AsYa (KaBhi) ff Mujhse Dosti Karoge! (part 14- Updated pg54) - Page 29

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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice part
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Posted: 10 years ago
Finally u update n it was a Lovely one asya r so cute precap is really intresting continue soon 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: anopama

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Yay welcome back
Love the update
Oh he didn't know she sing so well
A lot of things u don't know Asad
Jealous Asad love it and he don't know y he is jealous
That is the fun part
I wish it was written in more english
Love zoya shouting at him and taking control to look after his wound
Oh he is pained seeing her so hurt taking care of him
Ha so he asked her if ah love someone
She said yes he asked who she didn't give an answer
So radil is happy in seeing asya and wants zoya as their bahu
Love dilshad asking zainab for zoya
Wondering who heard the convo
Was it Asad the person is shocked but happy at the same time
Precap is interesting
Mayrah back but Asad said yes to marry zoya
Interesting
Continue soon


First of all thanx a lot
Next part will be written in english well most of the parts
Well to know who heard the whole convo you have 2 wait 4 the next part
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update
Glad to see u back, hope u enjoyed ur trip.
Jealous asad was treat. The way Zoya told him to be quiet was awesome. Dilshad asked zainab for asad Zoya alliance. Precap: asad agreed for marriage.
Continue soon plz
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Posted: 10 years ago
Yayyy you came back
Thank god u came back I was waiting for ur update for long time
Love update
Asad jealous
Oh I think asad will said yes to nikkah
Or no????!!
I can not guess but make asad aware of zoya feelings soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
------------ chapter 12----------------------------------
Dilshad- Zoya...mujhe zoya chahiye

Zainab- zoya matlab...

Dilshad- zainab mai chati hu kay zoya mera ghar ko jannat banaye mai zoya ko appne ghar ki bahu banna chati hu kya tumhe yeh rishta qubool hai

Zainab- dilshad mai hamesha se chati thi kay meri beti jo bhi ghar jaye kush rahe usse aisa ghar mile jaha usse sab bohot pyaar karte ho aur meri ek hi khwahish thi ki mujhe asad jsa beta mile aur woh khawish bhi aaj tumhare wajase puri gi mujhe toh yeh rishta qubool hai par kya asad zoya manege

Dilshad- maine undono ki aankho mai ak dusre kay liye pyaar dekha hai woh zaroor manege

And the two friends hugged each other

They didn't know but 1 pair of ears heard their whole conversation and was shock and happy at the same time...

Zoya heard the whole convo she didn't know what to do she just went in her room quietly so that nobody notices her...she was shock she had no idea happiness would come to her like this...

Zoya's POV

Ya allah I don't know if I should be happy or sad I should laugh or cry phupie and ammi decided mines and Asad's nikaah they didn't even bother ask Asad I have no problem with this nikaah but Asad will never say yes for this nikaah

Allah miya what's wrong with me I can't betray Asad if I won't clarify things now they might get worst I have to tell Asad the truth about the emails I have to tell him that I wrote those letters not mayrah will I be doing the right thing

Yess zoya you are doing the right thing tell asad everything the good in her spoke

No zoya don't if you tell asad he will start hating you and he will leave you forever the bad in her spoke

good side- No zoya don't listen to her she is distracting you have to tell him he has all the right to know about all those letters

Bad side- go ahead tell him but just keep one thing in mind zoya if you tell him the truth you will loose him forever and he will go to mayrah

Good side- No zoya If you lie to him then only you will loose him forever by telling him truth you are pulling him towards you so tell him

Bad side- No Don't Tell Him

Good side- Tell him

Bad side - don't tell him

Zoya was looking from one side to another side she was super confused she didn't know who she must listen to the good side or the evil side just when she couldn't take it anymore she screamed

Zoya- ENOUGH!!! enough (she collapsed on the floor) enough go away just leave me alone go away

I'm tired just to tired of my life I never ever cared for my happiness everytime I thought about someone else I also want to be happy I can't just let my self ruin my life that's it I have decided to tell asad everything even if it means loosing him forever It won't matter so much but by betraying him I will only see his hatred for my self I can see anger in his eyes for me but not hatred I will die its better to tell him the truth I will tell him everything on the valentines day which is this weekend...she wiped her tears and looked at her self in the mirror..

----------------------------- IN THE GARDEN------------------------------------------------------------------------
Rehan was talking to mayrah on the phone...

