ASYA SS- Dotted Line- Chapter 12 Updated- Page 143

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Sadia Sharmeen Swapno

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Posted: 10 years ago

#631

Originally posted by: jayasree.rao
Beautiful

Thank you so much 😊

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Sadia Sharmeen Swapno

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Posted: 10 years ago

#632

Originally posted by: Tunailuvsahil
Ohhh!!!they meets after 6 yers nice updt

Thanks...glad you like it...😊

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Sadia Sharmeen Swapno

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Posted: 10 years ago

#633

Originally posted by: suearmaniac
loved the update sooo much yaar!!!
ur awesome !!!😉
m waiting nd excited to know more
pls update quickly😃
ps. i love those lines written in the beginning❤️

Thank you so much 😊

I love to read your writing more...!

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Sadia Sharmeen Swapno

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Posted: 10 years ago

#634

Originally posted by: Azraa01
Loved the update

Thank you so much 😊

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aniha

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Posted: 10 years ago

#635

Hello 😳
Will read after my class !!

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Sadia Sharmeen Swapno

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Posted: 10 years ago

#636

Originally posted by: MayurChan
Heyy Swapno... 😊
Thanx alot for the PM... 😛
Waise How are you BTW..? Any relief from your Stressful schedule..?😳
Update was Very Wonderfully Written... 👏 Beautiful ( They way you described the sceanic beauty.) 👏😳 and Brilliant & a special mention to the lines at the starting...they were perfect... ⭐️
SIX years.😲 six years of seperation...what is this new obsession of writers with this number and seperation..😆
While reading about Zoya and her life in the six years...you get a proud feeling...ki Yeah...she made a very wonderful , respectful and satisfied life for herself...It was very satisfying to know about her achievements in these six years.. 👏 but still she is alone at one...nobody to call a family...😕
Asad...his life was same before 6 years...and the same with more added seriousness...and present also.. the only change was that..he has developed some good bonds with his father's second family..Ayaan & Najma...also..that is good... 😊 but yet he is still A lone bearrier of his life..
Their meeting part was written very beautifully and fantastically 👏 for a change their was no falling in Arms...and I liked it.. 😉
Excellent part...Swapno.. ⭐️ Enjoyed reading it.. 😊
Continue soonish... 😃

Hey Mayur...I am not so fine...under a heat stroke so in a leave for some days..!

Thank you so much for your long, descriptive comments...loved to read it...

Glad you loved it...

For the starting line ...well thank the journey band 😆

Separation but I guess I did not stress it..Aah yeah...I realized it after writing it..

Every writer is now for separation track...

Zoya is a strong character yet it has some flaws...it will come over the time...

She had luck and used it...!

She did not trust when it comes to a family..because of her independence she was insecure about it

Asad had go through some sad event back to back his life...within one months he lost his father and father like Uncle...so he had to be serious...and as he is responsible he had to take care of Nazma too...

I am so happy that you enjoyed it while reading..

Thanks again...!

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Sadia Sharmeen Swapno

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Posted: 10 years ago

#637

Originally posted by: aniha20
Hello 😳
Will read after my class !!

🤗

How are you???

Okay read when you want...😊

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Sadia Sharmeen Swapno

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Posted: 10 years ago

#638

Originally posted by: -Crazy4AsYa-
sadia 😡
u left it at the exact place!!?
how could u do it with my poor heart???

now i'll be happy when you update the next part...

eagerly waiting for asya's convo!!!

btw...this update was superb! so much had happened in these 6 years...but both didn't forget each other...that's the best part

cont super soon

hello Srash 🤗

Errrmmm it was getting long so I thought to stop there...!

Aww...Srash your heart is not weak I know...

Well well well you will be happy in next part in some extent but not everlasting one

AsYa's convo will be like them only...

Will try to update soon