5/1 Part 7: Go easy on the brain !! Pg 16, Choomantar, A Sahil ff - Page 3

Hello.. I am Sushmitha.. I read all ur updates just now...
I really appreciate it.. It was entertaining dear.. I loved reading it... All these misunderstandings, twists, SaHil moments... Hayee.. Amazing...
Wonderful updates...
Continue soon...

Originally posted by: Wynter

Thank you..I didn't actually progress the story here cause i wanted the viewers to know it from sanams pov, the way she's feeling at the moment..And once its established.. Now that it has been.. I'll concentrate on the plot.. And Thank you again for liking it.

Yeah... Sanam's POV has been written really well.. 😊

Originally posted by: .Muskhaan.

Hello.. I am Sushmitha.. I read all ur updates just now...
I really appreciate it.. It was entertaining dear.. I loved reading it... All these misunderstandings, twists, SaHil moments... Hayee.. Amazing...
Wonderful updates...
Continue soon...

Aww.. That's soo sweet of you..
😊 Glad that you liked it..
You made my day !! 😃

Originally posted by: .Muskhaan.

Yeah... Sanam's POV has been written really well.. 😊

Thank you again.. 😊 she really has a heck a deal of mixed feelings right now.. she's like at a cross roads now.. it's all in the hands of the upcoming story.. which ofcourse is in the hands of me 😛 😉

PART 4A : Kaise bataayein..

"Great.."
"No she's amazing!!"
"Perfect"
Voices of Shazia Nazia and Asma echoed through the room..


Sanams pov


"Are you sure i should be wearing this" I questioned Nazia, who was helping with my hairdo, with a confused expression on my face..
"Ofcourse Sanam" Shazia intervened.. "I bet bro jaan will probably start drooling once he sees you" she replies, flashing her smile
Hearing his name sent shivers down my spine.. Aahil Raza Ibrahim drooling about me.. Okay.. This is my honeymoon.. Fine not a honeymoon as by the wordings.. But still not everyone gets to go to Maldives.. And i decided not to let Mr.ARI bother me. I wanted him to see that it's not just him who's unaffected.. Not just him who could lead his life as if nothing ever happened.. I had been pretty happy thinking about things this way.. But not at this moment.. I was nervous, tensed. I don't want to do this. A series of thoughts wandered in my mind each pointing out its own possible way.
I turned towards Shazia who's applying makeup now. I insisted on none.. And according to her none means ... Well, you can understand.
"Are you sure.. I suddenly feel not so good about it anymore" I spoke out exasperated hoping she'd drop out her plan.
"Aww.. Sanam.. Don't back out at the last moment.. You are amazing.. Trust me" Nazia added.
"Fine.." I cut down the speech just the moment Shazia finished her making me up.
I glanced into the mirror to have a look at myself and there.. My eye balls almost dropped out.. I put my hand on the mirror as i checked myself..

"Woah.. Sanam, There you go. You look perfect.. Just like those girls in the movies" Shazia teased
Yes, i agree with Shazia at one point. I was looking good.. Fine, Change it to Great.. Thanks to this dress they made me wear. It's a designer piece, not too gaudy though.. It was simple but what made it stand out is the way the fabric's hugging around my curves, in the right places which made me look sexier than i ever know in my wildest dreams that i could.
And to top it, my hair.. It was just perfect.. Credits to Shazia again.. She let it down loose and allowed it to travel down my shoulder in soft waves.. An eye liner, a strawberry flavoured lip gloss and a blush on my cheeks.. I'm done. I smile at my reflection in the mirror.. It looked great.
Yeah this was where i agreed with Shazia.. Tonight I might look like those girls in the films.. But my life shall always remain the very same way it is... All those reflections are never true. And that was why they were termed reflections.. Not the truth.

And there i was again lost in my own bubble of a world.. Which was just burst open by the laughs of Shazia, Nazia and Asma.
"Bhai jaan, must be waiting for you Sanam.. Go" Asma chuckled.
I gave a weak smile. I almost forgot that i have to face him.
" You sure.. I mean, I'll change myself back in a minute" I spoke with a worried tone.
"Saaanamm" The three echoed again in a unity this time and pushed me towards his room.. Or our room (they say).
I opened the room and entered in..
There he is... Aahil Raza Ibrahim in his golden salwar, his hands running through his hair as he's checking himself in the mirror. I swear he didn't need all that.. He wears a garbage bag.. And still girls would go drool over him.. Yea.. Those silly gals.. I sighed. And his eyes.. He has got the most amazing ones I've ever seen. Wonder if he got them from his mother or father.
I looked at him to have a glance at his eyes to find him already seeing at me.

