Haath chodiye AAHIL.. mein SANAM nahi hoon.part 7 updated PAGE 11

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INDEX:
PART1: PAGE 1
PART 2: PAGE 3
PART 3: PAGE 5
PART 4 : PAGE 7
PART 5 : PAGE 9
PART 6: PAGE 10
PART 7: PAGE 11


This is my frst complete OS...
SANAM-AHIL, SUNEHRI-REHAAN r postive characters here..!!

Sunehri from when she entered ibrahim mansion afta d swap track happend.. felt dat she has a connection wid dis house n ppl.. she strtd feeling guilty dat she is betraying a man who workships his wife more than his life and also rehaan d only guy who understood Sunehri in whole her life and also d only person she loved...REHAAN..!!!

Sunehri strtd thinking in her mind: rehaan.. hw could u not recognise me wen i was rite in front f u.. in d past..u said u would neva leave me... u loved me n eva proposed me.. was our love so much weak dat u couldnt recognise me??..eva wen i was standing rite in front f u... nd wht was description u said abt me thinking dat i was sanam.. dat i betrayed u..n u were happy dat nw im nt in ur life??? did i really betray u?? u will eva knw dat.. u r d nly man i din con in my whole life..!!! do u atleast knw d reason why i din con u?? becozz u r d nly person who understood me..cared fr me.. saved me frm d goons.. nd d main reason.. i loved u...

Now..sunehri started thinking abt ahil n sanam... bappa..!!how will feel ahil wen will realise dat it was actually me in place f sanam... he may feel bad bad in d same way i did. how gud sanam must have been..dat ahil luvs her to d core.. sunehri remembered d hospital incident were sanam was crying on d bed fr aahil.. d way ahil treats me thinking im sanam it self says dat sanam was a heart of gold... it seems sanam was definetly a gud n kind hearted person.. bt i don understand y dat begum sahiba n her gang, razia r behind her...is it fr d property..??? d property for which i came here..??

i already made a mistake by not saying my feelings to rehaan..before d police caught me.. so bappa.. nw if i countinue to act as sanam.. i going to break hearts f many more.. i can only do d work which my heart allows me to do.. nw i cnt carry dis guilt any more.. wht is gng to happen will happen.. i don knw hw rehaan will react dis time.. im nt gng to make any delay now.. i have to say d truth to rehaan n save sanam frm d witch razia...

Sunehri finally found rehaan in his room.. she quickly came inside.. and strd convo with rehaan ..

Su: rehaan, i need to speak to u rite nw..!!! Plzz listen to me...
R: ya sanam.. what is d matter.. i too feel dat u seem disturbed frm d past few dayss.. is everyding alrite between u and ahil bhai..??
su: rehaan , actually i should have said this to u long time ago.. bt...
she stopped wen dey both heard aahil's voice calling "sanam..."
aahil stormed inside d room.. and asked WHAT both f dem wht dey were doing.. actually he was a bit angry nd jealous to c both f dem together,, mainly bcoz he felt sanam is nt behaving properly wid him afta d kohinoor event
ahil din listen to wht suNehri nd rehaan were trying to explain him.. he dragged Sunehri by her arm,, and started walking wid sunehri behind HIM...
sunehri asked him many times.. to leave her hand.. bt he was adamant... he was hurt coz he couldnt c his wife.. wid som1 else.. nd specially in d situation when his wife was nt close to him and is behaving weirdly wid him..nd was in rehaan's room..
finally sunehhri spoke up...

su: HAATH CHODIYE AHHIL..!!!
MEIN SANAM NAHIN HOON..!!!

...to b continued..!!!



okiee hw was d OS??? should i post d reamining parts??Plzz do comment

d future track--- sunehri reveals her identity-- razia's plan out--- ahil,rehaan save sanam--razia attacks sunehri--SAHIL n SEHAAN REUNION--SAHIL'S RE-NIKAAH-- SEHAAN'S NIKAAH-- BILLI killed her plan backfired on her-- REHAAN FORGIVEN BY AHIL-- SUNEHRI ACCEPTED BY KHANS N IBRAHIMS
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Posted: 10 years ago
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that was nyce
i loved that sunheri/sehar actually came to tell rehan truth and she wants to say truth
she love rehan so yeah i want sehan to be togther and you to post rest of parts please

if you do send pms then plz do pm me
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Originally posted by: snehalovegurti

that was nyce

i loved that sunheri/sehar actually came to tell rehan truth and she wants to say truth
she love rehan so yeah i want sehan to be togther and you to post rest of parts please

if you do send pms then plz do pm me


thnqq... i will post fr sure...!!!!...🤗
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Originally posted by: asyaian


thnqq... i will post fr sure...!!!!...🤗


and i will wait for sure 😉 🤗
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Awesome...you should post the remaining parts soon...
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Interesting! Do continue soon...😃
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very nice.. please continue soon
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Can't wait to read more and I loved this Sunehri! Update soon, please
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Part-2

Su:Haath chodiye ahil..mein sanam nahin hoon...!!

