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Thank you for the res Sis, warna I would have been the last one to comment. š¤
Coming to the story, I'm really sorry for being unable to comment here although I read every chap.
Sis, honestly I'm speechless after the last part. It was so damn Amazing, the whole story. Now that I look back, I am convinced that this story wouldn't have turned out like this is you hadn't included that earthquake twist. Though it was sad & heart breaking to see AsYa suffer without each other even when they were in touching distance but then both of them emerged victorious in the test fate had put them through.
I Loved every bit of the last chap, A & B. I remembered, from next time I'm going to ask you to select songs for me, Gosh, how do you even do that. I mean every song looked as if it was meant just for this story & described their emotions.
I was in tears seeing the turmoil Asad was going through on seeing Zoya in his office. Zoya's words, her way of breaking through him was so unique, dat song was heart touching. I was sooo happy when he admitted his love once again.
I loved Asad's proposal.
You know I've grown so attached to Zack that now I think next time I write a story, he's going to be Asad's bf, if you don't mind. Seriously after TPM only I was in love wid him but seeing what he did here made him respect and love him all the more. His words to Asad just before their Nikaah showed just how much of a good person he was.
Ohh man, Sisss.. Your poem took my breath away. You are so so talented MashAllah. You've got to let me know how you do all this. That scene was just so perfect. I had goose bumps reading it.
Well another beautiful story comes to an end like all good things do. But honestly it has been a wonderful journey with AsYa and you. I enjoyed every chapter, every bit. Once again you've proved that you're one of the few writers here who can capture the readers with their words and give us stories that are mind blowing and close to reality, still being fiction. You are a āļø Sis. don't deny cause I'm not going to believe you for a second.
Lots of love and a huge thank you for sharing this heart touching story with us.
Muaahš¤
Advocate Anjali Awasthi
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