SS - Just One Glimpse: Chapter 31B (Complete) Pg 77

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Amulya

@Amulya9

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#41

loved d double blast..
that song is my most favorite...
my only hope is zoya's frnds n can some 1 call him as asad in zoya's presence...
my poor asya

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sanah12

@sanah12

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#42

All your stories all the your updates leave me speechless..
These were one of the beautiful updates..
Loved them to the core
Loved asya part the part where she was singing and he stops and goes by her.. It was really emotional and finally asad fainted at last..
Asad is remembering hope he does remember everything asap can't wait for that part..
Zoya can feel that his around she still loves him immensely and cries for him.. Both souls searching for each other unknowingly and connecting...
Zack is really one awesome friend of both leo and angel
Dilshaad and angels part was touching
This is one beautiful story
Do continue asap
Thanks 4 the pm and double updates

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Hafsa

@hafsaraza

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#43

Lovley updates! hope they get to know about their past and reuniteee 😃

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Alone111

@Alone111

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#44

Saimaaa 😭 😭
Y r u doing dis to me 😭 😭
I dnt knw y but bahut emotional hojaati hoon when ever I read it 😭 😭
Aaj ''Teri jarooratt'' ne tho rola hi diya... SAchhhiii mein 😭

That was amzng updt saimaaa
I loved ittt 😛
It was filled with full of emotions... I loved each nd evry word of dis one...

Congo for new thread...
How r u... Hp u r fn..

Huh lst thread...! How many parts r left 😕
I guess truth ll out on Leo's b'dy party...
Uuummm ruby nd jai aayenge naaa!!!!!!
They r my only hope...

Continue soon

Edited by gowtu - 11 years ago

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Alone111

@Alone111

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#45

Aap jo bhi likho mujhe acha lagta haiii
Pata nai kyonnn 😔 🤗

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Prazeena Bhattarai

@Aneezarp27

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#46

Beautiful update sissy!
Wasn't expecting the doubles!

How could I forget Ruby...ohh! She has seen Asad Ahmed Khan..ray of hope!

For a while, i had a feeling that zoya came to realize that Leo is Asad..

Can't wait for the next chapter now!

Update soonisshh!
Love

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Prazeena Bhattarai

@Aneezarp27

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#47

congrats on the new thread :)

p.s i hate making comments through cellphone...bt can't help..

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jasmine ansari

@AMMY12

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#48

awsm update
luvd it
thanx for the pm
cont asap
t.c

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aseela sha

@aseelashah

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#49

Congo for the new thread dear

I am speechless dear

I dont get any words to describe what i am feeling now

Its brilliant dear

Hats off to u👏

The feelings both ASYA undergoing is very well described

I just love it dear

Pls pls update soon

Thanks for pm

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Nim

@Rarepearl

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#50

Hey Sis,

The part was awesome. You've left me awestruck with the choice of song. It so clearly depicted the inner turmoil of Zoya & how she needed her love to get out of all the mess. I don't think there's any better song to depict her troubled thoughts & grief.

The scene was written so perfectly. Both of them fighting their inner battles, their conscience which was leading them to each other. Oh I had tears in my eyes seeing the pain both of them are experiencing. Asad despite having seen her remembers nothing but feels that pull constricting his chest everytime he hears or sees her & she who hasn't had a glimpse of him feels his essence, his smell, his voice but still is confused as to how that was possible.

Sis, you're a genius. You've portrayed their turmoil so well. I am loving it.

Dilshad was right, sometimes you can connect with a stranger better than you could with your family members. It was really kind of her to ask Zoe to share her pain. At least because of that Zoe, involuntarily, gave out about having loved & still loving & living for one person, who she has lost.

Waiting for her friends to join them at the party. Please update soon. like really soon.

Congrats on the new thread. Thank you for the double updates.

Love..