Asya FF: Yeh Teri Meri Baatein Link to Thread II on Page 1

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Hello everyone, My name is Afreen. I am a huge fan of asya and have been watching qubool hai since the beginning of the show. I wanted to write a FF for a long time now but was busy with school so I am finally writing it now. I hope you all like it :)


Link to thread II: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/119155845


Chapter 1

It was a bright, sunny morning in the city of Bhopal. The birds were chirping away and roses were blooming in the garden. In a large white bungalow, a man in his 50s was seated in his study with a file in his hand. He was none other than Mr. Gaffur Ahmed Siddiqui, one of the leading business and Islamic members of the Bhopal community. He was trying to concentrate on reading his work file but his daughter who was standing in front with her hands folded pleading him was distracting him. He looked up at her from his file. Dressed in a blue jeans and pink kurti, she had her hair tied up in a loose bun, she had her hands folded and her innocent eyes looking at him, "please abu...please!!!!!!" she said. He smiled, she resembled so much to her mother, he thought. "zoya...maine kaha na tum nahi jasakthi, tum bacchi nahi rahi keh aise zid karo," he said. Zoya pouted. "abu please...sirf ek...," she was trying to convince him when her mother interrupted her. "aabh kya nakre laga rakhe hai issne," she said as she walked in with her husband's tea. Zoya's face suddenly stiffened. If she had any hopes before, now they were all gone. "razia yeh kehrahi hai keh isse ek meine sehar keh uss par jaake school mein padana hai aur wahi rehna hai," gaffur replied. "kya? Iss kehliye shaadi keh rishte aarahe hai aur yeh ladki koh humare ghar ki izzat pure shehar mein udana hai," she said looking at zoya. "abu please mujhe shaadi nahi karne hai...please abu," zoya said as she looked at her father hoping he would agree. "zoya, maine tumse kaha haina keh tumara yeh sabh karna mujhe manzoor nahi hai. Tumari ammi theek kehrahi, aabhi bahud hogayi tumari mann maani aabh aur nahi," he said angrily.

Zoya wanted to leave and just forget about it but she always wanted to be a teacher. She wanted to share her knowledge with others. This was the only opportunity she would probably ever get and she wasn't going to get another chance. Zoya stepped forward and kneeled down in front of him and took her father's hands in hers, "abu mujhe pata hai keh aap nahi chathe keh main ek teacher bano par abu maine bahut mainat se paada abu aur college mein sabh se beech mujhe select kiya hai yeh internship kehliye. Aap dono ne mere liye bahut kuch kiya aur main uss kehliye kuch bhi karsakthi aur karna bhi chahiye. Mujhe sirf yeh ek meine deh dijiye abu, mera sapna jeene kehliye, iss ek meine keh baad main aap joh kahenge main wohi karongi, main vaada karti hoon abu, please abu mujhe yeh waqt deh dijiye," zoya said honeslty as her eyes filled with tears. "aabh bolti hoon toh kahongi keh bolti hai...kya karlongi yeh ek meine mein? Acche ghar ki ladkiya yeh sabh nahi karti par main tume yeh kyun kehrahi hoon, tume kya farak padtha hai. Iss tarah keh kapde pehena, ajeeb arkate karna, aur aabh yeh sabh," razia mocked looking at zoya then at her husband. Zoya didn't say anything and just looked at her abu with hope. Gaffur didn't know what to do. He was a man of principles and his image in society was very important to him. But, he always fell weak for his daughter's wishes. He was strict but didn't have the heart to take away the hope she had in her eyes at the moment. He never said anything when his wife mocked her, he has never told her the truth, and he has taken a lot away from her and the worst was she didn't even know about it.

