SS: The Mark of Innocence II - Ch 9 Pg 109 COMPLETED

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ChocoBerry

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Posted: 10 years ago

#121

Originally posted by: yumna.imad
Res for Chocoberry Di, Bano , Ankie ,Niyu, and Sunny ❤️

Thank you Yumna darling 🤗

Sis... one word...M.I.N.D.B.L.O.W.I.N.G.

AM in love again

Want the next part soon 😛😉

Do I still need to say that I loved it???

Love you Sis. MWAH 🤗

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Alone111

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Posted: 10 years ago

#122

Saimaaa... I LOVE DIS STORY...

Damn damn damn... Its so intrstnggg...

Mujhe ek Aur chahiye...

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rajsmi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#123

Oh...interesting, thrilling!!

Loved the 2 chapters :-) Nice to see you back in full swing!

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Gourav

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Posted: 10 years ago

#124

Awesome Update...👏

Just Love It...😊

Every Scene Is Mind-Blowing...👍🏼

Update Next Part Super Soon...😃

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sasir

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Posted: 10 years ago

#125

aww

loved it

awesome

very intriguing

cant wait for next update

u r d best di

plz update soon

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Mayur Chan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#126

Salaam Saima Aapi...a well written update...ahh...the friends reunion is always a emotional treat...now Ayesha has almost tracked down Zoya...will be interesting to see how they finally find her and their confrontation...continue soon.

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farz_parachute

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Posted: 10 years ago

#127

WOAHH!!!

The three uniting and having found Zoya!

Now...does Zoya remember them!

Like Asad asked, why hasn't she come to him...

Can't wait to hear her story!!!!!

Great update!

Mwah!

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Aishwarya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#128

Wow.. Js no words to describe how good it is
The 3 of dem met.. Family reunion
Commando is alive n wanna kill dem.. Bt Y, what harm dey r to him now
N oopsiee my zoya is finally in d picture, shez traced n is a fashion designer.. Can't wait fr d moment when dey all will meet, specially asya
After so so sooo long
Plz do bring her in a person soon

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jas91

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Posted: 10 years ago

#129

Oh man Sam di what an updt👏

Its just nail biting till d end😉

Right mix of suspense & thrill👏👏

how do u manage 2 make me love ur works😊

So Zack Ayesha came back cuz they found clue of Zoya😊

Comando is alive & is killing all i m dead scared 4 this family

Ayesha had found Zoya & they r happy 4 reunion😃

I m gonna read this story holding my breadth😆

wish they hunt Comando instead & kill him 😡

This time i m attached all 4 of them & will feel sad if anybody will die.

I pray 4 there safety lolz look Sam di stories main bhi kitni crazyily involve ho jati hun main😆

btw forgot 2 mention loved his scene wid Suzy😛

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Prashni Singh

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Posted: 10 years ago

#130

Reserved!

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Unreserved!

"There was no measuring of how fast my heart beat, I found myself struggling to breathe Zack and Ayesha were coming, and they knew where Zoya was. After 15 years my family were going to come back together again."

The reunion of his family - Wonderful, that scene was soo palpable. I forgot to state this after the first chapter but its more appropriate now, another Zack, who is similar to "The Perfect Misfit's" one, this characters' really charming!

'Zack...if Zoya had been living here in this very city...why has she never come to me?'

Zoe has been in the same city, I guess she doesn't remember the past, thus the "mark of innocents" shall be rediscovered.

"...for Zack his sister was finally found for me, well it was the girl that dominated the one thing that kept me alive, my heart."

This is so exhilarating!

Edited by p_s05 - 10 years ago