AsYa (KaBhi) ff Mujhse Dosti Karoge! (part 14- Updated pg54) - Page 28

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: PriyaCherry

Thanks for PM.

How you wrote your exams? I am wishing for Getting Best results to you.😊
It was Very interesting and Nice Part.😊
Zoya and her family conducted a Party for Asad(KSG) and Family arrival,it was so nice.😊
Humeria said to Asad(KSG)that Zoya Did all arrangement in his room according his likesand he feels happy for that,it was very interesting.😊
Asad(KSG) Jealous when he saw Rehaan with Zoya,it was very interesting.😊
ASYA(KABHI) dance was so beautifully explained.😊
Percap was very interesting that Dilshad asking for Zoya from Zainab.
Please Update Next part soon,I am waiting here.
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(MISSING ASAD(KSG) and ASYA(KABHI) Very Much)
PriyaCherry.





My exams went very well tho some of them were hard..and thanx for ur best wishes

Thanxx 😃
Will update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: aman1605

Hey Aarushi🤗

How r u?
Finally catch up with all the unread chapters😆
Anyway all the chapters were fantastic😳
Asad is getting jealous of Rehan😆
Plz continue asap😉
But i don't want this story to be ended soon but it's ur wish😳
Tnx 4 pm😃
Love Aman❤️

P.S. Extremely sorry 4 being late "holding my ears"
College take all my time 😳


Hii Aman
I'm good
Thanxx😃
Will continue asap
Pleasure

No problem i completely understand how school and college take our time😃

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Posted: 10 years ago
Where have gone am missing this story so much 😭 update soon
Edited by shailu143 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Please please please update soon. Waiting for ur story for over a month now. Have been a silent reader but could not stop myself now. I have always been a big fan of the movie mujhse dosti karoge and seeing that a new starting on my favourite couple with the exact same name, i could not stop myself and that is what attracted me to ur story. I understand that in todays busy life people do not get much time to write and it might be the exact same thing with you but i request u to atleast complete the story. Atleast we readers will be satisfied that atleast you completed ur story unlike many others who at first attract readera for their story and then leave it in between which results in the fans becoming sad. I also very well know that the last dicisson will be urs and u will only decide what to do with the story but this is a humble request from the many fans to update and complete the story.
hope that u will look forward to my request and atleast give it a thought.
thanking you
from a big fan of ur story
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Posted: 10 years ago
Note: Hello guyz I know I didn't post the story for a month or more but trust me guys I was out of country for 2 months I had holidays and it was my dearest uncles wedding my mom had told me clearly dat we won't be going and suddenly 1 night b4 our flight she told me that we will be going I tried 2 leave a note but same night my internet service expired so couldn't leave a note when I went there I got really busy in the wedding preparations and the pre-wedding rituals and couldn't leave a note for you people I'm very very sorry...holding my ears and saying sorry
I don't know if u people r still interested in this story but my nani says if u start something u should end it with a good note so I shall continue this story after knowing few view about what u all think if I should continue or discontinue

If u people want can throw shoes tomatoes anything u please for not leaving a proper note for u'll

SORRY ONCE AGAIN
Love
Aarushii
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: loveassh

<font color="#CC3300" size="3">Note: Hello guyz I know I didn't post the story for a month or more but trust me guys I was out of country for 2 months I had holidays and it was my dearest uncles wedding my mom had told me clearly dat we won't be going and suddenly 1 night b4 our flight she told me that we will be going I tried 2 leave a note but same night my internet service expired so couldn't leave a note when I went there I got really busy in the wedding preparations and the pre-wedding rituals and couldn't leave a note for you people I'm very very sorry...holding my ears and saying sorry</font>

<font color="#CC3300" size="3">I don't know if u people r still interested in this story but my nani says if u start something u should end it with a good note so I shall continue this story after knowing few view about what u all think if I should continue or discontinue</font>

<font color="#CC3300" size="3">If u people want can throw shoes tomatoes anything u please for not leaving a proper note for u'll</font>

<font color="#CC3300" size="3">SORRY ONCE AGAIN</font>
<font color="#CC3300" size="3">Love</font>
<font color="#CC3300" size="3">Aarushii</font>

hey its ok chalo maffi dedi ab jaldi se continue karo 😃
Edited by shailu143 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
I have been waiting like forever for an update
So u plz plz update like now
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Posted: 10 years ago
Waiting since long time
Plz update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hello guys I'm back, I know I didn't post for 3 months because I was out of country sorry people for the delay here's another chapter
...Chapter 11...