Oh my gosh..His eyes.. Those beautifully placed dark orbs were staring right at me and that smirk on his face !!
I felt flattered at first.. Yeah.. That was a compliment.. At least for a girl like me on which guys never laid eyes upon. And here he is.. Aahil Raza Ibrahim checking me out. Yeah that was flattering, till i realized that his eyes are still wandering around.. Eww.. Thats soo sick man. He's openly staring at me without even a single hint of hesitation in his eyes..
Should i have been insulted?
Then why am i having my adrenaline rush.
Unanswered questions again.. I sighed.

The silence ticked on as i tried to figure out a plan to leave and change into my usual self... Aahil's still looking at me.. , until his eyes finally came back up to my face. I could feel my eye start to twitch under the scrutiny.. My fingers began trembling and I've decided..
'Alright Sanam.. Keep your cool..I repeat keep your cool'
In all this huddle.. I didn't notice that he had started to come closer to me till i looked up to find his face a mere few inches away from mine.
"I-it was Shaazia's idea.. I'm not interested. I could go and change back if you wanted" my voice wobbled.
I lifted my eyes to see him already walk out of the room..
I felt a weak tingling sensation in my knees and sat down on the bed thinking about what i had to do now?
Did he hear my whole speech?
Was he really checking me out?
Should i change back to my normal self?
How'd Shazia feel?
What's his problem?
Thinking about all those questions made my head ache.

Aahils pov :

I was running my hand through my hair and reexamining myself..
That's my favorite way to pass time..
Seconds flew.. Minutes passed..
This girl.. How much time does she seriously need to get refreshed and come.
She doesn't even need much of making up.. Simple and beautiful just the way she is.. Aahil sighed.
But never mine.
And that was when i heard the room door open and i was glad that she made it finally.. I was about to ask her what in the world took her such a long time..
But i stopped seeing her reflection in the mirror..
Omfg.. Is it her?
I swear if I'd have the chance I'd take back those previous words i said.
She is amazing.. Nope she's gorgeous.. Yes she's sexy.. She is way hotter.. My inner voice argued with itself.
I knew she felt my gaze touching her.. I knew it burns her..
For once i didn't care. She is my wife.. Mrs.Aahil Raza Ibrahim.
I found myself walking towards her and that was when she uttered those words..
"I'm not interested"
Yeah ofcourse she won't be interested, my foot.
It's not Rehaan.. I'm not Rehaan.. Damn her.. Damn Rehaan.. Damn me for falling to this girl. And damn me for falling soo hard.
Another minute I'm sure I'd have done something which shall make the situations no better with her. I decided to leave the room.
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We baded byes to everyone and I went to sit inside the car.
Sanam was still bading her byes.. First to ammi who was ofcourse happy, next to shazia nazia and asma, who almost literally jumped and hugged her whispering something in her ears that made her laugh.. Aah.. That tiny laugh.. And the little dimple which made its way into her cheek when she laughed. How good she looked while laughing..
And then it was Rehaan.. I straightened up and my palms moulded themselves into a fist.
No wait.. Khala khalu made their way in. They were throwing up their usual rant, asking her to bring some of the food back.
And again.. She's back to Rehaan. I closed my eyes not wanting to witness the next few seconds.
I heard the car door click open and close.
She made her way in. I made myself mental note to thank allah for the brief stint (yes, i believe in him now thanks to this woman sitting beside me) . I literally imagined Sanam hugging Rehaan and bursting out in tears.. Thankfully no, nothing happened. I knew It's not Rehaan I'm angry at.. Somewhere I'm sorry for him. Life played its way with both of us. Had i been married now to Nida, perhaps it would have been different.. But destiny had other ideas.. It was Sanam with whom i finally ended up. And i decided to not let it go away easily. How i wish i could know what's going on in her mind, I sighed.


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Sanam's pov

As the car zoomed past the road and houses beside it, my mind was equally racing.
Minutes passed and silence was all that was present between us. Yet that silence had some of that intense-ness interlaced with it which made it all the more unbearable.
Thankfully i was told the airport wasn't that far away from here.. Still every minute looked like an hour.

