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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: binuuu

loved asya's bond...
I think zoya should tell truth to asad..
he definitely have no problem...
waiting for engagement and wedding ceremony...
pls update soon ...




thanks dear for reading and the comments 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: anopama

Wow love ur story

Found it last night and didn't want to put it down
But I had to as I tend to double read to time runs away with me
So I have caught can't wait for u to continue
It is amazing quiet different
Love the khan family always united
Asad was betrayed by his BFF and he lost trust in relation
But his ammi was determine to marry him to get someone to bring him back
Love nikhat she emotional blackmail the guy to marry
But I guess he was happy bcuz when he saw the girl it was her
The girl who has manage to get his attention and he ends up being her knight in armour
Oh razia can she be more horrible I think zoya should tell asad about her ammi
He has notice her sadness and he know it is link to her mother
I know zoya is adopted but I believe she is gaffur biological daughter bcuz in the beginning he thinks he has taken so much from her that he always gives her what she wants
Continue soon and pm plz
I have sent a buddy request



Welcome to my FF! 😃 Thanks for reading and the awesome comments...will update soon 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ASYA123456

hey nice story! read whole story in 2 days only
waiting for asyas engagement & marriage twist
update soon




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Chapter 11

The families had decided that the engagement will be a private affair with just close family and friends. Gaffur had suggested that they can do it in their back garden and Rashid had happily agreed. The whole garden was decorated with lights. In the middle were four white pillars that made a square. The pillars were connected with golden satin cloth. On top of the cloth hung strings of white and pink carnations intertwined with gold lights. There were chairs placed in a circle around the pillars and two chairs inside for the couple. The fence surrounding the garden was also decorated with lights and strings of flowers. Gaffur was looking over the decorations. He was extremely happy that Zoya was getting married in the khan household. He knew that Asad would give Zoya what he failed to give her, happiness...true happiness. He just prayed that his wife didn't create any issues for Zoya in her wedding. He knew how much she hated Zoya and he was afraid, she will create some problems. He just wanted to fulfill his duty as a father! Perhaps this might be the last time he was doing something for her. His thoughts were interrupted, "kitna kaam karenge aap, waqt horaha hai aap jaake tayaar hojayiye," Razia said walking up him. "meri beti ki shaadi hai main nahi toh kyon karenge," Gaffur replied. "yaad rakhiye woh aap ki kuch nahi lagthi warna aap jaante hai keh kya hoga?" she threatened. "main jaanta hoon Razia, main bhula nahi hoon, tume baar baar yaad dilane ki zaroorat nahi hai," Gaffur said angrily and walked away. "uss ladki ne meri khushiya cheeni thi aur uss kehliye main usse khabhi nahi maaf karongi. Na hi usse khush rehne dungi," Razia thought to herself before following her husband inside the house.

Gaffur sat in his room recalling the day he had bought Zoya home. He closed his eyes as tears filled them. Just a few more days, then his daughter would leave this house! He remembered how much he had protested to bring her into this house. The condition that his wife had kept, he had blindly accepted. Because he had no choice! He didn't want to leave her alone in this brutal world. She needed a father, a home, a family and that is what he had tried to give her. Though in the process, he might have given her thousand sorrows. He was a coward! He was never strong enough to accept the truth and he probably never will be. Now, he just prayed that Zoya found her happiness. He knew that she will make Asad and the khan family her own like she did with anyone. She was her mother in that aspect. She could change anyone's heart and make a space in it. Except for people who didn't have hearts...like his wife, he thought. "Allah maine joh bhi guna kiye ho, meri bacchi koh uski saza mat dehna. Main jaanta hoon keh maine apni ki huwi galati ki maafi khabhi nahi maangi hai lekin aaj maang tha hoon. Paata nahi kyun, yeh sooch kar keh meri bacchi abhi kuch dino mein yaha se chali jayegi, dil bhar sa gaya hai," he thoughts as tears rolled down his cheeks. He removed his glasses and placed them on the table. He saw the image of his two daughters on the night table. Wiping his tears, a smile crept on his lips. At that moment, Zoya walked in, "Abu, kya hua? Aap roh rahe hai?" she asked worried. "nahi beta, kuch nahi. Bas yeh sooch raha hoon keh jab meri beti yaha se chali jayengi toh yeh ghar kitna suna hojayega," he told her. Zoya was surprised. Her father was not very vocal about his feelings, especially not with her. "Abu...aap," she hesistated not sure what to say. Gaffur walked forward and pulled her into an embrace. Zoya closed her eyes as tears brimmed inside. "I will miss you too Abu," she whispered. Gaffur smiled hearing those words. "kuch baat karna tha?" he asked. Zoya quickly wiped her tears, "woh neeche caterers aaye hai," she told him as she broke apart from the hug. "accha. Tum jao tyaar hojao," Gaffur said, patting her head lovingly. Zoya nodded and left the room. This was one of the few times that her father had told her how he felt. This meant a lot to her. May be the fact that she will leave was making him emotional just as it was, she thought.

