SS: The Mark of Innocence II - Ch 9 Pg 109 COMPLETED

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nilusoni

@nilusoni

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Posted: 10 years ago

#131

Wow awesome part

Well this story is really making me excited in every part

Excited for zoya's entry

Thanks for pm

Plz pm me for next part

Continue soon

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aseela sha

@aseelashah

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#132

Wow Saima i am so excited to read further

Its so thrilling dear

I love it so so much

Pls update soon

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Prazeena Bhattarai

@Aneezarp27

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+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#133

Aww...that was lovely!

Okay so the commando's alive. And he's finding and killing them. Ahh! It's impressive that the 4 out of 6 are from the same group.

Zoya , a fashion designer. ZAZA..aww...as in Zoya-Asad-Zack-Ayesha! I'm fangirling over their bonding!

Zack-Zoya
Ayesha-Asad
(Bro-sis) bond and the criss'cross, their love interest. Awww!

Beautiful.
I'm in love with this!

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BurstingBubble

@BurstingBubble

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#134

Res
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Unres

Sorry for being sooo late

Awesome Chapter

I'm loving this a lot..

Oh God! Suzy😆 Her convo with Asad was Adorable

As soon as I opened the door I froze, I couldn't believe it was them, without wasting a second more I crashed into him, if I knew how to cry I certainly would be. I looked up at Ayesha who gave me a heart warming smile before she came up to me and embraced me 'Bhaijaan...I can't...' She really couldn't bring herself to speak as she was overwhelmed with emotion. Hayyyee... Such a beautiful and a heart-warming reunion😳

I'm loving the bond they share..

'Got her' Feeling soo happy after reading this

..for Zack his sister was finally found for me, well it was the girl that dominated the one thing that kept me alive, my heart. Lovely lines

This Story is sooo interesting

Loved the Update

Off to the next one😃

Edited by BurstingBubble - 10 years ago

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Lasya Adiraj

@KSGmaniac_24579

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#135

It was awesome don't feel bad...

But I actually like it a bit more than the previous TMI 😛

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Priya_KABHI

@PriyaKABHI

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#136

Thanks for PM.

It was Very Interesting part.

Zack and Ayesha found Zoya,it was very Interesting.😊

The feelings of Asad(KSG) for knowing about Zoya was so nicely explained.😊

Commando was alive and killings one by one,it was sacred.

Zoya was Fashion designer,it was very nice.

Waiting for Zoya's Entrance and her story.😊

Please Update Next part soon,I am waiting here.

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(MISSING ASAD(KSG) and ASYA(KABHI) Very Much)

PriyaCherry.

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jazsidhu

@jazsidhu

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#137

Wonderfull n fabulous...
luv it...
they found her...
Its very interesting...
beautifully written...

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Hafsa

@hafsaraza

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#138

yay! they found zoya now can't wait to read what happens next and when zoya and Asad come face to face update soon and also update ARL please with cherry on top thanks haha 😊

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anopama

@anopama

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#139

Love the update

Saima u always amaze me as a writer

In tpm I go crazy for tht asad and zoya and the way they fought for what they wanted and believe in

In arl I am so getting hooked on it now and feeling bad for asad and hoping zoya get her happiness

Now in tmi 2 is like wow loving this new story can't wait for AZ01&AZ04 to come together

Love the last line she is the girl tht rules the thing tht is keeping him alive his heart

Nice to see the family reunion Ayesha is too cute and dangerous

So they plan to eliminate commando bfore he does Payback is a bitch

Oh asad is over joy zoya is found

A fashion designer love the name of her company

Continue soon

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A.S.K

@ToughStuff

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#140

Superb update!!! Asad met Zack and Ayesha!!! They are trying to find Zoya!!! Commando is Alive and hunting them!! Only six are alive. 4 are these who are remaining 2?? Zoya a fashion designer!!! Waiting for Zoya' s side of story!!! hope no dark past except they were trained to kill and killed people!!

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