A: Sanam, khuda kheliye stop playing games..!!!

su: Ahil,mein saach bol rahin hoon.. im nt sanam..

Ahil thinks now sanam strtd a new game again n is being mischeavous..

A: okie.. ur nt sanam.. den who r u??

Su: ahil im serious nw..im nt Sanam..!!!

now ahil understands d seriousness f d situation n remembers hw differently sanam ws behaving afta d kohinoor event n leaves her hand.. rehaan is also present dere.. he wonders whether d girl in front him is sanam or sunehri or an entirely new gal...

Su: Im d person who is entirely diff frm ur wife..a kid's life should be spent wid her family..but, im d one whose childhood was spent in slumps.. who ate food frm garbage to survive.. i lived my entire life as an orphan.. i dnt knw y my parents left me.. i donno if dey r alive or dead.. i wonder if i have a family waiting fr me.. i din eva have a single person to eva name me..:'(.

Dere were almost tears in ahil's n rehaan's eyes..!!!both f dem remebered deir child hood too..
ahil thought dat though his child hood was also troubled.. he atleast had proper food n education.. eva rehaan thought dat though his own ammi left him in orphanage.. he neva starved n reecived luv n affection frm orphanage ppl..

Su:one day i cudnt find food in garbage too.. so i saw a shop near by nd took a bun from dere..!!
bt ppl called me "THIEF" coz i din pay moneyy ..!!! hw cn ppl terma hungry kid as thief.. i din knew dat if eating food from a shop n leaving wid out paying money is called theft.. dere ws no one to eva gimme food to eat or teach me wht is right n wrongg..

Slowly i understood dat dere is no food fr me to eat ..n to buy food i need money..!! .. ppl already strtd calling me thief wen was six.. so i decided to become a con woman for money.coz dis is wht i knew..!!. i looted d rich ppl.. wid d help of my bappa..n a priest frm a temple named me SUNEHRI..!!!

(now sunehri saw rehaan n strtd speaking again wiping her tears..:(..)

I looted many ppl.. including ur home..aahil... Dere is nly a single person i din loot in my life.. bcoz he ws d only person who din see me as conwoman.. he saw me as a WOMAN..he cared fr me.. loved me..n most imp thing "HE BELIEVED IN ME" which noone did in my entire life.. I realised dat i too have a peroson who loves "me"..n shares his sorrows wid me..!! I prayed to god dat i would stop conning ppl n change into a entirely new human being n strt a new life wid him..

But, fate again played a entirely different game wid me.. before i could say my truth n feelings to d nly person i luvd.. he came to knw dat im a conwoman..he felt dat i cheated him.. n said me to go away frm his life.. yes i was a conwoman.. bt he neva gave me a chance and din ask me y I became conwoman?? I dont say dat he is wrong in beleving to wht other ppl said.. because dat was d truth..I ROBBED ppl.. if nly he asked me d reason..:( I understood dat love n care doesnt exist in my life..fate wants me to be conwoman again.. den i met razia bi who stays in ur house.. she offered me money to act as ur wife sanam.. bt trust me i only acted as sanam,, bt neva tried to take sanam's place.. slowly, i realised hw important sanam is in ur life, how much u love her...wen eva u looked into my eyes n proposed to sanam.. my heart was filled up wid more n more n guilt... I realised hw good natured sanam was n hw much u lov ur wife..!! LOVE neva remained in my life completely.. u n sanam r so lucky dat u bth luv each other so much,,!!!

Though im conwoman..i too have a heart.. i only do d work which my heart allows me to do..I Dont want to hide d truth any more from u.. i want to b gulit ridden..

Su: Ahil i can jst leave away frm here widout saying u all this.. but, i want u to know y im saying all dis to u.. i already saw u and sanam wen u were admitted in d hospital.. d way she cared for u.. n how much she loved u.. i cant cheat u n sanma anymore..!!.. bt lemme make something clear to u.. while i was acting as sanam i found dat. ..u n rehaan r d only ppl who respect sanam in dis house... begum sahiba, khala n khalu tried to kill me may times thinking dat I was sanam.. She tried to separate u n sanam many times..also,Ur mom tried to kill sanam on d kohinoor day event afta sanam signed pprs.. bt luckily i was in sanam's place dat day.. n saved my self..
its upto u to decide whether u believe me or not..!!!!.. bt im am going to stay from Ibrahim manison frm nw.. n ahil dat witch razia knws where ur wife Sanam is..!!..

I dont eva hav a right to ask u ppl to forgive me..Bt i pray to BAPPA dat u will get ur sanam back...n remian together foreva..

to b continued...!!!

plzzz do comment...:)

d future track--- ahil,rehaan save sanam--razia attacks sunehri--SAHIL n SEHAAN REUNION--SAHIL'S RE-NIKAAH-- SEHAAN'S NIKAAH-- BILLI killed as her plan backfired on her-- REHAAN FORGIVEN BY AHIL-- SUNEHRI ACCEPTED BY KHANS N IBRAHIMS

Edited by asyaian - 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: zynia890

Awesome...you should post the remaining parts soon...


thnq..im almost done wid d part-3...:)..

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