n pen it down!
btw my name is Ankita sen gupta
i m from India n 19 years old
socha apna introduction de dun

Originally posted by: SmileyStar

Thank you for appreciating my work sweets! 😳 And yes same here, of course I love happy endings but sometimes sad endings bhi dil jeet laiti hain :') 😆

Originally posted by: SmileyStar

Okay I'll pen it down in the first opportunity I get Insha'Allah! And will keep my fingers crossed that people will like it 😆

And sure I'll send you a PM. You're on my buddy list right? 😳

Originally posted by: p_s05

Reserved!

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Unreserved!

Wow, an OS! This was a pleasant surprise. 😃

"Zoya Farooqi would never find out that his eyes sparkled only while looking at her..."

This is injustice! 🥺

But

Like you stated, tragic endings are more likely remembered for a longer time than happier ones' I coincidentally completed James Patterson's novel "First Love" today and it holds truth particularly if it were a lesson learned or a life changing experience gained.

I presumed Asad lied about the breakdown, and his reaction to them waiting along with him confirmed the lie, which in the context of the entire fiction, playing the "rebellious brat" was so damn sweet. Zoe as the average teen was perfectly written - I really loved your depiction of her, it kind of played before my brains' eye, like a video would.

An exceptional piece of literature!

Another fiction, I would read it if you promise to write fluffy fiction with them as parents afterwards. ☺️

Originally posted by: SmileyStar

I haven't read this novel you're talking about. Is it good? Because if it is, I'd like to give it a try some day 😃

I wouldn't categorize it as exceptionally but definitely worth a read. It's a story based on a battle lost to #Cancer and the #CarpeDiem approach.

I try to write as close to reality and as close to the character as I can. Nice to hear I achieve it to certain extent 😉

And it's this element that creates a pleasurable read.

And have I ever told you that your comments are among my favorites? Seriously I SO love them especially since you point out exactly what you liked 😳

I'm honoured, a select few writers here like yourself inflate my ego. Though I'm humbled, really! 😳

I never replied to all the comments on the last chapter of my FF but I do know that yours was definitely one of the most cherished ones. Thank you so much for them 🤗

You are most welcome, you certainly deserve commend for your writing. I know I have said this before, but you really are one of my favourite writers from the select few I have on the forum. Over a year ago, your OS's of AsYa as parents had me fanatical about your writing, since then following your work. And there is just one other writer that writes AsYa as parents just as fluffily and feathery as you do.

Love and Best Wishes!

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