The sun had set and the decorations looked even more beautiful at night. The khan family arrived and were greeted by Gaffur and Razia. "maaf kijiyega Gaffur saab, hume aane mein thodi dher hogayi, meri ammi aane wali thi aur hum sabh unnika intezaar karahe the lekin unki flight late hogayi toh," Rashid explained. "aree kohi baat nahi Rashid saab, aayiye na aap sabh," Gaffur said inviting them in. Nikhat and Najma asked if they could go see Zoya and went inside the house. Humaira was helping Zoya get ready in her room. As Humaira was pinning Zoya's dupatta, someone knocked on the door. "aayiye," Humaira replied. Seeing Najma and Nikhat, Humaira greeted them. Zoya too turned and greeted them. "haye, meri pyaar devarani kitni khoobsurat lagrahi hai, mashAllah!" Nikhat said. "thanks Bhabhi," Zoya said shyly. "mere bhaijaan koh kohi takar de saktha hai toh woh aap ho Bhabhi," Najma teased as Zoya's cheeks turned crimson red. Downstairs, everyone was seated and Asad was at the venue waiting for Zoya to join him. He looked up at the backyard door to see Zoya being bought down by Nikhat, Humaira, and Najma. He felt his breath get stuck in his throat and his heart fluttered. She looked angelic! Dressed in the white lehenga, she had the dupatta pinned on both her shoulders. She had added matching earrings and a maang teeka. Her bangs were pinned up and the rest of the hair lay on her shoulders, curled. Zoya looked up and smiled at him. Seeing his eyes on him, she felt conscious of herself. She felt a blush creep up her cheeks. He was dressed in a black sherwani looking extremely handsome. Looking at the way Asad was looking at her future bahu, "Asad, sirf dekhne se kuch nahi hoga, usse bol na bhi padega keh woh acchi lagrahi hai," Dilshad whispered. "ammi...woh actually," he mumbled. "bolna hai Asad, bas aur kuch nahi sunna hai mujhe!" she sternly said. As Zoya walked up to them, Dilshad walked up to her, "bahut pyaari lagrahi ho," she said placing a kiss on her forehead. "thanks ammi!" Zoya said smilingly.

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Gaffur asked Rashid if he wanted to wait for his mother but Rashid told them to go ahead with the engagement since it was already late and he didn't want the guests to wait any longer. Everyone gathered in the garden and the family stood around Asad and Zoya. Najma walked in with Zoya's ring and Humaira had Asad's ring. Both Asad and Zoya were nervous, but for different reasons. With this ring, she will be bound by new relationships and new responsibilities. She will be the daughter-in-law of the khan family. Will she be able to fulfill her duties? But, she didn't know anything, she thought. Will she fall in love with Asad like she had always dreamt of. She had wanted to love her husband but she hardly knew Asad. She liked him a little, and respected him, but love? Will she ever feel that for him, she didn't know! Asad, on the other hand, was nervous about how he would keep Zoya happy. Will he be able to accept her fully into his life like a husband should with his wife. Will he be able to trust her after what had happened? And what about love? Will this marriage be just for the sake of their families or will they ever truly get involved in this relationship by heart? Both their thoughts were disturbed when Dilshad called out to them. Najma came forward first and offered the ring to Asad. Asad took the ring and turned to Zoya. He extended his left hand forward asking for her hand. Zoya smiled as she placed her hand in his. She felt a tingle run through her body. Her heart trembled erratically at this touch. Why is it that every time he touched her, she felt like she was on fire, she thought. Asad slipped the ring he had selected on her ring finger as friends and family cheered for the couple. Next, Humaira gave Zoya Asad's ring. She took it and looked at him. He put his hand forward and she placed the ring on his finger sealing their fates together forever. As the ring slipped on its finger, he felt content for some reason. A serene sense of peace and belonging took over his heart. The family hugged and congratulated the couple. "yeh sabh kya horaha hai...humare bina hi yaha sagai bhi hogayi?" someone said and everyone turned at the entrance. Farhan stood with an old lady in her mid-60s dressed in a light green salwar kameez and her head was covered with her dupatta. "ammi!" Rashid said. Dilshad, Nikhat, and Najma quickly covered their heads and went towards her, greeting her. "yeh kya Dilshad tumne sagai bhi kardi?" she said getting mad. "ammi, woh sabh intezaar karahe the aur aap ki flight bhi," Rashid explained when his mother interrupted, "toh kya meri yehi emiyat (value) reha gayi hai iss ghar mein," she told him. "nahi ammi, aisa nahi hai. Aap aayiye na, main aapko Asad ki dulhan se mila thi hoon," Dilshad said trying to change the topic. Suraiya Bano or Badi bi as she was usually addressed diverted her attention to Asad and Zoya who was still at the venue. The family took Badi bi to Zoya and Asad. "ammi, yeh Zoya hai, Asad ki dulhan," Dilshad said introducing Zoya. "as-salamualaykum!" Zoya greeted. "khoobsurat toh bahut hai lekin lagtha hai tumari ammi ne tume tehzeeb nahi sikayi," Suraiya stated as everyone looked at her shocked. "ammi, aap yeh kya bol rahi hai?" Rashid asked. "aur nahi toh kya sir pe pallu bhi nahi le sakthi," Suraiya retorted. Zoya quickly pulled her dupatta over her head, "maaf kijiye," she said. Suraiya just nodded and moved on to meet Zoya's family and others. Tears rolled down Zoya's cheeks and she quickly wiped them away but it didn't go unnoticed by furious Asad.

