ESHAAS - SAAHIL SS UPDATED LAST PART on PAGE 25G / 3-12-2014

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chahatmalhotra

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Posted: 11 years ago

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great part. continue soon pls pls this time thoda jaladi I m dying to read further. thanks for pm
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Dragon-Heart

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: chahatmalhotra
great part. continue soon pls pls this time thoda jaladi I m dying to read further. thanks for pm
love chahat malhotra

i will try dear but kya karu basically i am a MG ff writer or waha meri 4 ffs chal rahi hai already.

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HappyST

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Posted: 11 years ago

#43

Amazing update... I really liked it.

Thanks for pm nd do update soon dear.

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Ashii

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Posted: 11 years ago

#44

Yaar i read ur all updates in one go...

loved it yarr boht awlaaa...

so nxt update sanaya will surely need her fathr's blood bcox sanam's blood does not matches and alll haina thats my prediction...

plz update soonishhh...

pm me if possible...

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Dragon-Heart

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Posted: 11 years ago

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PART - 4

AAHIL was dead. He defeated in mending his sin. Being frustrated and sore he threwing his belongings in his suitcase. Suddenly a very meak sound grab his attention. He bend to glance what actually falls from his clothes. He bend and found something. Aahil's brow knotted and he picked up and moved to call Sanam but her words echoed in his mind and he cut the call. He think and called Rehan instead of her.

Rehan was in hosptial. Moving with stretched having a little soul on it. Wardboys took her to OT. Blood is oozing from Saanya's wound. Sanam was crying like hell. Saanya is the only source of her breathing.

His phone buzzed and he pick u the calls. Rehan was too worried and his voice is trembling. Aahil sensed it. 'is there evrything ok?' Aahil asked casually.

'Aahil i am in hosptal this moment. Nothing is ok. Saanya injured badly.' in a flow of emotions he told him about Saanya's accident.

Aahil's eyes widened with shocked. Though he only saw her once,but still feels bad for such a small child. 'its...ummm...its ok its ok. Rehan sambhaal apneaap ko. Nothing is happen to her. Tell me where you are?' He is consoling him. Rehand told him and with in few minutes Aahil was there in hospital.

Sanam turned stoned from the moment she were took inside the OT. Seeing her like this all old bitter memories revived in Aahil's mind. Once again she was on the verge of loosing someone to whom she love most. Aahil went to her,for giving her a strengt she needed most. 'Sanam...' Aahil called her name,toched her shoulder softly.

His touch broked her silence. She glance up and saw him there. Every time when she saw him her wounds greened up. Sorrow replaced by rage again. 'why you came there. Whenevr you entred in my life,it become hell. First i lost badi ammi and now my baby is...' she couldn't even able to complete. Sanam clenched his collar. 'just get out of here. Main tumhari shakal b nahi dekhni chahti. Jao...jao yaha se.' she screamed on him. Every word of her reflecting her pain and peircing his soul.

'i have no intentions to raise your pain. Just came to give you something which only belongs to you.' he put his hand in pocket and dragged out something. He held her hand and put that on her hand. 'this is your badi ammi's locket. Last sign of her. Ispe sirf tumhara haq hai. Yahi lautane aaya tha.' his whimpering sound is enough to reflect how much he is burnin in his guilt. He even wont make an eye contact with her. Aahil is repenting,but Sanam's pain wont let her realize that. She turned her face and again turn silent.

Aahil glance up in a hope but her turned face said everything. Aahil is moving,but Rehan who witnessing their convo stopped him. 'ek min Aahil.' he moved to Sanam and turned her to him.

'Sanam i know what he did is unforgivable for you. Par ye b utna hi sach hai ki Aahil pachhta raha hai. I know him since childhood. Or aaj mere ek baar batane wo Saanya ko dekhne aaya coz wo tumhari beti hai. Lekin Sanam ek sach to or bhi hai na ki Saanya sirf tumhari beti nahi hai. Aahil is her father. She is his daughter too.' Rehan revealed the truth in front of Aahil which make him shocked.

'Rehan what are you saying... Saanya is mine daughter.' Aahil's whole world turned around in a sec.

'yes Aahil she is your daughter,your part,which you gave her on that day. I know you think that we are married and Saanya is our daughter. But this was not a truth. Sanam never marry me. She is only a good friend of mine and Saanya is your and Sanam's daughter.' Rehan open up and cleared his all doubts.

'wait a min. She is my daughter. Sanam then why you dont come to me?' Aahil hold her from arms and asked her.

Sanam glared both and jerked him. 'kisliye aati. Tume ek or muka dene k liye taki tum meri bebasi ka mazak bana sako. No mr. Aahil Ibrahim. She is only mine. Koi haq nahi hai tumhara uspe or na kabhi hoga. Ye mat samjhna ki tum use mujhse cheen sakte ho kyunki main aisa hone nahi dungi. Saanya sirf meri beti hai or kisi ka koi haq nahi uspe. And you Rehan..dikha diya na that he is more important for you then me.' Sanam is babbling in anger as she was scared may Aahil took her away from her.

'Sanam listen to me. I know shyad ab tum mujhe kabi maaf na karo. Par Aahil sach me badal gaya hai. He is regretting Sanam. Or waise bhi main dekha hai Saanya ko apne dad k liye crave karte hue. Many times she asked me where is her father whenever she saw other kids playing with their dads. Sanam baat ko samjho. She needs him to.' Rehan apolozise and trying to pacify her. He wants her to understand the need of Aahil in Saanya's life.

Sanam was silent again. She wont replied. All 3's eyes were struck on the door of OT. Doc already told them that her condition is critical. Her surgery took lot of time and every passing sec rosed their and panic of loosing her. Where her parents were querrling,little soul fighting every minute for life. Will she?

Edited by richadhami - 11 years ago

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Ashii

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Posted: 11 years ago

#46

sooo now ahil know about his daughter...

sanam is not going to forgive him at any cost...

sanaya is critical... that means something major is on the way and rehaan is such a honest frnd...

overall lovely update...

thans for pm...

cont. soon and do pm me..

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Famishah

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Posted: 11 years ago

#47

amazing update 👏 rehan is such a loyal friend of both. want romance part too when sanam will forgive aahil i know this is not that type of story but want to know how aahil will get space in her heart and how hate change to love plzzz 😳

Edited by FATIMA78651 - 11 years ago