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I could see him staring out of the window.
If only i could be as care-free as he was, i thought little knowing that he was thinking the same too.
Our car slowed down and i could see a building with glass walls come in sight.. The airport i thought.
The driver finally stopped the car. I looked at Aahil, unsure of what to do. He looked at me at the same time and an awkward glancing at each other was all that followed.
He got down the car and i stepped out too. All i decided is to walk behind him, follow his footsteps.
Soon we walked into the airport. I looked at the people walking in and out. It was not the least like those crowded railway stations. I looked at the beautifully designed ceiling from our waiting arena with awe.
"Never been to the airport" I heard a voice beside me. He was smirking.
I shaked my head. That was the first time we talked today.. Well, excluding that talk in the room this morning.. If it was even considered a talk. I spoke something and he wasn't even there to let me complete it.
"Badi Ammi always tells me that Ammi and Abbu proposed each other here" i blurted out.
He turned to look at me and removed his shades. I didn't lift my head up to meet his eyes for i was sure he would look amazingly cute now.
"You me-ean here.. In the airport??" He asked his voice now sounded as if he was interested.
I tugged a strand of hair falling forwards back cause it was blocking my view of him from the corner of my eye.
I found him twitch in his chair as he turned himself to face me conveniently.
I nodded again. "They were in love but never realized till they had to be separate" i replied and i told him everything. How my abbu ran into the airport.. And the way he proposed her.
(Sorry about it if i was wrong.. I never really watched qh1 but i think it was something like this from what i remember reading here in this forum)
For a while i almost forgot that i was sitting beside none other than Jallad Jinn and telling him my parents love story !!
I was lost too much in it to find him staring at me, and his face glowing like a little kid.
"That was ..gr-eatt" he said when i completed it.. "I mean it's soo romantic. Then where did you get these genes from" he continued speaking mostly to himself, but i caught up with it.
"Excusee mee?" I found myself raising a brow facing him
"What?" He asked his mouth turning into a perfect 'O' upon realizing that he had uttered those words out.
I swear if looks could only kill, I'd have been dead at that very moment.. Or perhaps even long back!!
He was real cute and still hot. I wonder if such a combination of cute and hot is even possible.
I mean there are people like me who neither look cute nor hot.. While there are people like him who need not even try to look as such at the same time.
I was about to ask him what he was exactly speaking about..when a voice from a nearby speaker spoke out loudly making me jump a little.
He snickered. And i blushed a little out of the embarrassment. He didn't catch me staring at him right? I hoped.
The announcement was meant for us.. And he got up which means i got up immediately too behind him to follow him again.
But this time he stopped and waited for me to catch up. I was like is this even real. And then just as if this wasn't enough., he stretched his hand out and i still looked at him with an expression of shock evident in my face, as i handed him my hand.
And there we were walking to our aeroplane hand in hand.
I felt him smirk a little as we walked past all the people.
I rolled my eyes, shaked my head and tried pinching myself with my other free hand as we were walking.
I immediately closed my eyes and tried facepalming myself as much as i can, as i found that he caught me pinching myself.
I tried seeing threw the gaps between my fingers by opening my eyes gently and i flinched immediately seeing him still look at me. He was looking flabbergasted and chuckled lightly before he took off again. I hurried up to catch with him, but still maintaining a little distance between us. He was still laughing gently and when he found me looking at him, he tried his best stifling his laugh but ended up bursting into laughter again.
I looked at him in wonder.. His laugh some how made me laugh too. How beautiful he looked. The way his eyes narrowed and cheeks widened. I noted each of his muscle movement which was interrupted by another announcement and we decided to hurry up. We soon checked in and sat in our respective seats., reminiscing what just happened a few minutes ago.


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Amazing one dear. .If possible, pm me when u come up with next part...
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Originally posted by: ANNA90ALEX

Amazing one dear. .If possible, pm me when u come up with next part...
since fron strdays sick episode, im trying to keep myself away from forum..so pm me

Aww.. thanks for that.. and will defo do it..
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Thanks for updating

Originally posted by: heena24

Thanks for updating

Loved it

Let's see what the next part has in store for us

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hahah.. thanks.. the next parts gonna be more interesting for sure.. spoiler.. u can expect some touchy scenes too !! 😉 and yeps.. will update soon..