Twisted Fate.. asya( kabhi ) 21st chaptr updated links given - Page 39

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Posted: 10 years ago
Jil what an update yaar
I cant wait for the next part

Pls update soon

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Posted: 10 years ago

Twisted fate part 17

asad goes back to his room...nd starts punching the bag...zoya ki bhai ki ithni himmat ki tumari behen ki saat

asad punching the bag hardly no mery shown for the boxing bag

nd zoya enters the room...

zoya softly saying asad kya tume mujpe yakeen nahi hai

asad in anger nd pain ignores zoya nd only focus's on the punching bag

zoya : asad tume mere yakeen pay kyon yakeen nahi hai...

asad : starts angrily glaring at zoya nd asking her kyon yakeen karo main... voh bhi tum jaisi ladki par ...

zoya : looking questionably muj jaise ladki matlab

asad : tum jaisi ladki matlab voh ladki jo perfect nahi hai...tum kisi ki ghar nahi basa sakti...agar bhaijaan aur tumari nikaah bhi hota.tho bhi unnme tume jhelne ki takat nahi hoti... kabhi kabhi bachon jaisi harqat karti ho

nd ur nonsense talks nd idiotic shayaris..u r simply a clown nothg else... his red shot eyes nd him slowly makes movement towards zoya

zoya almost broken listening to him..moves back nd back asad moves front nd zoya back nd she touches herself to the wall.. asad tum muje aise kyon dekh rahe ho..plz asad

asad: grabbing zoya tightly agar tumara bhai mere behen ke zindgi karab kar sakta hai tho main tumare saat kya kya kar sakta hoon...I'll show u wht rape is..

pushes zoya to the bed...

zoya trembles nd shakingly mixed emotions...asad proceeds nd removes her dupata..

zoya eyes moist ...asad proceeds to the bed...nd his hand moves backside of zoya's hair he holds her hair tightly...she starts shouting in pain...tho pir kya farq hai tume aur uss main jisne najma ke saat yeh sab kiya...just leave me...

asad : holding her hair tightly drags zoya close to him...nd he directly smooches her roughly nd intensely...not allowing her to breathe...zoya struggling hard to stop him..but in vain...he was hard on her...

... asad leaves her lips slowly her lips swollen.but asad does not stop ther.. he starts kissing her neck nd biting her ears .. zoya completely in pain breathing heavily just couldn't do anythg..he was very strong nd at tht moment phone rings asad just switchs it off ... as asad leaves her for a second.. zoya half breathingly starts to run towards their room door for quick escape..but asad holds her tightly frm back...nd starts pressing her stomach..zoya gets frustrated asad gives more pain to her stomach by pressing it hard nd harder nd zoya completely losing her control ...bites asad's hand.. asad quickly leaves her but wthin seconds he tears her sleeves nd pushes zoya towars the couch ..zoya gets exhausted but asad continues his torture on zoya nd press's her boobs tightly .. zoya tries to scream but asad holds her mouth tightly nd rubs her eye's mascara nd slowly bites her neck nd press's her butt nd leaves her mouth ...zoya's starts crying loudly in pain asad hearing this stops for a moment nd zoya shakingly gets up her clothes torn... completely scared of him..nd he remembering his sisters pain just grabs her nd pushes her to the table nd she starts to bleed... asad sees her bleeding mitwaa the devil in him vanishes.. nd thinks whts wrong wth him..whts gotten into him wht has he done..Is he the same person now..how can he hurt her so much...he has become a villain.. nd steps back ishq pay zor nahi...nd she breathes heavily for air...he sees her in pain...nd her words kya farq hai tume aur ussmain...

Asad checks his drawer for the first aid...nd gets the cotton nd cream nd starts aiding zoya..

But zoya doesn't allow him...: koi zaroorat nahi..no need of showing me any sympathy cryingly..

Asad: his eyes in pain ... haan hoon main shaitan iam evil not a hero...issliye kehta hoon.. muje samajne ki koshish math karo... mere karib math aao main voh toofan hoon jo tumhe tabaah kar dega

Zoya : sees asad in pain... asad too sees her in pain..bg music Tera mera rishta hai kaisa - How is this relationship of ours
Ik pal door gawara nahi - distance of even a moment is unbearable...

Tere liye har roz hai jeete
Tujh ko diya mera waqt sabhi
Koi lamha mera na ho tere bina
Har saans pe naam tera

Asad leaves frm ther

Junaid calls zoya: but zoya doesn't pick up...

Zoya goes to the shower the water falls on her face

Manzilein ruswaa hain
The destinations are upset

Khoya hai raasta
The road is lost
Aaye le jaaye itni si iltajaa
May it come and take this small request of mine
Yeh meri zamaanat hai
This shall be my release
Tu meri amaanat hai... Aaa...
You are my fidelity

Sun raha hai naa tu
Ro rahi hun main
Sun raha hai naa tu
Kyun ro rahi hun main
Yaara...

nd changes her clothes

Nd straight goes to the mazar bg music...Kaisi teri khudgarzi
Lab namak rame naa misree
Kaisi teri khudgarzi
Tujhe preet purani bisri..
Mast Maula, mast Kalandar
Tu hawa kaa ek bavandar
Bujh ke yoon andar hi andar
Kyun

Re Kabeera maan jaa
Re Fakeera maan jaa

How's this selfishness of yours,
Neither salt nor sugar fit on your tongue..
How's this selfishness of yours,
that you have forgot old love..
O free man, free spirit,
you're a storm of wind..
then why have you ended
within yourself only..

Peer baba : sees zoya...moving lifelessly... tumhari ankhon mey itna dard kyon hai beta...

