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sardeeeeeep

@saruu.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#941

this chapter is heartbreaking

</3

🥺

TEARS EVERYWHERE

faru look- im doing adult things.

like crying.

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Dhaneshree

@Dhanesh27

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Posted: 10 years ago

#942

Res *breathes in, breathes out*

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Tamara27

@Tamara27

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Posted: 10 years ago

#943

Having a motherf***er of a day at work, and wondering if I'll even get to read Aaloo and part 3 today 😭

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Tamara27

@Tamara27

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Posted: 10 years ago

#944

Originally posted by: suds.

YAASS

AND MORE THAN 1000 COMMENTS !!!!

I think we've established that around 990 of them are just ours 😆

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Young And Horny!

@Perfectionist2

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#945

Sagey I have had a very hectic day n just got home.
I promise to read n comment tomorrow.

Love love.
Juliet.

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fatuimamotala

@fatuimamotala

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#946

Wow that was amazing and sad...

please update soon ..

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mahwash

@Mahu34

Voyager

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Posted: 10 years ago

#947

OH GOD

I feel like my heart has busted out from my chest and shattered into tiny little pieces 💔 😭

Tiny little pieces...

I need a moment, guys...

*Sits by the bed and cries for hours*

Edited by mahwash22 - 10 years ago

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mahwash

@Mahu34

Voyager

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Posted: 10 years ago

#948

Okay, I'm back from crying on the bed..

This piece of writing was just beautiful yet so heartfelt and sad!

I love the fact that Aahil wore the chain around his neck! It gives a feeling that he really misses her. She might come back to him..

- I totally fell in love with their Gym encounter. It was damn funny and hot! Prags is right - I mean, that Chest!! The Chest which we dream about all night..

I was smiling like crazy when I read that she was pregnant! But then the news... My hopes shattered into tiny pieces..

Oh God, she lost the child :,( Nooo...

God damn it, Aahil, you do not do this to her! You do not leave her out of nowehere.

And the most hurtfelt thing to discover... She was gone when he got home.

I'm so sad and I'm so hooked on reading the next update.

Great work once again! ❤️ It was so well written! I'm really speechless right now.
I really have no words to describe how beautifully written this is. Great job, darling!

Come here so I can give you a hug you rightfully deserve 🤗

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Young And Horny!

@Perfectionist2

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#949

Oh MY! MY OH MY!

Sagey!

Tuski Chuppa Rustam HO!

But I can't write mature stuff you know... LIAR!

You sexed up the update for me...😆

Ok First things first... The last time I went to a gym was about 4 years back...I still remember my Personal Trainer. Bloody Bitch was after my blood cos I called her BF who was also an instructor HOT!. Well I didn't know He was her BF. And well He was Hot, and he smiled a lot when he spoke to me. But whatever! I am so not a Gym person.😛

But how do you write like this woman..😛

He came up on one knee, stripped off his sweaty tank top and really gave her something to look at. He flexed his arms over his head, and his V-shaped back stretched. He sauntered over to the chin up bar and hoisted himself up. Slowly, he pulled himself up to the bar, his muscled arms bulging with effort. His 6-pack abs bunched prominently as he slowly hoisted himself up and down the bar with practiced ease. Sweat beaded over his torso, breathing controlled.

I am salivating. Feeling Hot! hot! hot!

Coming to Aahil... You know I am trying to like him. I don't fall easy. I just don't . And while last update I went a bit soft for him, this update I want to pickle his balls.

That girl eventually became His spitfire...

I was so looking for a back story and you gave me one but I wanted to know how they confessed. And how love happened.

DAFUQ Chocolate!

I mean AHHH! I am at work ok.. I am so very bothered right now... f**k! YOU! SAGEY!

I need a popsicle bath ASAP!😆 LIAR! I can't do bold! Tie me up! And senses at play... OH f**k! I need a selfie right now, but how!😕😆

Now the update, I just simply loved till here. I mean kudos to you to pull off such a fabulous update in such short notice...and you are such a talented writer Sagey. I have always told you this.I love what you write , it's just so polished at all times.

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But then whatever happened after I didn't buy it...

I am not a fan of getting pregnant and miscarriage and stagnation because of the miscarriage. I don't read or watch such stories. It's just me. But I also know huge population of females are sucker for such plots.

I didn't get why he would shut her down.. but oh well. That's the story.

You gave it whatever you could in such a short period.

And I so commend you for this update. It had everything. Angst at it's best.

I hope you don't mind my honestly. I am not criticizing love. I am just saying I was so high from this update and then Aahil just fell from grace. The strength of his character just effervesced in that one statement.

but I get may be you have a plan, apart from that... I LOVED THE UPDATE! LOVED! LOVED LOVED!

Thank you so so much Sagey for doing this. 🤗You really write so well. I got to learn a few things. I am not joking I will pm you what I mean...

But Crazy is really a crazy word to start with😆

Faru bring it on...I can't wait to see what you do with Crazy..😛

Love You Sagey!

Juliet!

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Anisa

@AnnzSageflower7

Rocker

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Posted: 10 years ago

#950

Originally posted by: suds.
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unres

Oh nooo.

That was really really really sad </3

Oh my god CRUNCHES ARE THE WORST THINGS EVER

I break my abdomen every f**king day doing that shit.

painful

I've wailed about them so much to faruu, you guys don't even know 😆

Okay. The way you wrote the first meeting was lovely. sexyness, angst, anger, guilt, and pain- classic SaHil. I loved it <333

SPITFIRE YES.

HIS SPITFIRE DOUBLE YES.

Yes Aahil your ammi is a bitch and I'm gonna kill her as soon as it is my turn to update :)

"Tie me up would you...?"

#DEAD

Suddenly, nothing mattered right then but for them to both reach that height, the pleasurable explosion shaking them both, clinging to each other tightly.

#STILL DEAD

Okay now I kid you not I screamed when Sanam said she was pregnant because that would be adorable. And then a paragraph later you drop a massive ass bomb and I just- I cant.

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And then the rest...

*cries*

You did a fabulous job in ripping my f**king heart out and laying it on a platter love. Beautiful beautiful beautiful work.

BUT THANKS FOR THE LOVELY BIRTHDAY PRESENT HONESTLY

I loved it a lot- its f**king brilliant.