They were lost in each other's eyes but who keeps a perfect moment alive the sounds of clap broke their starring session...and quickly sprang away from each other

Asad- hey chasmish mujhe nahi malum tha kay tum itna aacha ganna gati ho

Zoya- aisi bohot si cheezien hai jo tumhe nahi malum hai

Asad- kya matlab😕

Zoya- kuch nahi... excuse me
(She excused herself and went to rehan by the drinks counter where he was standing with humaira ayan and najma)

Rehan- wow I'm impressed princess tum toh aur bhi aacha gane lagi ho

Ayaan- mona darling aap toh asad bahijaan say bhi acha gati hai hum toh aapki awaaz kay hi deewane hogaye haan par humse aacha nahi gaa sakti hai aap

Humaira- bandar kya jaane adrak ka swaad, tum aur meri appi sey aacha gaana gao gey hmf

Ayaan- kya humaira begum kabhi toh is nacheez pay bharosa kijiye agar aap ko yaqeen nahi aata toh tamater say puchiye kyun tamater

Najma- haan yeh baat toh iss bandar ney sahi kahi humaira kay gaana yeh aur asad bhaijaan dono bohot aacha gaate

Ayaan- kya tamater kabhi toh credit full diya karo

Zoya- acha baba bas abhi gaane ki baatein bohot hogay, rehan 1 min kuch baat karni hai tumse

Rehan- haan bolo na

Zoya- akele main

Rehan- ok ( with that they went on the other side of the hall)
Kya baat hai zoya

Zoya- rehan woh actually...woh..humare college main bohot bara event hai aur principle ko pata chala hai kay tum yahi bhopal mai rooke ho toh woh yeh chaatey hai ki tum wo event host karo jaise pehle kiya karte the

Rehan- WHAT!! par zoya yeh event hai kab

Zoya- rehan yeh event valentines day par hai aur principle ney yeh responsibility mujhe di hai plz don't say NO( with that she took his hands in her hand and was holding them)
Just then asad came there looking for zoya and saw her with rehan

Rehan- you know I won't say no, yes I will do it ( taking her in for a hug)

Asad was standing there and looking at them while holding on his glass very hard and taking all his anger out on the poor glass asad was holding the glass to tight the glass couldn't take more pressure and it broke in his hands making a sound that grabbed zoya's attention

Zoya- Asad (she whispered and pushed rehan away and went by asad) oh my god asad tumhare haath sey bohot khoon behraha hai yeh kaise hua,

taking his hand in her hand but he pulled his hand away from her and said: tumhe yeh sab karne ki koi zaroorat nahi hai

Zoya was on the verge of crying looking at his state as she looked care fully and what she saw broke her heart into million pieces the pieces of glass were inside his palm deep down and the blood dripping down non-stop on the white floor making it drak red with his blood

Zoya again pulled his hands to clean up but he again pulled his hands back

That was it for zoya if he is acting stubborn she would be more stubbron

Zoya- Enough Asad now you will just stand here quietly and let me do what I have to do

Asad was beyond shock at her tone she didn't ever speak in that tone her tone sent shivers down his spine he was angry with zoya for going and hugging that idiot rehan again and again but didn't had the courage to stop her now...

Zoya took his hands in her hands and started to take out the glass pieces one by one she took out one big piece and heard him gasp in pain and it felt like her was was being pierced by thousand needles...but she controlled her self and took out the remaining pieces..
Her tears were flowing continuesly asad was just looking at her face and forgot all his pain

Asad- self thought- How can she still care about me so much I pusshed her away and stopped her from coming near me but she still came here to help me why?he saw her non-stop tears and felt an unknown pain in his heart

Zoya saw Asad staring at her intensly and it made her worried again

Zoya- bohot dard ho raha hai kya asad..

Asad- haan bohot...
Obvious to zoya he was not talking about the pain his wounds were giving him but he was talking about the pain zoya's tears were giving him

Zoya- stupid idiot kissne kaha tha hero bane kay liye aur glass hath mai todne kay liye
She tore her piece of saree and wiped blood that was around his wounds and tied another piece on his wounds...agli baar aisi harkat tumne ki na toh mai

Asad- toh tum kya karogi chasmish

Zoya- maar dalungi with that she hugged him tightly
Asad was taken back but he also put his arms around her and hugged her back

The Khan's and rehan humaira was watching this scean with tears in their eyes

Dilshad was looking at rashid who was lost in some kind of thoughts and excatly new what he was thinking

