SaHil OS: Love Unspoken

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Nitya Suresh

@TheAutumnFizz

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#11

I feel so bad for Sanam really.. I mean how does Tanveer manage to turn all good things ugly is really beyond me.. Uff..
You have to continue soon.. I want to know what happens next!

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Aashka

@Chillichick

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#12

Don't leave us hanging!!

I want a happy ending with all the misunderstandings cleared...!

Please?

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sylvia99

@sylvia99

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#13

It's beautiful.

Mentally prepared for atom bombs.

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fatuimamotala

@fatuimamotala

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#14

That was brilliantly written

thanks

please write more

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Pagalpinky

@Pagalpinky

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#15

Good job

Loved the way he was behind her and put her hands in his hair
Something I'm sure she's wanted to do forever

Uff tanu and her timing

Please make it a happy ending
Thanks!

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Young And Horny!

@Perfectionist2

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#16

It's beautifully written Sagey!

Loved the variations in emotions.
Why didn't Aahil just shut the two down.

If only is my prospect though. If there is a separation track then. ..
I have a feeling it has to be a lot more substantial than mere feelings of inadequate for each other.

Are you writing a part two. A Happy Ending at least here.
As always a very enjoyable piece.
Thank you.