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Posted: 10 years ago
Salam...
how r u all... hope all r fine... i know i m late but i was busy with typing... it was the most difficult part to write... actually i m here to inform you that may be some of you find it not too good so sorry in advance... but i hope i have done a justice to this part...
now thank you for supporting me... i really enjoyed when u showered me so many wonderful replies...
thanks again...
with love Ashii...
Edited by ashiii333 - 10 years ago
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Adhoori Mohabbat


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Part 19 A:

Ayesha was cursing herself for being a failed mother and Arman was consoling her... Asma made his way in Aman's room in order to inject him Anesthesia... she was about to inject him when Asad entered...
Asad: what are you doing???
Asma: bhaijan wo main...
Asad: mjhy Aman se bat karni hain...
Asma: par Ayesha ne kaha k...
Asad: haan lekin mjhy Aman se bat karni hai... excuse us plzzz...
Asma: bhaijan... be careful...
Asad: I know Asma...
Asma left the room... Asad came and sat on Aman's bed...
Aman: Mr. Khan apko kya bat karni hai???
Asad: mjhy apko Zoya k bary main btana hai...
Aman: not now Mr. Khan... abhi meri vaja se mama bhi naraz ho kar gayi hain...
Asad: apko Zoya ko dekhna hai na???
Aman: haan par abhi mjhy apny...
Asad: papa se milna hai... right???
Aman: hmm... he nodded...
Asad took out his cell phone from his pocket and opened a pic of his and Zoya's wedding and showed to Aman... Aman looked at his cell phone and found his mother with Mr. Khan... he took his cell phone from his hands and looked again with shock visible on his face...
Aman: Mr. Khan yeh to mama ki pic hai... app k pass kesy aayi???
Asad: yeh meri Zoya hai...
Aman: no Mr. Khan... she is my mama... Ayesha Khan...
Asad: she is Zoya Asad Ahmad Khan... my wife... your mama Aman...
Aman: eska matlab app...
Asad: I m your father Aman... I m your father... he said holding his hands...
Aman: app yeh sab mjhy mama k kehny pe kar rahy ho na... okay fine mjhy nahi milna apny papa se...
Asad: aisi bat nahi hai Aman...
Aman: Mr. Khan you are my only friend... main apko nahi khona chahta...
Asad: Aman I m your father... its true... acha yeh dekho... he showed her Zoya's pic before their wedding...
Aman: meri mama hi apki Zoya hain...
Asad: hmm...
Aman: app ne mjhy pehly kyun nahi btaya???
Asad: mjhy nahi pata tha k apki mama hi Zoya hain...
Aman: I missed you papa... saying so he hugged Asad...
Asad too hugged him back and cried his heart out...
Asad: I love you Aman...
Aman: I love you too... app mjhy chor k nahi jao gey na???
Asad: kabhi nahi... kabhi bhi nahi... he kissed on his cheeks ans hugged him again...
Aman: app ne mama ko btaya???