Zoya: she stops nd sees baba wth pain written in her eyes but keeps quiet doesn't spk but tears keep rolling down her cheecks

peer baba: yeh tere ahsoon bhouth keemti hai..inhe zameen par math girana aur jisne tume rulaya voh kudh tume behintaa mohabat karega...kaha tha na maine ki safar muskil hai...bhouth muskil.. par uski nafrat main hi mohabat chupi hai..tum dono ki kahani kudh uss kudha ne likha hai...tho iss dukh ko batne main hi samajdari hai...

zoya: Dukh jab humari kahani sunegi tho kudh dukh ko dukh hoga baba..whn sadness listens to our story then even sadness himself feels sad... mitwaaa ishq pay zor nahi...


Peer baba:jahaan dukh ya dard hota hai wahaan baat nahin hoti...balki poori ki poori dastaan hoti hai...zubaan jo baat keh nahin paati woh ahsoo keh deti hai...har tarah se...har dard keh deti hai


asad driving his car in a rash...nd flashbacks of his sister's pain..he torturing zoya, soon a call comes to him abt his concert in delhi but he is in no mood to attend...he starts increasing the speed... nd soon stops the car near kalhatty cliff wher kabir's accident took place... comes out nd thoughts of him harassing zoya comes to him he gets restless nd moves here nd ther..

the thoughts hunting his mind...

feels sick nd sits

closes his eyes nd the gal appears in red nikaah costume running in the desert

remembers zoya saying tum jisse sabse zyaada mohabat karte ho..voh nazar aayegi just close thm nd see who u love the most..

asad runs behind her in his hallucination nd holds her hand nd the gal turns...sees zoya

dil kyon hai mera shor kare..

idhar nahi udhar nahi teri ore kare...

Scene shifting to tanveer

Tanveer calling imraan: billo rani...uss din humne tumari madat ki thi...humne uss najma ke drink main nashe ki goli dali thi..so tht u get the gal...waise bhi u really liked najma...kyon.

Imraan : najma sach main I crazily loved her nd... I did tell her abt my craziness.. once wrote a lov letter in blood to her but aftr seeing all tht she told me tht I really nead a psychiatrist nd didn't accept me..instead made fun abt me by telling the whole college abt it.. ...nd uss din holi main..maine tume bola uske drink main goli dalne ko nd u did it.. afterwards I saw some guy seeing her in tht state nd helping her till meghna's room..thn he made her sleep ther nd went back to enjoy holi

Nd I made my entry to meghna's room nd had my drm fulfilled by destroying najma's life

Tanu: hahaha billo rani...humne tumari madat sirf issliye kiya kyonki I wanted this to happen...I wanted kabir's sister also to suffer ..this way the whole fly will suffer. Par kya tume humari voh raat yaad hai smirking

Imraan : haan yaad hai..voh ek galthi thi nd muje tho tume koi intrest nahi tha..

Tanu : as if iam intrested...tumme koi std nahi.. koi status nahi ..jo kabir main tha and I hope tumne uss din koi clue nahi choda hai..

Imraan: no koi clue nahi choda nd we will not be caught...

Tanu : we kaha se aaya...hum nahi sirf tum...issmain sirf tum shamil ho..aur agar pakade gaye tho sirf tum jaaoge jail... not me imraan

Imraan :jab katrae ki ghanti bajthi hai tho sabse pehle chuve bhagthe hai but yaha tho billi bhaag rahi hai

Tanu : math bhoolna tumara ek aur raaz hum jaante hai...billo rani

Imraan : gets scared nd hangs up..

cops enquiring meghna...

Nd meghna telling thm...uss din raat bar najma mere ghar thi...nd in the morning voh kafi tired thi nd chali gayi

Nd the next night I found this chain whch had a I SHAPED pendent..

Cops collecting the chain ..hmm uss din party main jo jo aaye thain unka list do...

Nd thy enquire the holi party members abt the I shaped pendent nd 1 of the member named nadira says arrey yeh I shaped pendent tho imraan pehentha tha.. I say uska naam ka pehla akshar shuru hota hai..

Edited by jilmil.1 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
unres

Jilmil please tell me I am not dreaming&I am really in first place.

about update
it was pertty Interesting
Glad that U didn't make Asad a r**eist.
So, that b**ch Tannu&bus***d Imran behind it.

Well its a beautifully written Update&I loved it.
Edited by -ABI- - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Asad 🤢... Tanveer Imraan 🤬...
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Posted: 10 years ago
It was sad part of zoya
Will zoya forgive asad
Cont soon ...
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Posted: 10 years ago
really hate imran n tanveer...
imran is the one...
really hope they will find out...
felt bad for zoya...
thx fr the pm n do continue soon n do pm me...
Edited by jazsidhu - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow Jil darling kamaal ka update hai yeh
I just love

I am waiting for how this kameeni Tanu & Imraan will get punished

Isse kadi se kadi saza de ok😆

Pls update soon

Thanks for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update dear
In anger, asad hurt zoya but when he saw her in pain he realised his mistake. He wanted to give first aid but zoya stopped her. Baba words & zoya reply was emotional & heart touching. Asad was irritated by himself that what he did with zoya. He reached the same cliff where kabir accident happened. He closed his eyes & remembered zoya words. He saw her in his imaginations. Waiting for next update so both culprits tanveer & imran will be caught & be punished. Let's see how asad rectify this blunder. Continue soon plz. Thanks for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
Shocking and gr8 update
Will zoya forgive asad?
Thanks for pm
Plz pm me for next part
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
jillu...
kya hogaya asad ko... 😡
my baby Zoe is in pain...
I'm glad atleast he realized his mistake..
tanveer kill her plsss🤢
continue soo baby...
aaj kal ur updating quickly.. thanq

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