Rehan- ok baby yeah things are working out between the two of them but asad is still unaware about his feelings towards him

Mayrah- don't worry about that he will soon realise that zoya is the correct girl for him its time for next step

Rehan- so what's the next step...

Mayrah- I can't tell you that on the phone I'm on my way back to bhopal sharp and 4:30 pm meet me @ big dargah bring humaira with and ask her to bring the black bag that is in my room also ok bye baby love you

Rehan- bye baby love you twooo

Humaira- so how's your babyyy...😉

Rehan- its not good to hear people's conversation😳

Humaira- I didn't hear the whole convo I just heard the last part you love your baby too much and you don't Love me aah I c...

Rehan- shut up you emotional blackmailer...mayrah is coming today she has called you and me to the big dargah @ 4:30 pm and she has asked you to take her black bag that is in her room with

Humaira- I wonder what will be her next step to bring AsYa close rehan I hope our hard work works...

Rehan- don't worry hummi its high time for them to except their feelings zoya will have to tell asad everything...

Ayaan- what will she have to tell bhaijaan

Humaira- woh woh...woh ummm...ayaan she will have to tell him sorry for being rude yesterday

Najma- don't lie humaira we know what you two are trying to do we are not fools so plz don't hide anything from us and tell us everything at least now

Humaira looked at Rehan and he nodded in a yess

Humaira took a deep breath and told them everything from the very begining how zoya wrote letters to Asad with mayrah's name the love she had for him since childhood how happy she used to get with asad's letter mayrah leaving bhopal with an excuse of dance auditions and their plans to get them close to each other...

Humaira- trust me guys aapi asad bhaijaan se bohot pyaar karti hai aur maine bhaijaan ki aankhon mai bhi unke liye feelinge dekhi hai

Najma- I can't believe this tumse yeh umeed nahi thi humaira I thought we were best friends but you...how could you hide this fact from us

Ayaan- najma is right humne bachpan mai kaha tha jabi koi problem hogi mlkar solve karenge aur tumne itni bari baat humse chipayi that's not fair sara credit akele hi khana chati thi

Rehan- sorry guys par humaira ko sab sach batana say maine mana kiya tha coz I didn't want AsYa to know about our plans

Najma- what do you think we would have gone to tell them

Rehan- its not like that this plan was discussed before you people came and you were always around AsYa we couldn't take that risk even if we wanted

Humaira- I know guys I have hurt you both I'm really sorry plzzz forgive me

Ayaan&najmaa- ITS OKAY...

Ayaan- waise bhi dosti ka ek usul hai madam No Sorry No Thank you get it

Humaira- stupid pehle salman ki style copy karte the abb unke dialouges bhi copy karte ho

Ayaan- kya kare itne bare fan jo tehre

Rehan- ok enough of salman khan discussion we have to discuss about the next step with them also

Ayaan- what next step??

Humaira- about AsYa did you forget now listen to me sharp 4:30pm we gonna leave separately from here and will go to the big dargah and will meet their by the sweets stall even mayrah aapi is gonna be there so rehan and ayaan will leave together najma and I will leave together is it fine

Ayaan- yeah okay but what is asad bhaijaan sees me and rehan going together he will volunteer to come with

Rehan- that's why I will leave 15 mins before and will meet you around the corner so you have to come quietly...

Ayaan- ok that's fine

Humaira- I will tell abbu that I'm going to the college for the art show that is today and I'm taking najma with..so nobody will refuse

Najma- ok done...

Rehan- so everybody knows what we have to do right

Humi-ayaan-naj- yesss sirr..with a salute

And all them hi-fied each other

---------------------------- Some where on the Road ------------------------------------------
Mayrah was sitting in the car with ear plugs in her ear listening to the music when she suddenly stopped the car she was looking at the bride who was hugging her parents and crying...

Mayrah- self thought- I'm sorry abbu I know what I'm gonna do today will hurt you way too much but I have no other choice this day only comes ones in everyone's life and the sad part is I will have no one with me on this day not even my best friends...zoya and her family has given me more then I could ever ask for this is the least I can do for her...
(She wiped her tears and started her journey again..

------------------------ Farouqi mansion --------------------------------------
Asad was sitting in his balcony and was thinking about yesterdays events...

He couldn't deny the fact that whenever he sees zoya with Rehan he feels like killing that dude he was so pissed of with rehan everytime he tries to do something for his best friend that idiot jumps in between from nowhere...he also couldn't deny the fact that he was jealous...

