SaHil OS: Love Unspoken

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hi guys ! I'm feeling a little melancholy so this happened.
This is me releasing a balloon into IF, about my fear of SaHil separation...
Hope you guys like it, even if you don't , share my melancholy ...

❤️ sageflower7

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Sanam stood looking into the plot of land. The evening breeze ran through her hair, giving her exhilarating feeling; she felt like she was flying, free. But a heavy stone has settled in her heart, spoiling her happiness somewhat.

Aahil had brought her here this evening, eagerly wanting to share his surprise for her. His excitement was infectious, she couldn't help but feel happy too. He was a changed man this morning, his tread light and the everpresent frown had disappeared. His eyes were clear and soft, and she saw Love in them, for her. She was sure of it.

She was ecstatic, the man she loved with all her heart, loved her back. It was there in his gaze, his gentle touch, his soft kiss on her forehead. She got swept in by the heady emotion, she left her pragmatic self behind somewhere.

He laughed and cajoled her the whole way, refusing to tell her where they were going. Then they arrived at an empty plot of land, with nothing on it. She looked at him, curious.

"For you, Sanam. I'm building our dream house here, for us. With the breezy garden, lots of windows and sunshine, and happiness. With that bedroom and the adjoining rooms for the kids. Our kids, Sanam..." he spoke facing the steering wheel, as though feeling shy.

She turned to the grassy area, bewitched. She stepped out of the car, and the breeze hit her. Suddenly she could see it; the gateway, garden with a fountain and the big white house. For the first time in her life, she allowed herself to be carried away by her imaginations. She spread out her arms wide, a huge smile splitting her face.

Aahil appeared behind her, his hands gently supporting her from behind. His hands ran over her underarms and hooked around her wrists. He brought her one arm back around his head; her hand running through his hair in their own volition, as he bent to kiss the angle of her neck.

The electricity shot through her like sword. His lips kissed its way up her neck to her cheek. While his arms snaked around her bare waist to clutch her tightly. Feeling rather exposed, she shivered a little. He turned her in his arms and engulfed her tightly, the strength in the hug made her tear a little.

"You've freed me Sanam. From the weight that settled on my head. No one has done this much for me ever. Thank you.", he spoke solemnly. "I want you Sanam. I can't imagine life without you, please say you'll stay with me for always..." he spoke into her hair, arms holding her tight. "I love you, Sanam..."

Sanam closed her eyes and let the words wash over her. She didn't trust herself to speak, tears were clogging her throat. Aahil released her and tilted her chin to look into her eyes. Awash with tears, they shone with a reply for his declaration.

"Say the words, Sanam... " he pleaded smilingly.

He backed her against his car bonnet, when she had nowhere else to go, he lay her down on it.

"Say the words, Sanam..." he persisted. She started to giggle in response and his eyes narrowed. His eye had the gleam of retribution, and was about to kiss her senseless until the words tumbled out of her.

Suddenly, headlights shone at them, intruding their private rendezvous. Two women appeared from the intruding car, waving at Aahil gaily. He lifted her up from the bonnet and tucked her behind him , giving her privacy to straighten up behind him.

"Hey Aahil !! Fancy meeting you here !! Long time no see, you stud ! Where have you been hiding??"

"Natasha! Tina! What are you guys doing here?" He sounds flustered; uncanny that two of his previous flings suddenly appeared here of all places.

Sanam watches the two women touch and pat Aahil's back and shoulder, much too friendly for her liking. One was looking at him coyly and suggestively, the other teasing.

"So now, the Shark is married? And to a country bumpkin, no less?? Poor Aahil... A man like you is more suited to modern sexy types no? " the taller one with awfully big teeth said. They spoke to him as though she wasn't there. Aahil shuffled uncomfortably, clearly thinking of getting rid of them quickly.

Sanam turned away from the trio, looked instead at the grassy land he had just given her. The house looked faded in her mind now, like a dream. Dream house though it was, Sanam thought absently. The voices behind her faded away as her focus shifted to her heavier thoughts.

Pragmatic Sanam had returned...

Was this really Love?

Or is it gratitude? Because she helped him through his fears?

Is he settling for less because he feels indebted at this moment?

What if he looks back later and wished for someone more suited to his lifestyle? Whom he could have scintillating conversations with? Whom he could show off proudly to his friends...

Who was she but a cook? A poor person who wasn't as educated as him?

"Sanam?" Aahil's voice startled her out of her deep reverie. She turned to him and gave him a distracted smile. He took her hand and pulled her close.