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Asad tried to talk to Zoya the rest of the evening but was unsuccessful. She was always with someone or the other. At last, the khan family had to leave and everyone greeted each other and they left. Asad didn't really talk to anyone and went straight to his room. He was really angry that Dadi had bought Zoya's mother up. He knew that something was wrong with her and her mother and it always bought tears to her eyes. As much as he had noticed, Razia never talked to Zoya and Zoya too stayed away from her. He decided to take a hot shower trying to put her tearful face away from his eyes. But he couldn't! He had to talk to her. He couldn't sleep peaceful without knowing that she was alright. He didn't know why her tears affected him so much but the fact was that they did. He changed into a cream colored kurta pajama, took his car keys, and rushed out of the house. Parking his car in front of the Siddiqui mansion, he dialed her number. Zoya was on her iPad reading something when she heard her phone ring. "itni raat koh kyon hai?" she thought as she picked the phone and answered without looking. "Zoya, mujhe tumse baat karni hai? She heard his husky voice on the line. "Mr. Khan aap? Iss waqt?" she said. "tum abhi neeche aasakthi ho?" he asked. "Mr. Khan aap neeche hai?" Zoya said shocked. "ha tumare ghar keh bahar intezaar karaha hoon, please mujhse milo," Asad stated. "Mr. Khan main abhi kaise? Kya hum kal nahi mil sakthe?" Zoya said. "agar maine aapse baat nahi ki toh main yaha se nahi jaunga," Asad firmly stated. Zoya sighed. "theek hai, aap ghar keh peeche taraf aayiye main aapko thodi dher mein waha mil thi hoon," Zoya said. Asad agreed and went to the street behind the house.