Dilshad- Rashid kya aap bhi wahi soch rahe hai jo mai soch rahi hu

Rashid- begum sahiba kya humne kabhi kuch alag socha hai zoya humare ghar kay lye ek dum perfect hai

Dilshad- haan rashid aur humare bigre aur bewaqoof beta ko wohi sambhal sakti hai mai kal hi zainab say iss bare mein baat karungi waise bhi dosti ka doosra naam pyaar hai aur agaar asad zoya se nikaah karta hai usse zindagi bhar kay liye ek aisi dost milengi jo usse samjhengi aur usska sath bhi dengi

Rashid- hmmm I'm proud to have you as my wife

---------------------- IN THE GARDEN--------------------------------------------
Asad and zoya were sitting on the same swing they used to sit in the childhood

Zoya- Asad tum theek toh hona

Asad- zoya I'm absolutely fine don't worry, waise zoya ek baat puchu

Zoya- haan pucho na

Asad- kya tum kissi say mohobbat karti ho
Asking her this question were doing weird things in his heart

Zoya- haan
Her answer broke asad's heart and he didn't kow why..

Asad- kisse? kya main usska naam jaan sakta hu

Zoya- sorry asad par mai iss bare mai abhi kuch nahi bata sakti waqt anne par tumhe khud ba khud pata chal jayenga with that she stood up good night asad and walked away

Asad- good night chasmish...kya woh jiss ladke say mohobbat karti hai kahi woh rehan toh nahi mujhe kyun acha nahi lag raha hai yeh sun kar why does it feel like somebody is piersing millions of needles through my heart...

The next morning

Zainab was making breakfast in the kitchen when dilshad came there to help her
Zainab- Arre dilshad tum rakho mai kar lungi

Dilshad- itney sare logo ka breakfast banana hai agaar 2 hathon ki jagah chaar hath aajenge toh easily sab kaam jaldi hoga

Soon they were finished with all the work and dilshad quickly made 2 cup of coffee while the two friends sat and started talking

Dilshad- waqt kitne jaldi guzar jaata hai pata nahi chalta aisa lagta hai lakki hi toh baat thi jab hum pehli baar mile college kay dino kay baad jab mere paas mere teen angels the aur unke sath mai hum yaha shift hue the pehle humari dosti humare liye sab kuch thi phir humare bacho ki dosti neh humara naya rishta bana diya 10 saal kay baad mile hai par aaj bhi unme wahi bachpana aajata hai jab woh ek dusre kay sath hote hai

Zainab- sahi kehrahi ho aaj bhi zoya aur humaira mujhe wohi choti angels lagti hai jo pure ghar mai goom kay iss ghar ko zinda banna ti hai par abhi kuch hi mahino mai yah 1-2 saal mai unka bhi nikah hojayenga aur woh mujhe chor kar chale jayenge unke shohar kay gharo ko jannat banna ney

Dilshad- hmmm sahi kehrahi ho zainab aaj tak maine jo bhi manga hai tumne mujhe kushi kushi diya hai aur aaj bhi mai tumse kuch mang na chati hu sahi kahu toh ussi kay liye mai kabse intezaar kar rahi hu

Zainab- jo mang na hai mango sab kuch tum hara hi toh hai

Dilshad- Zoya...mujhe zoya chahiye

Zainab- zoya matlab...

Dilshad- zainab mai chati hu kay zoya mera ghar ko jannat banaye mai zoya ko appne ghar ki bahu banna chati hu kya tumhe yeh rishta qubool hai

They didn't know but 1 pair of ears heard their whole conversation and was shock and happy at the same time...
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Precap- mayrah to come back with a surprise
Asad to say yes for the nikaah
Now that mayrah is back why would asad say yes for the nikaah to know keep reading this ff

Sorry once again to all of you who read this story
Tomatoes shoes eggs all kind of vegies accept curly flower
Next update will be up on a sunday...

Love Aarushii




Edited by loveassh - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
😊
Yay welcome back
Love the update
Oh he didn't know she sing so well
A lot of things u don't know Asad
Jealous Asad love it and he don't know y he is jealous
That is the fun part
I wish it was written in more english
Love zoya shouting at him and taking control to look after his wound
Oh he is pained seeing her so hurt taking care of him
Ha so he asked her if ah love someone
She said yes he asked who she didn't give an answer
So radil is happy in seeing asya and wants zoya as their bahu
Love dilshad asking zainab for zoya
Wondering who heard the convo
Was it Asad the person is shocked but happy at the same time
Precap is interesting
Mayrah back but Asad said yes to marry zoya
Interesting
Continue soon

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