5/1 Part 7: Go easy on the brain !! Pg 16, Choomantar, A Sahil ff - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
#11
Great chapter.
Make this a longgg honeymoon, please.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: castlebones

Great chapter.
Make this a longgg honeymoon, please.



hahah.. sure sure..
And update comming soon..
stay tuned..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#13
wow nice plzz update soon :)

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Posted: 10 years ago
#14
Ouh like where this is going
Honeymoon time

Hopefully ahil will realise that sanam does not see rehan like that and they share some sweet moments
Thanks!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Aww.. sorry dear.. was kinda busy. i wrote up my draft but then it was deleted somehow when my phone updated.. and i was too lazy to rewrite all of it. gee.. i know i shouldn't be telling all these fine.. I'll try and update it most probs by tonight. or tomorrow max. Stay tuned.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part 3 : Ajeeb Dastaan hai yeh..


"Love..
Only stupid people fall in love and Allah ka shukar hai.. I'm not one of them.. Well it's not like I can blame them anyway.." Sanam spoke to her sister Haya..
"Its not like they have a choice either too right Sanam? Whether to fall in or don't. It just happens.. We dont have a control over it. Well you can always curb your feelings still though. But then we can't contain it within ourselves for long enough too" Haya grinned.. This is their favourite arguement.. And everytime they bring up it.. None shall convince each other. Well she's leaving for her honeymoon tomorrow. So haya decided not to be too strong, hoping that she'll have a change of her feelings after the honeymoon.
But Sanam stuck up to her point. "But then may be it's not love at all.. It's just a feeling we often mistake for love. Trust me Haya, at the end it all comes down to lust, wealth and beauty.
I don't think true love is something which we find nowadays, where people actually love a person for who they are., where one can die for another. Perhaps ammi and abbu were the last of those lucky ones who had an awareness of what true love could be like. And maybe I'm wrong.. But this is my opinion and enough of all this discussion sleep now" Sanam told Haya who nodded and let her sister sleep in peace for the night. Well, she can't have proper sleeps from tomorrow onwards, she chuckled.

So, if you were wondering how Sanam and Haya were together here..
Here's a brief flash back of the incidentd before this conversation.
Sanam went to visit Haya to inform her about her honeymoon trip, before they leave for Maldives.. Ofcourse, Haya was very happy and excited for Sanam.. They chattered together for hours and upon Hayas insistence she decided to spend the night there..
"Atleast one night away from Jallad Jinn" sanam thought to herself and informed Asma about it.
"Soo, ?" Haya looked at Sanam who's lying beside her
Sanam tilted her head and arched a brow "So? So what Haya?"
"Not getting sleep?" Haya asked
"Humm.. " Sanam said..
Haya giggled "Ofcourse.. Yeahh missing jijuu hain na. Come on Sanam" Haya spoke, getting up and sitting straight... "You are sleeping here just for a night.. And after today.. You "
"Haaa-yaa" Sanam got up immediately and stared at Haya, her eyes totally widened with shock.
"Haha.. Now tell me Miss Sanam.. no.. no.. Wait Its Mrs.Sanam, who doesn't believe in love!! And is going on her honeymoon.." Haya winked

And this was how the whole conversation sprang up !!Sanam turned towards her side of bed, her thoughts still lingering upon her words she spoke with Haya.. And her relation with Aahil. 'Lust, money and beauty were all that people want nowadays. And exactly those were what those girls found in him. The reason he was so popular. But didn't he ever wanted someone who cares for what he is?' Sanam wondered. Sometimes, just sometimes she wonders how it'd be to be in love.. True love 'Not that i want to fall in love.. But it is one of those rare days when I see a couple deeply and madly in love and feel a strange longing in my heart hoping that I'd get a chance to experience it. Just for once.. The feelimgs described in books and movies.. The people there sound soo happy. Is it really all rainbows? Everything has a flip side.. And sure this one does too. Love hurts.. Love gives you pain. It gives you tears, heart breaks, crushes your heart into a million pieces beyond the capability of sticking it back together. It twists your soul, kills you alive and right now I'm determined enough to not let someone play with my feelings.. This Aahil has already been playing with my emotions since a while. Still, 3 months and i dont give a damn about this guy' she mentally gave herself a mental lecture.