"I don't know how these two appeared here, Sanam. Believe me I had nothing to do with it.. " Aahil sensed a need to explain, that she shushed, "Forget it Aahil, please let's go home..."

Aahil watched Sanam seat herself in the car, the previous mood gone. He got into the car and looked at her, as she looked out at the land wistfully. He started the car and drove back to the mansion.

Reaching the house, he parked and took hold of her hand. Unable to stand her horrible silence, he was about to make her spit out what was bothering her,when Ammi appeared at the door.

"Aahil? Aahil beta is that you? " she called out. They both scrambled out of the car quickly and made towards Tanveer.

Aahil led his mother inside. She eagerly sits him down to talk about some legal papers she has just gotten. He sighs warily at her persistence and is taken to task for it. She pushes a pen into his hands and forces him to sign the papers right then. When Aahil picks up the pen and starts to sign his name, she adds, "I have wonderful news for you, son! The divorce papers you have been waiting for will be ready very soon. You'll get them in two days. Then you'll be free of this marriage forever !! isn't that wonderful news??"

Aahil gaped at his mother. But the light anklebell sound behind him made him cold all over. He turned to see Sanam's face, shuttered. He willed her to look him in the eye, so he can negate these awful things she's heard. But she refused to look at him, instead walked away to their room.

Sanam removed her silk saree, and changed into her cotton salwar. She curled into bed and pretended to sleep. Sometime later Aahil touched her shoulder, "Sanam? Can we talk please?"

But she kept her eyes closed, feigning sleep.

***THE END***

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tleshni thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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This is so good.. Oh no misunderstanding by Sanam... I hate separations 😭...
You HAVE to continue..cant leave us hanging like this...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Lovely balloon SF
I don't know whether I'm being optimistic or delusional here, I don't see SaHil separation anytime soon. IMO Ahil won't be able to confess bcoz of his friends' interruption and it'll be his turn to work on their marriage & gain Sanam's trust, after Tanveer plays her divorce card.


Edited by simran_singh_24 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice one
Very good
Plz continue this atleast a last part
Preety plz
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Oh Sage, that's wonderful 👍🏼 👏 . Totally loved it ❤️.
First, I had chills and feels. I was very happy for Sanam.Then I laughed (he has ugly girlfriends? Good!!😆). Later felt sorry for Sanam and in the end I was very sad. I even got teary eyed a little. 😭 . Well, Aahil better convince her that she's all that he needs in his life and say I LOVE YOU!!! ☺️ ❤️
Please, do continue for a happy ending please?
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Liked it a lot. I want Aahil to show Sanam and nothing can come between them. I want him to tell her the divorce papers are Tanveer's idea, not his!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Amazing u have to continue!!! With all the weird predictions going on, I feel the twist would just be something as simple as SaHil confessing and Tanveer finding out (even maha episode had no major twist) but what can I say we have creative minds 😆 lol ur story on the other hand is simple n heart touching. I wud love if something like this happens. As in their confession is interrupted, SaHil come home, Tanu says ur finally free beta, Sanam feels Aahil did everything out of gratitude or that maybe he doesnt love her, Aahil tries to explain to Billi that he wants the marriage, she says would Sanam want you after finding out what you have done... Her parents were murdered would she want to marry one? Aahil is shattered. Goes to his room where Sanam asks him when the papers must be signed. Aahil gets mad and then after a heated arguement, they have an intense and angsty confession full of tears and hugs. This is how I envision it. I want things to go positive and so far this season has been surprisingly good at giving us what we want and hopefully it stays that way. Everytime a twist is announced we have given worse case scenarios and maybe thats why we enjoyed the actual episode so much! I'm glad all the ajeeb ideas r discussed beforehand (urs is one of the few ideas thats not ajeeb nor scary lol so I hope the CVs follow ur train of thought lol) . Im excited for Monday but plz update one last part otherwise it seems incomplete. U need to release one more balloon! 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Good One !
But i think the ending is a bit abrupt ...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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One shot!? What!? No... you must continue! 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow Sagey.

Love this so much!


Am all heavy heavy!

And the beauty of it all, the rest is left to our imagination...am happy with the end of this beautiful piece, clearly this is not the end of their story. Just the end of your role or something. I say strange things when am overwhelmed with emotions. So don't worry if you think I'm being, well, strange.


And truly!

I'm so glad you released the balloon. You've let go!


I love every bit of your amazing work! From start till the end!


Miss reading you too, so really! Thank you so much for this! Hayye!


Mwah!

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