Sahil TS- The Dark Aura! 2nd Sept - Page 4

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thanks farz for da pm..jus checkd it...I appreciate ur gesture and how much u value ur frndship wiz juliet...reminds me of a sweet friend vani in ipk forum
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wooow so goood and newww continue waiting for more
update sooon plz
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Posted: 11 years ago
#33
I would take Saahil in any form but this one is very intriguing...can't wait for the next installment😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#34
Can't wait for more ...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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You have my full attention xD nice!! Love the concept! Thank you!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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OOOH I'm hooked.
This was fantastic, I would never be able to imagine this.
I like how dark it is, esp Aahil who still has some good in him *drool*

Really nice. I'm curious as to why Sanam has turned to prostitution, but I'm sure you'll answer all he questions.

Loving it so far x
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Posted: 11 years ago
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He wants to take her home!!!!
He doesn't know why he cares for a stranger but her cares. And he's not the fairest he's dark!
This is so intriguing like some sort of intoxication you can't shake of you, you just want more and more. And yes I want to drown myself in this story. So Aahil owns an escort service and poor Sanam had to retort to becoming a prostitute. But never fear when Aahil baby is near now. He saved her! And I have a feeling, him saving her from those guys literally was the beginning of him actually saving her, finding out what went wrong and helping her taking care if her and healing her? If she needs it and slowly he'd find himself healing as well. So she didn't cash the blank chech which meant she didn't want to take his money, and he can't stop dreaming and thinking about her. I think I'm in love! With this! Is that even a possibility? Knight in shining armour to become the love if her life?? I have to know.

Juliet this was amazing and I really need my next dose soon cos I'm on the border of crazy. I just can't shake this out if my head :)

Ps sorry this is so very late

Xx
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Posted: 11 years ago
#38
Amazing start!!
It sounds deep, passionate and what not!

Brilliant!

And continue soon!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice start
Aahil test sanam was awesome
He told her that she was lying
He wanted to protect her from evil.
He saw sanam with 2 mens & she was pleading
Aahil punched those mens & sanam passed out
Plz continue soon
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
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@Farz, you own this one babes.THANK YOU :D
This is so freaking amazing Juliet!!

I mean, I love it totally! Your writing is beautiful and the way you emote the emotions is just ...argh, perfect. I'm hooked to this so don't forget to PM me when you plan on an update. And and and, can't you extend a bit longer than four five shots? How about a mini FF- around 8-9 chappies? pretty pleaase?

Your content is sparkling gorgeous and title is---Argh how do you come up with it? It's darn captivating

You go girl! :)

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