He caressed her cheek wiping away the tears, "theek hai beta, ja! Deh diya tujhe ek meine ka waqt. Pure karle apne sapne," he told her. A bright smile broke on her lips showing her dimpled cheeks. "thank you abu...you are the best!" she said as she moved forward to hug him. He smiled as he patted her head. "kohi badmashi nahi zoya mujhe kuch shikayat nahi chahiye," he said. "nahi abu main acche se rahongi, I promise. Thank you abu," she said as she ran out of the room. "kya zaroorat thi usse jaane dene ki, kya kahenge sabh. Phele se iss ladki keh harkatoin se hum pareshaan hai aur aabh usse waha akele jaane denge so paata nahi kya hoga. Aise ladki se kohi shaadi nahi karna chahega keha dehte hoon main," she said angrily as she walked off leaving a thoughtful gaffur behind.

What do you guys think? All comments are welcome :) Next chapter coming soon!

I will be starting a PM list soon so please let me know if you would like a PM when I update.


Chapter List:

Chapter 2: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/113599419


Chapter 3: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/113813177

Chapter 4: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/113951344

Chapter 5: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/114070986

Chapter 6: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/114314989

Chapter 7: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/114540508

Chapter 8: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/114809180

Chapter 9: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/114979397

Chapter 10: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/115194437

Chapter 11: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/qubool-hai/4169435/asya-ff-yeh-teri-meri-baatein-link-to-thread-ii-on-page-1?pn=35

Chapter 12: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/115710066

Chapter 13: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/115978036

Chapter 14: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/116191088

Chapter 15: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/116358516

Chapter 16: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/116609756

Chapter 17: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/116821532

Chapter 18: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/116984254

Chapter 19: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/117222158

Chapter 20: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/117424753

Chapter 21: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/117601573

Chapter 22: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/117736618

Chapter 23: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/117889489

Chapter 24: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/118001618

Chapter 25: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/qubool-hai/4169435/asya-ff-yeh-teri-meri-baatein-link-to-thread-ii-on-page-1

Chapter 26: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/118501711

Chapter 27: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/118644424

Chapter 28: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/118826488

Chapter 29: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/119011116

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice start...zoya is gng away for internship...Maybe she meets asad thr. ...cont soon
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hmmm gr8 concept...
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Please Do PM me
I really liked the update
Razia is stepmother
or GaZia adopted her
Im waiting for Asads entry
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nice
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Thanks for all the comments and likes...really means a lot. 🤗🤗🤗Here is the next chapter, all feedback is welcome!

Chapter 2

On the other side of the city, it was a typical weekday morning at the Khan household. Everyone was seated at the dining table for breakfast. A lady in her mid 40s was arranging food in a tray for her son just the way he liked it. "dilshad, tum bhi aajao, khaana thanda horaha hai," her husband said. "ha ek minute rashid, asad ka khaana dehkar aati hoon," dilshad said as she took the tray and left. "abu aapne asad se baat ki, kab tak woh aise hi," a guy at the table spoke. "kitni baar baat karne ki kosish ki hai farhan lekin woh hai keh sunta hi nahi, paata nahi kabh asad sabh bhul kar aage badega," rashid told his oldest son. "abu, main baat karo? Main samajane ki kosish karsakthi hoon," farhan's wife spoke up. Rashid smiled, "nahi nikhat, tumari ammi ne kaha hai keh woh ek baar phir se baat karengi," he told her. "mujhe nahi lagtha keh kohi bhi unne convince kar payega, thanks to that witch sabh barbaad hogaya," a guy whispered to someone. "bhai please don't say that, uski wajase hum sabh suffer karahe hai," the girl whispered back. "haider chachu, najma phuphi, aap yeh kya secret baad karahe hai," a little 3 year old boy spoke up. Najma and haider moved apart and mumbled, "kuch nahi...kuch bhi nahi," najma said. "woh hum college keh bare mein baat karahe hai," haider said trying to save them. "par aap dono toh kohi witch keh baare mein baat karahe the na?" the boy asked innocently. Now all eyes at the table were on najma and haider. They looked at each other and then at the boy. "Imran, apna cereal khatham karo, school bhi toh jaana hai," nikhat said looking at her son. "jee ami," he said as he went back nibbling on his food. "haider, najma, bacche se saamne toh aise baatein mat kiya karo," rashid said sternly. "sorry abu," they both said in unison.

