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jas91

@jas91

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+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#91

Sorry 4 d short comnt this time😳

But wanna tell u this was my fvrt updt of this story

Loved every bit of it 😃

its Brilliant part Anju👏

D date❤️, d teasing😉, d confessions 2 there steaming kisses☺️

Freaking i just love this updt

fluff fluff fluff I love fluff

Loved Asad's cuteness😆, Zoya's subconscious as always 😆😉

& d pics of Asad's apartment & that room he decorated was just mesmerizing I want 2 do my room like that😆

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BurstingBubble

@BurstingBubble

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Posted: 10 years ago

#92

When do we get an update ? Pls update sooon I'm waitinggg

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thefangirllife

@thefangirllife

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Posted: 10 years ago

#93

Sings:

Where'd youuu gooo?

I misss youuu sooo

Seems like it's beeen foreverrr

That you've been goneee

I know you're probably busy since you do like a bazillion things, but please update soon ❤️

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canoodle

@canoodle

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#94

I've been a silent reader since you started this story since I never bothered to make an IF account, I wish you posted on Tumblr! However, I thought it was time to make an account on here so I could tell you just how much I love this story. I am completely addicted to it, I check for updates multiple times a day, I've read some chapters more than three or four times. I am in love with the way you write, it's so witty and funny, it flows so well, the story is so interesting, the dialogues are amazing and your writing is so detailed that I can see the scenes play out in my head.

I love Asad and Zoya in this, they seem more realistic than in the show since you actually talk about the evident sexual tension! It was definitely a physical attraction for them before love in the real story. I love the Ahmed Khan family too, their teasing is so sweet. I literally end up smiling like an idiot when I read any of the chapters. Zoya's subconscious is a definite plus point to this story. You write kisses and romantic moments really well, and you make me LOL at many points, you seem you'd be a really funny and witty person in real life too.

Clueless is hands down my favourite story on the forum, you should seriously consider writing professionally, I feel like you'd be really good at it.

Please do update soon, I am dying to know what happens next. In the mean time, I will read through all your other writings, I was pleasantly surprised to open your index and find so much. I know they are going to be a pleasure to read.

-Meera

P.S: I go to Western too! You wouldn't happen to be the tall beautiful brown girl that goes to all the football games, the one with the gorgeous boyfriend? I think you're my cousin's biology TA too!

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thefangirllife

@thefangirllife

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#95

Originally posted by: canoodle
I've been a silent reader since you started this story since I never bothered to make an IF account, I wish you posted on Tumblr! However, I thought it was time to make an account on here so I could tell you just how much I love this story. I am completely addicted to it, I check for updates multiple times a day, I've read some chapters more than three or four times. I am in love with the way you write, it's so witty and funny, it flows so well, the story is so interesting, the dialogues are amazing and your writing is so detailed that I can see the scenes play out in my head.

I love Asad and Zoya in this, they seem more realistic than in the show since you actually talk about the evident sexual tension! It was definitely a physical attraction for them before love in the real story. I love the Ahmed Khan family too, their teasing is so sweet. I literally end up smiling like an idiot when I read any of the chapters. Zoya's subconscious is a definite plus point to this story. You write kisses and romantic moments really well, and you make me LOL at many points, you seem you'd be a really funny and witty person in real life too.

Clueless is hands down my favourite story on the forum, you should seriously consider writing professionally, I feel like you'd be really good at it.

Please do update soon, I am dying to know what happens next. In the mean time, I will read through all your other writings, I was pleasantly surprised to open your index and find so much. I know they are going to be a pleasure to read.

-Meera

P.S: I go to Western too! You wouldn't happen to be the tall beautiful brown girl that goes to all the football games, the one with the gorgeous boyfriend? I think you're my cousin's biology TA too!

@italicized

LMAO. That's totes a description of Anjali! Definitely herrr! She's usually decked out in white and purple from head to toe because she's cool like that. Now that is two people on IF that know her in real life, she's gonna cry and go like "GUYS THIS IS SUPPOSED TO BE ANONYMOUS"

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astonm

@astonm

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+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#96

Originally posted by: kmh2lover

@italicized

LMAO. That's totes a description of Anjali! Definitely herrr! She's usually decked out in white and purple from head to toe because she's cool like that. Now that is two people on IF that know her in real life, she's gonna cry and go like "GUYS THIS IS SUPPOSED TO BE ANONYMOUS"

Oh, well hello there Meera! :D

I see Aarti has accepted you into her little club. -___-

Ah, Meera, you must come up to me as soon as possible and introduce yourself, it's so cool to meet people from IF in real life, we can fangirl about AsYa, like I am already sooo exciteddd! BROWN GIRLS UNITEEE! Lmao, thank you for calling me tall beautiful brown girl, *flips hair*, *ego inflates*.

AND I AM SO GLAD YOU LIKE MY STORY AND MADE AN ACCOUNT. You are amazeballs! Your comment made me smile so much, and then I got to the bottom and I was like "NO WAYYY DUDE SHE GOES TO WESTERN!"

But please don't tell anyone else, because this is supposed to be anonymous.

*hintAartihint* *coughAarticough*

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astonm

@astonm

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Posted: 10 years ago

#97

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Sabrina

@SabrinaMalik

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Posted: 10 years ago

#98

RES

OMG FIRSTTT!!!

For the FIRSTTT time!

You know di I had a dream, like literally a dream that you updated Chapter 16 and I got the first place!

And look!

Oh My God.

It's almost creepy.

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UNRES

I still can't believe that I'm first. Well, LOL I don't dream about EVERY other FF. But this is CLUELESS we're talking about!

Zoya's brain really really needs a new filter. "I meant later...after you of course. Not with you...not that we haven't already done that. But you know what I mean, I definitely didn't mean shower with you...not that I don't want to shower with you...but...I should stop talking now."

OMG. This girl. 🤣

I just LOVE her subconscious, man.

Instead of Asad, I think YOU should write a book on awesome one-liners and the right things to say. It'll be a best seller. I'll be the first on to buy it.

And WHY, WHY do you describe Asad like this? Bahot nostalgia types feel hota hai mujhe, kyunki ab there's no Asad to ogle anymore. 😭 But atleast you & your stories and there.

"I melted like a slice of cheddar cheese on a grilled cheese sandwich." You manage to make me feel EVERYTHING in your stories. Even hungry. 😆

The way Najma pouted. Aww, I could imagine how cute she looked.

And AsYa in the supermarket like a hubby & a wifey. Sigh...The CVs really did no justice to their story.

And perfect couple: Imran and Tanveer. TanRan. 🤣 I hate them. 😡

But my Zoya is so strong.❤️ I hope her cooking is not a disaster. Do we get AsYa kitchen romance?

I'm obsessed with your story.

Update as soon as you can.

Please.

Edited by SabrinaMalik - 10 years ago

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Prazeena Bhattarai

@Aneezarp27

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#99

I knew that you were updating today...And if not today, tomorrow for sure !
BECAUSE I HAVE TO ATTEND TWO PAPERS TOMORROW! And your update always comes a day before/on the day of my exam. * I wonder Why?? How??* 😆 Anyway... Anything for your story ! 😉 Bookss! GO to hell! *Let me read her update* *Let me fan-girl over AsYa for some time* Then will get back to you!

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astonm

@astonm

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+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#100

Originally posted by: SabrinaMalik
RES

OMG FIRSTTT!!!
For the FIRSTTT time!

You know di I had a dream, like literally a dream that you updated Chapter 16 and I got the first place!

And look!

Oh My God.

It's almost creepy.