ASYA SS- Dotted Line- Chapter 12 Updated- Page 143

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Kabhibloom

@Kabhibloom

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#711

loved it. Awesome chapter. What's the bomb dropped by shireen very curious about that. Continue soon.

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Priya_KABHI

@PriyaKABHI

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#712

Originally posted by: swapno

Hey Priya...
How is your father doing??
I am glad you loved it...
Well Asad was the person but both don't know about it..
They will act like them only...
Will try to update soon

Thanks for Reply.😊

My Father is Fine,dear.😊

Thats so Nice of You.😊

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A.S.K

@ToughStuff

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#713

Nice update...
AsYa busy in their own worlds...
Next how many months or years leap??...
And now comes ZoYaan too I think...
Thanks for Pm

Edited by Persiko - 10 years ago

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H.e.n.a

@H.e.n.a

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Posted: 10 years ago

#714

Hi Swapno!

Sorry for being late as I was busy with my xm n still on going xms.

Commenting for last 3 chapters...

Firstly they parted without a proper good bye, sad it was.

Then how nicely u described the whole six years story of both of them in just one chapter n never it seems like u r rushing!

Seriously I love ur writing style!

Then they meet finally n what a change in their character!! They simply got lost in each other. Liked the bond between Ayan Zoya n Humera.

Zoya working for Asad company too!! Liked it.

N Shireen is a lovely mother here. I liked her character here.

Now at the last may be She is talking about the marriage proposal?? Zoya n Asad??😉

Loved it! Update soon. Though I don't know when I'll be able to read it 😆

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aniha

@Aniha

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#715

Waiting to see what you upto by shireen 😛 Next update now 🤔

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aniha

@Aniha

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#716

Originally posted by: swapno

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😲 🤓 😳

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Asif

@asifiqbalsh

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#717

Nice update
Asya convo was nice. Asad appreciated her efforts & felt proud. Zoya was happy to see that. Zoya & ayaan become friends. She enjoyed her time with this family which became her family now. Shireen visit & cliffy end. Update soon plz. Thanks for pm