Asad: nahi... actually unhy aisy btana risky ho sakta hai...
Aman: meri mama boht strong hain... wo samjh jayen gi...
Asad: now you have to promise me... you are going to fine... promise me Aman...
Aman: aaj main 1st time apny papa se mila hoon or ab to mjhy jaldi se acha hona hoga... so I promise Mr. Khan... I will be fine... he shakes a hand with Asad...
Asad: that's like my boy... ab Asma aunty apko injection dengi us k bad apko nend aa jae gi or jab app utho gey...
Aman: I need my mama papa beside me... he ordered...
Asad: okay done... he kissed his forehead and left from there...
Asad came outside and signaled Asma to resume her work... he found Ayesha sitting on the floor... he made up his mind to face the truth without wasting more time... OT was ready... Asma took Aman inside the OT and came back to Ayesha...
Asma: Ayesha I will try my level best... just pray to God... she was about to go when Ayesha held her hand...
Ayesha: agar mere bety ko kuch hua to aaj k bad aik maa kabhi bhi kisi pe bharosa nahi kary gi...
Asma: you can trust me Ayesha... she said and placed a hand on her shoulder and left for OT...
Ayesha sighed and took a deep breath... she wiped her tears and asked Arman to be there...
Arman: aapi app kahan ja rahi hain???
Ayesha: I can't stand here... I felt suffocated... I'll be back in a while...
Arman: par appi Aman...
Ayesha: kaha na main aa jaongi... saying so she left from there...
Asad was observing her moves and he asked Arman to relax as he too went behind her... she came out of the building and fell on her knees... she was crying loudly... she was feeling defeated... being a mother she was unable to remove the pain from which her son was suffering... Asad was watching her... he too cried with her... he wanted to be with her... he wanted to erase her pain... he went in parking area and brought his car... he stopped his car in front of her... she looked at him and ignored him...
Asad: Ayesha get in the car...
Ayesha: leave me alone... she yelled at him...
Asad: I said get in the car... for Aman's sake...
Ayesha looked at him again with teary eyes and he nodded at him to came inside the car... she don't know why but she obeyed him and sat in the car and he drove them away from the hospital... may she needed a shoulder to cry and Asad was always there for her... she was sitting silently and crying... Asad was driving fast... actually he wanted to do it as soon as possible... he drove them to KV and asked her to come inside...
Asad: andar chalen???
Ayesha: mjhy nahi aana...
Asad: I know you are not in your senses but trust me for once and follow me... he said opening side door for her...
Ayesha was actually not in her senses... she was doing what he was saying her to do... and the reason was Aman... yes Aman... she thought that Asad too loves her son so if she spend some time with him then she will be close to her son...
Asad and Ayesha came inside... she was standing in the hall when he held her hand...
Asad: Ayesha I m going to tell you your's life biggest truth... I know it shouldn't have happened like this but I have no choice...
Ayesha: I m not getting your point... app mere barey main kya janty hain???
Asad: app mere sath aaiye... he took her to Zoya's room and switched on the lights...

Ayesha was already not in her senses and then Asad was saying strange things to her but when she looked at the walls of Asad's wife room... she got the shock of her life... she stopped dead in her tracks... she felt Asad forcing her to come inside but she was unable to move an inch... Asad forcibly made her sat on the bed and kneeled down before her...
Asad: I know tum kya soch rahi ho... par react karny se pehly yeh letter parh lo... he handled her letter written by her baba... she took the letter and started reading that letter...
Ayesha read the letter and looked at Asad who was looking at her with teary eyes... she found just love in them... love... is it really love??? She again read the letter and looked at the walls and got the point which Asad was actually telling her... she took a deep breath and a lone tear escaped from her eye... the letter slipped out from her hands and she held her head which was aching...
Asad was observing her moves and when she again read the letter and looked at her pics as Zoya, he was sure that she got the hint that she is Zoya... and when she held out her head... he got scarred... Asma had warned her that it can be risky but after hearing out Aman's wish he lost his thinking ability... he went and grabbed a glass of water for her and offered her... she took a sip and looked at him again...
Asad: I m sorry... I was not supposed to tell you like this but...
Ayesha: you did it for Aman right???
Asad: Zo... Ayesha I don't know why Allah is punishing us but it's true... you are my Zoya... he said holding her hands...
Ayesha: but how's that possible... I mean it can be a coincidence... ho sakta hai I look alike Zoya only...
Asad: jab mene apko Delhi main dekha tha mjhy laga app shayad mjhy ignore kar rahi hain lekin jab app ne Aman ki qasam khai mjhy yaqeen ho gaya k meri Zoya aisa nahi kar sakti...
Ayesha: app ne mjhy pehly kyun nahi btaya???
Asad: kyun k mjhy khud nahi pata tha... ek pal k liye lagta tha k app Zoya hain par dosry hi pal app mjhy galat prove kar deti thein...
Ayesha: Asad I... I really don't know yeh sab kya ho raha hai... even I don't remember anything... mjhy nahi lagta mene kabhi aisy kapry pehny hongy... I m totally different from your Zoya... she cried...
Asad: I know you are different and you don't need to remember anything... you don't need to stress out yourself... actually my Zoya was loud and joyful... I agree with you... but now you are a mother... you took Aman's responsibility alone so hardships of life changed your personality that's why you are finding Zoya out of your character... you are Zoya and I can prove it... but now we have to be there with Aman... he needs us Ayesha... he said wiping her tears...
Ayesha: may be... actually I m getting some flashbacks from few weeks... I remembered your eyes... I don't know why but I m seeing your eyes in my flashbacks... I m hearing out your "Qubool Hai..." mjhy laga yeh sab stress ki vaja se hai but...
Asad: but you are getting your memory back Zoya... he said hopefully...
Ayesha: haan par mjhy lagta hai I need some time...
Asad: main apni puri zindagi tmhy waqt dy sakta hoon but plzzz be with me... mene Aman se promise kia hai k jab wo hosh main ayega to us k mama papa us k sath hongy... plzzz... he cried...
Ayesha: okay...
Asad: thank you Ayesha...
Ayesha: Ayesha???
Asad: abhi tumhy Zoya nahi keh sakta na... leave it... saying so he left the room...

