Hello everyone, My name is Afreen. I am a huge fan of asya and have been watching qubool hai since the beginning of the show. I wanted to write a FF for a long time now but was busy with school so I am finally writing it now. I hope you all like it :)
Link to thread II: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/119155845
Chapter 1
It was a bright, sunny morning in the city of Bhopal. The birds were chirping away and roses were blooming in the garden. In a large white bungalow, a man in his 50s was seated in his study with a file in his hand. He was none other than Mr. Gaffur Ahmed Siddiqui, one of the leading business and Islamic members of the Bhopal community. He was trying to concentrate on reading his work file but his daughter who was standing in front with her hands folded pleading him was distracting him. He looked up at her from his file. Dressed in a blue jeans and pink kurti, she had her hair tied up in a loose bun, she had her hands folded and her innocent eyes looking at him, "please abu...please!!!!!!" she said. He smiled, she resembled so much to her mother, he thought. "zoya...maine kaha na tum nahi jasakthi, tum bacchi nahi rahi keh aise zid karo," he said. Zoya pouted. "abu please...sirf ek...," she was trying to convince him when her mother interrupted her. "aabh kya nakre laga rakhe hai issne," she said as she walked in with her husband's tea. Zoya's face suddenly stiffened. If she had any hopes before, now they were all gone. "razia yeh kehrahi hai keh isse ek meine sehar keh uss par jaake school mein padana hai aur wahi rehna hai," gaffur replied. "kya? Iss kehliye shaadi keh rishte aarahe hai aur yeh ladki koh humare ghar ki izzat pure shehar mein udana hai," she said looking at zoya. "abu please mujhe shaadi nahi karne hai...please abu," zoya said as she looked at her father hoping he would agree. "zoya, maine tumse kaha haina keh tumara yeh sabh karna mujhe manzoor nahi hai. Tumari ammi theek kehrahi, aabhi bahud hogayi tumari mann maani aabh aur nahi," he said angrily.Zoya wanted to leave and just forget about it but she always wanted to be a teacher. She wanted to share her knowledge with others. This was the only opportunity she would probably ever get and she wasn't going to get another chance. Zoya stepped forward and kneeled down in front of him and took her father's hands in hers, "abu mujhe pata hai keh aap nahi chathe keh main ek teacher bano par abu maine bahut mainat se paada abu aur college mein sabh se beech mujhe select kiya hai yeh internship kehliye. Aap dono ne mere liye bahut kuch kiya aur main uss kehliye kuch bhi karsakthi aur karna bhi chahiye. Mujhe sirf yeh ek meine deh dijiye abu, mera sapna jeene kehliye, iss ek meine keh baad main aap joh kahenge main wohi karongi, main vaada karti hoon abu, please abu mujhe yeh waqt deh dijiye," zoya said honeslty as her eyes filled with tears. "aabh bolti hoon toh kahongi keh bolti hai...kya karlongi yeh ek meine mein? Acche ghar ki ladkiya yeh sabh nahi karti par main tume yeh kyun kehrahi hoon, tume kya farak padtha hai. Iss tarah keh kapde pehena, ajeeb arkate karna, aur aabh yeh sabh," razia mocked looking at zoya then at her husband. Zoya didn't say anything and just looked at her abu with hope. Gaffur didn't know what to do. He was a man of principles and his image in society was very important to him. But, he always fell weak for his daughter's wishes. He was strict but didn't have the heart to take away the hope she had in her eyes at the moment. He never said anything when his wife mocked her, he has never told her the truth, and he has taken a lot away from her and the worst was she didn't even know about it.
He caressed her cheek wiping away the tears, "theek hai beta, ja! Deh diya tujhe ek meine ka waqt. Pure karle apne sapne," he told her. A bright smile broke on her lips showing her dimpled cheeks. "thank you abu...you are the best!" she said as she moved forward to hug him. He smiled as he patted her head. "kohi badmashi nahi zoya mujhe kuch shikayat nahi chahiye," he said. "nahi abu main acche se rahongi, I promise. Thank you abu," she said as she ran out of the room. "kya zaroorat thi usse jaane dene ki, kya kahenge sabh. Phele se iss ladki keh harkatoin se hum pareshaan hai aur aabh usse waha akele jaane denge so paata nahi kya hoga. Aise ladki se kohi shaadi nahi karna chahega keha dehte hoon main," she said angrily as she walked off leaving a thoughtful gaffur behind.
What do you guys think? All comments are welcome :) Next chapter coming soon!
I will be starting a PM list soon so please let me know if you would like a PM when I update.
Chapter List:
Chapter 2: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/113599419
Chapter 3: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/113813177
Chapter 4: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/113951344
Chapter 5: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/114070986
Chapter 6: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/114314989
Chapter 7: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/114540508
Chapter 8: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/114809180
Chapter 9: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/114979397
Chapter 10: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/115194437
Chapter 12: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/115710066
Chapter 13: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/115978036
Chapter 14: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/116191088
Chapter 15: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/116358516
Chapter 16: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/116609756
Chapter 17: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/116821532
Chapter 18: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/116984254
Chapter 19: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/117222158
Chapter 20: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/117424753
Chapter 21: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/117601573
Chapter 22: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/117736618
Chapter 23: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/117889489
Chapter 24: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/118001618
Chapter 26: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/118501711
Chapter 27: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/118644424
Chapter 28: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/118826488
Chapter 29: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/119011116
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