Minutes later, he heard a "Mr. Khan," and turned to see Zoya on the wall. "Zoya...kya karahi ho?" Asad asked. "catch Mr. Khan!" she said as she jumped and landed into his strong arms. Caught in surprise, he stumbled back but balanced himself. "yeh sabh kya hai?" he asked as he placed her on her feet. "gate khol thi toh awaaz aati iss liye deewar se," Zoya said as he smirked at her. She was mad! But beautifully mad! Dressed in a two piece night suit, she had her hair up in a ponytail. Without any makeup, her skin glowed under the moonlight. Her simplicity reflected in her eyes. She looked extremely beautiful, he thought. Asad, focus! You are here to talk to her, his mind chided. "Mr. Khan aabh kuch boliye na, kyun bhulaya hai mujhe yaha?" she asked bringing him out of his thoughts. "woh actually...mujhe...woh," he hesitated. "Mr. Khan, aap joh bhi chahiye mujhe bol sakthe hai. Boliye na," Zoya said casually. How can she be so calm about things, he thought. If this was him, he would have been breaking the things his room with his blood raging and nostrils flaring. "mujhe tumse maafi mangni thi," Asad said. "maafi? Kyun?" Zoya said confused. "woh meri Dadi ne joh bhi kiya aur kaha uss kehliye I am sorry, I know keh tume hurt hua hai," Asad honestly said. Zoya's smile fell from her lips. "I am sorry Zoya, I didn't mean to," Asad said. "nahi Mr. Khan its ok aur aap please maafi mat mangiye. woh aap ki Dadi hai aur main unki bahut izzat karti hoon, lekin unne meri ammi keh baare mein kuch nahi kehna chahiye tha," Zoya said sadly. "Dadi thodi si, actually nahi bahut conservative hai. Main unse baat karonga," Asad stated. "nahi Mr. Khan, kuch mat kahiye, unne bura lagega," Zoya quickly said. Asad looked at her. There was so much concern and worry in her eyes. She was a special girl, he thought. "theek hai, kosish karonga," Asad said. Zoya jumped with excitement, "thanks Mr. Khan!" she said. "aap aise hi haste rahiye, bahut acchi lagthi hai," Asad said dreamily and Zoya looked at him surprised. "woh main...woh," he mumbled. "aap please yeh sorry bolna chodijiye, aap acche nahi lagthe sorry bol the huwe," Zoya said trying to change the topic. "aur ha Mr. Khan aaj se jab bhi aapko sorry bol na haina toh aap mujhe chocolate deh dijiye, main aapko maaf kardongi," Zoya said. Asad looked at her surprised. She was different than anyone he had met before. Who else would ask chocolates instead of forgiveness, he thought. "Mr. Khan...aapne suna maine kya kaha?" she asked waving her hand in front of his face. Asad came back to reality. "theek hai, next time se yaad rakonga," Asad told her. "next time Mr. Khan? Mujhe toh abhi chahiye," she pouted. "abhi?" Asad said. "ha Mr. Khan, agar aapko maafi chahiye toh mujhe abhi chocolates chahiye warna main aapko maaf nahi karungi," Zoya said as she sat on his car's bonnet. Asad shook his head pinching the bridge of his nose. "this girl was impossible!" he thought. Asad agreed and Zoya sat in the car with him.

They drove around and found a 24 hour pharmacy. Asad made Zoya stay in the car and went in to get the chocolates. Ignoring the guy who was giving him looks for buying chocolates this late, Asad quickly bought the chocolates and left. "yeh lijiye aapke chocolates," he said handing her the chocolates. Zoya happily took it from him and opened one up. Biting into the chocolate, she moaned in pleasure. Asad had a new feeling take over him. A feeling he had never experienced in his life. He wanted to take her into his arms and press his lips against hers sharing her chocolate. Asad slammed on the breaks getting mad at himself. How could he think like this? And why was he thinking like this? What was wrong with him? Her hand on her shoulder bought him out of his thoughts, "kya hua Mr. Khan...sabh theek toh hai?" Zoya asked. "yeah," he said as he started to drive again. Asad drove to the back of the house, "lijiye aagaye," he said. Turning around he saw her cuddled onto the seat, sleeping peaceful. A smile crept onto his lips. He moved forward and wiped the tiny, smudge of chocolate from the corner of her lips. Feeling his touch, her eyes shot up. "sorry Mr. Khan paata nahi kaise meri aankh lagayi," Zoya said sitting up. "Zoya, agar main sorry nahi bol saktha toh tum bhi nayi warna main bhi tumse kuch maang lunga," Asad teased. "theek hai kuch nahi bolungi," Zoya said as she giggled. "good night Zoya!" he said. "good night Mr. Khan," Zoya said with a smile. Zoya jumped on the wall again and went inside the walls. Asad watched her safely reach inside before driving away with a smile.


So they are engaged! 😛😉 Thanks everyone for reading and the lovely comments, it really means a lot 🤗🤗🤗 Looking forward to your comments on this chapter! 😊

Edited by asyasahil928 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
wow lovely part
finally asya are engaged
excited for upcoming marriage
i hope dadi and razia dont create problems
thanx for pm
plz pm me for next part
continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Great update. . Very sweet. .
Thanks for updating
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Posted: 10 years ago
Lovely update... Really glad that the two of them ate engageged... But I really hope zoya comes clean abt her background to asad soon...knowing razia she would soon do so.etching or the other to spoil things for zoya... Eagerly waiting for ur next update...
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Posted: 10 years ago
wonderful update...
enjoyed a lot...
engagement done now waiting for Asya wedding...
liked asad thoughts of kissing her... bacha bada ho rha hai great...
thnxxx for pm...
cont soon and do pm me...

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