Her mind wandered over to Aahil. Well, Sleep is one thing that's not on her mind. She couldn't think properly about anything when she's with him in the room, sharing a bed. She had an image of him, sleeping silently eyes closed, hair falling forwards onto his forehead, those brown orbs, the sparkling smile, which somehow makes his eyes.. Whole face sparkle too.. No wonder, many girls go crazy on him. Yeah.. Those girls.. Her mind shifted to them now. The way they submit themselves to him despite knowing the end always. The way they drool despite knowing that they'll be thrown up just like all the others, even without a good bye and still get themselves into all that. She gave herself a mental thank god I'm not like one of those and have a common sense to decide about it. And if he ever tries to behave this way to her.. Not just him.. Anyone, The right thing to do is kicking them in their ass, instead of kissing them.' And finally somewhere amidst all these thoughts sleep made its way and she submitted herself to it.

The next morning :

Sanam bade her good bye to Haya and went back to her house. Her house.. Since when did she began calling it that way.. She shaked her head as she stepped into it. "Back into devil's den" she thought just at the moment she sensed someone tugging her.
"Shaa-ziaa.." Sanam looked at Shazia who was literally dragging her.
"Pssh.. Sanam. Just follow me" shazia signed and sanam walk-ranned along with Shazia.
Shazia took Sanam to her room where nazia and Asma were already seated.
"Hoo.. Sanam. You finally arrived. I don't even remember the number of times Aahil bhai's asking of you" Asma giggled.
Sanam stared in blank. Jallad Jinn asking of me. Well, perhaps he had some work or didn't have anyone to argue with, she crossed it off.
"Kk.. Now sit first" Nazia said making Sanam sit on the bed. Sanam was shocked at all the extra attention she's getting. "So tell us, Do you want anything.." She asked smiling. Shazia and Asma chuckled.
"I.. I.. What do i want.." Sanam answered back with an enquiring tone.
Nazia rolled her eyes. And Asma took over her. "Sanam, we're just asking if incase you wanted to know anything or even if you wanted to get anything.. Ask us.. It's fine you know" Asma spoke up with much difficulty.
"But what'd i ...?!"Sanam stopped her speech in middle getting what they were speaking about. It was a honeymoon they were going to.. Well, atleast according to them. Sanam rolled her eyes and left the room, blushing gently.
Shazia, Nazia and Asma exchanged a glance and grinned.
Sanam ran into Rehaan who was in his own thoughts. Both of them, were brought back into reality and Sanam stared at Rehaan "Rehaan, your eyes.. " sanam stuttered seeing them in a shade of red.
"It's just.. I didn't get to sleep last night Sanam.. You know work and all.." Rehaan lied.
Sanam put a hand on Rehaans shoulders.. "Why do you always have to do such a lot of work." She asked in a worried tone.
"Fate always wants me to go through such a way" Rehaan spoke half lost in his thoughts.
"Did you just say anything?" Sanam asked.
"No, it's nothing much Sanam and a happy journey to you.. In case you want anything, do tell me" he said.. His last words wearing off seeing Aahil walk towards the corridor.
"Sure, I will." Sanam smiled..
"Fine.. Sanam. I'll talk to you later" Rehaan said excusing himself just at the moment Aahil walked into the corridor.
"But.." Sanam spoke turning to catch Aahil staring at her.. Her words trailed away and they stood facing each other not knowing what to speak.
"If you finished your talks.. Go freshen up. The flight's not going to wait for you" he spoke coldly and left the area..


Thats it guys.. Firstly sorry for the late update.And i know it is a short part.. but I've decided to post it up as I've realized that i need a short break to refresh up and write the next part..And as usual.. hope you guys liked it.. and if you did like it please do not hesitate to stamp on the likes button.. !! My likes button loves being stamped upon.. and also do comment.. Good or Bad. I love reading your comments.Thank you.
Edited by Wynter - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#17
Lovely, waiting for the next one..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#18

Originally posted by: fanraya

Lovely, waiting for the next one..



Thank you.. Glad that you liked it..
I'll try and post that sooner too..
most probably before or on this weekend..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#19
Thanks for updating😊
Its a lovely os
Hope sanam gets her love soon
And rehaan's eyes red I think maybe aahil has
confronted him
Waiting to see what happens during their honeymoon
Update soon😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: heena24

Thanks for updating😊

Its a lovely os
Hope sanam gets her love soon
And rehaan's eyes red I think maybe aahil has
confronted him
Waiting to see what happens during their honeymoon
Update soon😃

Thank you.. I didn't actually progress the story here cause i wanted the viewers to know it from sanams pov, the way she's feeling at the moment.. And once its established.. Now that it has been.. I'll concentrate on the plot.. And Thank you again for liking it.

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