Scroll down for next part...
Edited by ashiii333 - 10 years ago
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Part 19 B:

Asad came to their favorite place... their bench... he always found that place close to them... he sat there and cried his heart out... he remembered his moments with Zoya and then his memory lane went to Ayesha and Aman... he was with his family but Allah was punishing him for his deeds only... he wanted to be in her arms right now but he knew that its not possible... she remembered him slightly but Zoya and Ayesha both were totally opposite personalities... she needed some time... he too agreed but his heart was craving for her presence... he found her after years and now he has no right to go and embrace her... it will affect her memory and right now Aman was his priority... he was sure that one day he will get his Zoya back... he wiped his tears and called Ayan who informed him that operation is still going on...
Ayesha was sitting on the bed from last hour... she remembered that when she got consciousness she was told that she is Ayesha Khan and she is pregnant... that's it... no clue was given to her about her baby's father and no family members... she started a new life as Ayesha Khan and lived for her son... after her baba's death she was supported by Arman... he was always there for her... but her heart always craved for a family... she wanted to give her son a complete family but nothing was in her hands... she met with Khans... unfortunately their first meeting was not so good but Aman went on a friendship with Asad... Asad was always there for her son like a savior... Aman spent a quality time with his Mr. Khan... she started liking him but she knew her limits... she remembered Asad's love towards Zoya and a lone tear escaped from her eye... she felt bad for him as his own mother was not supporting him... she don't know why but she wanted to erase his pain from a long time but when he told her that she is his Zoya... she believed him but she demanded some time... and he agreed with her... she was confused at her own behavior... now her heart was saying her to go to him... she was fighting with her thoughts and she don't know when her steps took her to him...
Asad was crying when saw her coming towards her... he stood up on seeing her close to him... she was crying too... he wanted to embrace her but her next move shocked him... she hugged him... she hugged him that too willingly...
O zindagi yun gale aa lagi hai, aa lagi hai
Koi khoya huaa barson ke baad aa gaya


Asad slowly placed his hands on her back and reciprocated to her hug...

O pheeke-pheeke the din-raat mere, saath mere
Chhuaa tune toh jeene ka swaad aa gaya
Ek tarah ke awaara thhe
Ek tarah ki awaargi
Deewane toh pehle bhi thhe
Ab aur tarah ki deewaangi
Ayesha was crying for them... she suffered a lot in her life and when she found him crying for her... she just came and hugged him... she missed Aman at that moment and hugged him more tightly... Asad too felt her pain and hugged her tightly... both cried together and Asad sent a silent prayer upwards for giving his life back to him...

Sajde bichhawan ve
O gali gali, o gali gali, o gali gali
Jis sehar vich mera yaar vasda
Kamaana painda ae.. oh khadke oh khadke
Ho itthe Rab na koi udhaar labhda


Asad broke the hug and cupped her face and wiped her tears... she smiled at his move with teary eyes...
Asad: don't... don't cry plzzz...
Ayesha: I m sorry... I know I was too rude...
Asad: sab bhool jao... mene job hi kaha sab bhool jao... just be with me in front of Aman... he needs us... he needs us Ayesha... he cried...
Ayesha: Aman will be fine but Zoya ka kya haan she needs you Asad...
Asad was shocked by hearing her words... he was not believing on his ears... he thought his ears had played a trick with him... shock and disbelief was written on his face... Ayesha tip toed and rested her head against his...
Ayesha: say you are with me... with your Zoya... she said looking in his eyes...
Asad: I m... I m with you Zoya... always... forever... he smiled with teary eyes...
Ayesha: aaj se in fact abhi se app mjhy Zoya bulao gey...
Asad: Zoya... he whispered and kissed her forehead...
Zoya: I missed you Asad...
Asad: I missed you too Zoya... and they hugged again...
AsYa went at Dargah and they prayed together foe their Aman... Zoya was sitting opposite to Asad... her eyes were close she was crying... he was praying too but looking at Zoya only...
Tu Hi, Haan Woh Ghair Hai, Jo Ke Apna Laga
Maangu, Teri Khair Main, Ab Toh Apni Jaga
Main Toh Karoon Rab Se Dua
Mujhe De De Har Gham Tera
Meri Khushiyon Ka Vaasta
Mujhe De De Har Gham Tera
Zoya opened her eyes and found Asad starring at her... she smiled and closed her eyes again and thanked Allah for completing her family...

