Sahil TS- The Dark Aura! 2nd Sept

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farz_parachute

@farz_parachute

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

:)

No compulsion in anything. But hey, my heart desires.

*****

You cannot stop there! Well you can (and you did too) but really you can't!

He's not the fairest, he's dark.

Woah.

Well, not the darkest right.

Title is doing something to me! I wanna understand more about this aura, dark, but this aura.

A first dark story from your side? If at all it is...

*take a bow, M'lady*

He obviously wants her. But knows he's no good for her...

Why not. Hmm.

...

She said sorry to him. Awww...!!

...

Thank you for starting something new!

p/s Love!

;)

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jasminerose

@jasminerose

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Posted: 11 years ago

res 😊

Unres

He was going to take her HOME. Wow!!

Very Very Interesting!! I am intrigued. This Dark Aura has a very promising Aura. Amazing.

Beautifully written scene there when Aahil tests Sanam by grazing his boot along her leg.

Loved Aahil, the Saviour.

Please Please update soon.

❤️

UPDATE SOON.

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Pagalpinky

@Pagalpinky

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

Interesting
I like seeing this version of sanam and ahil
Excited to read the next part

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Anisa

@AnnzSageflower7

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

*gasp* Juliet !!! My heart is singing !

In one update you have snared me in with the intrigue..

Why is Sanam so desperate for money? Love the knight in shady armour for Aahil !!

Gripping stuff👏

❤️Anisa

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ChocoBerry

@ChocoBerry

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

Hey Juliet 😃

Am reading another Sahil only cause its by you. You know I love your writing and can't resist it.

Loved it as usual and want the second part soon. I know Aahil will make everything OK for her but still want to know what happens next.

P.S. Am still waiting for the wallbanger to make an appearance

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Tamara27

@Tamara27

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

Damn you... Res

Undamn you... I mean, unres 😆

Juliet... *sigh*

How did you manage to convey so much in such a small space? Boggles my mind, babbler that I am.

That feeling of wanting to to take care of someone - someone you don't even know... It can be overwhelming, right?

She's broken into him a little. Well, a LOT enough for him to have had drunken, sleepless nights worrying about her, where she is, and whether she's safe.

SIGH...

He believes he's dark, but there is proof that he isn't.

Even Sanam obviously saw something in him that day... the fact that she remembered him, said his name so sweetly, and trusted him.

You haven't given us her POV, so I am just assuming here (because I am a lovestruck, blinded fool), that something about him allowed him to break into her mind, and stay there too.

How much love do you need to post the next part? Like, soonish?

I'll make it happen - I have a LOT of love to give, my friend ❤️

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TVD-IANcrazy

@TVD-IANcrazy

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

Res ;)

Unres

***********

Okay. This is why I so love reading you. Sheer brilliance. Writing that speaks and sometimes even listens. Your stories goes far deeper than their alluring surface. The kind off dopamine buzz I get from it gives me a breather from the stress and strain of daily life. Love, love this. 🤗

Love the TITLE. And how the story progressed. They both have a blurred sense of what instantaneous true love represents. The 'I-would-die-if-you-died' love. Even though he thinks he is not good enough or plain DARK for her he couldn't stop himself from giving into. The mere thought of her and all involving the feeling he didn't know before. He is a pimp after all. That romantic profundity. ;) And how brilliantly you've put that Juliet. \m/ Just wanna give you a bear-tight internet hug. 🤗

I so wanna read more...so I am hoping if you could just...uhhh...you know...update like really soon. *wistful sigh*
BTW I am loving these small doses of SaHil by you and Tamara. Love you guys. :*

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Pragya

@Ms.Sherlocked

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

Res!!!

Unres!!

Juliet!! I am so so sorry for being so late love!! I really am! This fever is just making me go all...ugh. I am down since last 2-3 days, as you may see I am not quite active here so...

Anyways, thats another story. Lets talk about yours ;) 😆

The Dark Aura! Ahh. Firstly DARK STORY. AAHIL. Could it get any better? Oh well, it did ;)

Loved the title Jules!! And the story even more!
Loved this "escort service vala ARI" 😆 Ooh. Pretty interesting and intriguing it is! Frankly, at first when I read the backdrop like Sanam coming in his office and he ordered "Sit" in his deep low voice. I don't know why I thought it could be something like Grey?!! 😆 Ah, well, never mind. Still *hint" for your next piece. Maybe, just, uh. *shrugs* ;)

And I LOVED how he was so sure that she is lying about the stuff. And how he proved grazing that boot along. WOW. BRILLIANT STUFF MAN. APPLAUDS. 👏

There were so many parts I loved about this piece. Infact in whole. Like how you showed so much in such a little piece. Yeah it was short, comparatively.
How he couldn't sleep after this encounter and why he suddenly developed a sense of being protective and concerned towards her <3

And how he came and thrashed and smashed those bas***ds. yeah!! Sanam man, this is so intriguing, I can't wait how the reason comes out why is she so desperate for money.

And HE IS TAKING HER HOME <3 :') Aww this is so sweet!

He respects his employees and those who work for him too. :) Okay yeah this should have come earlier in the post, I forgot 😆

Juliet!! YOU ARE JUST BEYOND EXCELLENCE! Yeah yeah I need to increase my vocab I know 😕😆
I can;t wait when your book publishes though ⭐️

Super stuff. I am awed! Love! <3

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Gayu-Sahil

@Gayu-Sahil

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

you wrote another sahil shot..really happy..aahil have some feelings for sanam in first meeting it self..but cant describe what...hmmm why sanam is like this..anyway aahil saved her..i hope she will tell him the reason..
waiting for next part..