ASYA SS- Dotted Line- Chapter 12 Updated- Page 143 - Page 99

Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty

letter heads advt prints banano. easy banate time takes. first baby step to multimedia animation

Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty

Apatato u should return to my lap 😛

Originally posted by: -Prinky-

Amazing !!!!!! 👏👏

Thank you so much Dipty! Where are you? How are you? All okay?

i can't explain Sadia...how beautifully you portrayed AsYa here...the way both are dealing with this new born feelings...its seems so natural...

Really! I tried to give a natural feeling but it takes longer time!!

Their little talks...messages...his feelings reading that "us" in her message...her frown on his reply but again reasoning herself that he was busy...his doubt seeing her happy with ayaan & the next moment reminding himself the promise...& his way of using words to compliment her..."You look serene"...the intensity of the word...ohh Sadia I can imagine how Zoya may feel when she read it...

Zoya felt giddy! I just enjoyed to write this update..how I wished they would a bit relaxed and do some conversation about their life in the show too.

Then the most beautiful part of this update...Rain...the significant part of their journey...this time rain drenched them with the new joy...that slow walk in the rain...with each other...Asad's reaction when she said..."I enjoyed with you"...& the song was so perfect..."Jo degi haath tu , dunga main saath yun, main tere saath hoon, chal ab chal pade"...that are truly for them...

I love rain! My mom loved it too. My moms and dad's love journey started in the rain..so rain is always special for me too. The song was appropriate for this update. I am listening to it on loops and the update just shaped up int his way. Glad you loved it the most.

Their trust in each other...that is the magic of their relationship...

Such a brilliant job dear...👏👏 Loved the every bit of it...& I mean it...

continue soon...

Thanks for pm 😊

Loved your comment as always. 🤗

Say hi to your shona

and please write more!

Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty

cause i miss u :( yea dooriyaaa

Originally posted by: gowtu

Wwooowww it was sch an amzng updt swapno...
Loved it... Loved d way u wrote..
I enjoyed their convo...
Song seq was awesome..
I totally loved dis updt...

Originally posted by: MayurChan

Beautiful , Esctatic and Blissfull...
It feels real for some reason...but then All good things in life are ficitious..
Have no proper words to explain...but very very Good chapt.
Continue soonish..

Originally posted by: asifiqbalsh

Nice update
Loved it.
Liked the way zoya told him that she like his company, wish she said everything which she thought. She told him to forget the past & move on. Update soon plz. Thanks for pm

Originally posted by: azsumay

Hey swapno

Just loved it

Asya both understandable

Message session was too good

They enjoy to spend time each other

Asad dance with zoya

They attached with emotion of each other

Very well written

If you get time plz send me Asya pic which you have

Nice collection

Lol

Originally posted by: 1788shreya

Lovely chapter

Eagerly waiting for the next

Continue soon