Teri Inn Haathon Ki Lakeerein
Tum Mila Mere Inn Haathon Ki Lakeeron Se Haan
Milti Hai Sabhi
Kaise Naa Milti Tu Ab Mujhe
Jo Lika Meri Kismat Mein, Naseebon Mein Haan
Tu Toh Hai Wahi
Tu Hi, Haan Woh Dard Hai, Jo Sukoon Hai Mera
Main Toh Karoon Rab Se Dua
Mujhe De De Har Gham Tera
Meri Khushiyon Ka Vaasta
Mujhe De De Har Gham Tera
AsYa came back to hospital and Ayan informed them operation is still on... Zoya was feeling nervous and Asad understood her trauma and came to her and intertwined their hands... both were looking at each other with hopeful eyes when Asma came with other doctors... she came to AsYa...
Asma: Aman is absolutely fine Ayesha... no more restrictions for him... she said happily and placed a hand on her shoulder...
Zoya: Zoya... Zoya Asad Ahmad Khan...
Khans were shocked... but they were happy for them...
Asma: matlab bhaijan ne apko...
Zoya: sab bta dia hai... yeh sab bad ki baatein hain... main Aman se mil sakti hoon...
Asad: Asma hum dono ko Aman se milna hai...
Asma: Aman ko abhi ICU main shift kar dia jaye ga par app log aik sath nahi mil sakty... haan par Aman k hosh main aany k bad usy jab room main shift karengy to app dono sath main mil sakty ho...
Asad: okay... thank you Asma...
Asma: bhaijan... apko thanks kehny ki zaroorat nahi hai... after all Aman se mera bhi rishta hai... excuse me bhaijan... she left from there...
AsYa thanked the doctors and came to ICU where Aman was shifted a while back... both were looking at him from the glass window and held their hands together and planned a happy future with their Aman...



Sooo that's it...
how's it...
hope u like it...
hit like n leave ur replies...
haan ignore my mistakes plzzz...
next update till next week...
with love Ashii...
Edited by ashiii333 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
res 4 aarzoo, jas, hena, nilu, mayur, yumi, abi. asif, sasir, anopama, amu. aroo
sorry if forgot some1 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
ab mera res😛
unres

awesome blossom chapter Ashi👏👏👏
Senti kar diya tune😆
Asya ke emotions dil ko choo gaye😭
Aman Asad meeting was amazing
kitna sportingly liya usne sach ko😛
Zoe on d other hand was hell confused
but her love conqured all difficulties😃
& Asya united again😳
KV ka har scene awesome tha
Aman bhi theek ho gaya🥳
Happy days r back aagain

I have 2 qstns
Zoe ne Asad se rudely baat kyun ki jab usne car main bethne ko kaha unka toh koi jhagda nahi hua tha.
aur dusra yeh ki If i m not wrong jab Delhi main sabne Ayesha ko Zoe samjha tha tab shayad sab ne yeh bola tha usse ki she looked like Zoya. But is part main dono Aysha aur Aman shocked hue cuz they saw Zoya's pic 1st time. I m confuse😕
Edited by jas91 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
ab mujhe jana padega cuz 1 toh page baar baar hang ho raha hai
aur mujhe bhuk bhi lagi hai snack time ho gaya mera lol😳
hope kal wapas old format ho jaye😡
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Posted: 10 years ago
sorry Ashi & bye bye😃
see u 2morrow🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: jas91

sorry Ashi & bye bye😃

see u 2morrow🤗


no sorry 😡
chal c u tomorrow...
bye 🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update. .
Loved asya scene.. that was so emotional. .
Father son scene was amazing..!!
Loved it..!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
awww
awesome
loved it
yayy
today i have tears in my eyes that too happy tears for the first time
u r awesome writer
plz update soon

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