He was thinking about his dance with zoya he really liked their proximity it just felt right like she's meant to stay in his loving arms,he also feels peaceful and calm in her arms its like they soothe his unknown pain

Asad's POV

Yaa allah why am I thinking about zoya I'm supposed to think about mayrah coz she's the one I Love then why am I thinking about zoya she's my best friend I'm not supposed to think like that...but why does it feel right to stay near her, to protect her from the bad eyes, to be her saviour WHY...why do I want her near me always, why does my heat skip a beat when I see her...why can't I take this fact that she Loves someone else oh my word there are so many questions in my heart but I don't have even 1 answer for it...

Do I LOVE HER NO it can't be I only Love Mayrah I can't betray her love or trust and its only a infatuation and nothing else get over it Asad...he told himself for a hundred time...

End of Asad's POV

He was as confused as a child who just strats schooling

His thoughts were disturbed by the Knock on the door

Asaaad dear can I come in...

Asad- of course ammi you don't need permision to enter your sons room

Dilshad- I know that dear but after your nikaah I will have to knock on the door you know I can't just enter your room only allah knows what you'll be doing

Asad- looked down embarrassed- Ammmiii

Dilshad- anyways I didn't come here to embarrass you I have came here to talk about something very Important

Asad- jee ammi khahiye

Dilshad- Asad I and your Abbu and decided or let just say fixed something

Asad- fixed what??😕

Dilshad- ummm...you see I actually we think this is right for you so...

Asad- ammi I don't understand what you're trying to say..

Dilshad- Asad I and your abbu have fixed your nikaah...

Asad-gasped in horror- WHAT!!! My Nikaah without even asking me ammi why did you do that...

Dilshad- asad its not like we are asking you to marry her tomorrow and plus you know her very well you two have two weeks left for your nikaah

Asad- WHAT!!! 2 weeks ammii are you joking...who is that girl..

Dilshad- yes you are getting married in two weeks and about that girl you know her very well

Asad- ammi I can't marry her I..I..woh actually..I love someone

Dilshad- I know Asad...

Asad- you know and you still want me to marry her

Dilshad- yes because its the same girl asad I always wanted a daughter-In-Law like her she's the best girl for you when I saw Love in your eyes for her my dream came true...

Asad- really?

Dilshad- so may I take this as a Yes from you

Asad- yess

Dilshad- ohh my word asad I'm soo happy today I can't wait for the day when Zoya will come my daughter-In-Law...
with that she left the room leaving a shock Asad behind

Asad- did ammi just fixed my nikaah with zoya and I said yess without even asking her the name of the girl...I have to clear her misunderstanding...

------------------------- In The Lounge -----------------------------------------------------
Rashid zainab and gaffur were sitting and talking when dilshad came...

Dilshad- Rashid, Zainab, gaffur bhai I'm so happy today Asad finally said yesss for the nikaah I'm sooo happyy

Asad- ammi wait you are getting it wrong ammi I Love...before he could complete his sentence the bell rang...

Zainab- wait I'll go check who it is, it must be humaira and najma they must be back from the art show...

She opened the door and was shock to see mayrah standing their

Zainab- Mayraah...

Mayrah- oho khalaa don't tell me you not gonna ask me to come inside this thing is to heavy I can't the load of it

Zainab- come in dear...

Mayrah- khala where is everyone I have an amazing surprise for everyone and where is zoya

Just then zoya came out of her room and was shock to see mayrah

Zoya- Mayrah

Mayrah- Zoyaaa (she ran and hugged her) I'm sooo happy zoyaaa I missed youuu sooo much

Zoya- I missed you too what's up with you why are you dressed up as a bride

Zainab- yes dear even I was surprised to see you in this

Mayrah- I'm dressed up in a bridal clothing because...ummm woh I got Married...

Everybody gasped in horror...
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Precap- mayrah- itroducing her husband to everyone and
AsYa conversation

Ok guys that's it I know I said update will be up on sunday sorry but couldn't do it as my exams are here and I have missed 2 months of school so its a lot of work for me to catch up and to study sorryy...

Plzz Like and Comment...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update
So myraah got married to rehan I suppose
Waiting for their reaction
Update next part soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
So lovely update n asad realizing he is in love with zoya but don't dare to say it n maryh's entry is a shocking one percape is interesting continue soon 😃
Edited by shailu123 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome :)
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