Upstairs, dilshad knocked on her son's room door. "aaye ammi," a stern voice came from inside the room. Dilshad opened the door and walked in with the tray of breakfast to see her son by the mirror. He was dressed in black formal pants and a light blue shirt, struggling with a tie around his neck. She smiled, he would never learn. She placed the tray on the table and walked up to him. She turned him to face her and took the tie from him. "ammi...main karlonga," he said. "asad...zindagi mein har kaam akele nahi karsaktha beta, khabhi na khabhi kissi keh saath ki zaroorat padthi hai," dilshad said as she fixed the tie for him. "ammi main sabh karsaktha hoon, mujhe kohi help ki zaroorat nahi hai," he replied. She took his hand and made him sit on the bed next to her. "asad...main jaanti hoon keh joh kuch huwa tha woh tumare liye bhool na mushkil hai lekin asad sabh waise hi nahi hota jaise woh thi. Zindagi mein aage badh ja beta, jab tak tum aise hi rahoge toh tume kitni takleef hoti rahegi beta. Bhul jao usse...main tumare liye ek acchi ladki," dilshad said when asad interrupted her. "ammi please aabh phir se yeh sabh baatein, mujhe nikaah nahi karna hai please," asad told her firmly. "asad ek baar sooch lo beta," dilshad pleaded. "ammi, jab bhi sooch tha hoon toh sirf mujhe woh pal yaad aata hai jab sabh khatham huwa tha," asad said as he started to walk out the room. "theek hai main kuch nahi kahongi, lekin tum nashta karlena beta, aise hi mat jao," dishad said. "mujhe bhook nahi hai," he said as he grabbed his black coat and briefcase and walked out of the room. "ya allah, kab khatam hoga yeh sabh. Teen sal hogaye phir bhi mera bacche ussi waqt mein ruk gaya hai, meri bas yehi duwa hai keh uski zindagi mein kohi aaye aur uske saare duk lejaye," dilshad prayed as she took the tray of food and followed asad out of the room.

In the Siddiqui household, Zoya ran upstairs and barged into a room, "humi humi humi...guess what?," she yelled happily as she held her younger sister humeira and swung her around the room. "bhaji...abu ne aapko ha kehdiya!" humeira said excitedly. Zoya stopped looking at her sister shocked, "tume kaise paata...tum chup chup keh humari baatein sun rahi thi?" she questioned placing her hands on her hips. Humeira giggled, "nahi bhaji, lekin main jaanti hoon keh aap itne khush kyun hai kyun ki main jaanti hoon keh baccho koh paada na aap ka sapna hai aur aabh who pura hone jaaraha hai," humeira said knowing her sister very well. "ha humi...I am so happy!" zoya said as the sisters hugged. Humeira was zoya's best friend, sister, and a mother sometimes, and sometimes even her enemy to make her realize what was best for her. Humeira loved zoya the most in this world. Zoya was not related to her by blood but it didn't make a difference in the sisters' love. Both their world revolved around each other no matter what the world said. Humeira knew her mother didn't like zoya and she never knew why but she knew that zoya loved her more than anything in the world and she too wanted to give zoya everything. She wanted to make all the bitter words that her mom said to zoya disappear by giving her all the love she can. They broke apart apart happily. "accha aabh meri help kardo na, pure ek meine ki packing karni hai," zoya said. "bilkul bhaji, chaliye," humeira said and both the sisters left to zoya's room to pack for her one month internship.

Will zoya and asad meet? Who is the girl that broke asad's heart? Would asad give life a chance one more? How will this one month internship change zoya's life? To find out keep reading.


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loved the update...
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Thanks for the pm
Why do i have a feeling Zoya broke Asads heart
Im like eagerly waiting for them to meet
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Interesting parts...
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