Sahil TS- The Dark Aura! 2nd Sept - Page 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: suds.

OH MY GOD THIS IS WONDERFUL
JFC I NEED MORE OF THIS LIKE I NEED AIR

SANAM NEEDS MONEY SO SHES PIMPING HERSELF OUT??!!

WHY SANAM WHY

but atleast she ending up finding Aahil who isnt much of bas***d buT HE IS A PIMP OH GOD I DIDNT KNOW HOW MUCH IM IN /LOVE/ WITH THIS IDEA

oh god this is amazing

pls update

pls

thank you faru for the link

thank you so much

and you, love, need to update


asap




ALL THAT YOU SAID Dippu!


Imagine!!! Just what we talked about like that day. We Need! Oh man. PM now.


And I was told that it's okay to not read! WHAT EVEN.



Juliet.


Like air.




That's how much.

Now you know.


:)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: farz_parachute




ALL THAT YOU SAID Dippu!


Imagine!!! Just what we talked about like that day. We Need! Oh man. PM now.


And I was told that it's okay to not read! WHAT EVEN.



Juliet.


Like air.




That's how much.

Now you know.


:)

what

this fic is meant to be read by everyone

it broke my brain bc the premise is so damn g o o d

yes juliet, we need this like air

pls
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Posted: 11 years ago
#13
Great going! Pls write more and soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#14
What even... I need air!
..
Okay, I'm back..

This is so damn interesting!!! I cannot wipe the huge smirk on my face right now..

This scene sure had me tingling for more;

"..his foot rode a little higher bunching her skirt higher exposing her thighs, Tingling her skin where ever his boot grazed."

"You are lying Sanam!" He smiled somewhat satisfied withdrawing his foot."

And this scene was the best!! Wow! I absolutely love the words you wrote. There was so much depth into it:

"..keep her away from all evil and cruel, not just his world but also him. He wasn't the fairest, he was dark." - Woman! You really need all the love you can get from us, readers. <3

"He was going to take her home" - Oh God! You cannot leave us with that kind of statement!

I'm a huge fan of the way you write! I simply adore it! I always have a special kind of smile whenever I see you've come up with something..

I love you!!! <3 <3

So damn excited to see the 2nd part. :))

One-Of-A-Kind thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
#15
Very nice start... u are a great writer.. cont soon..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#16

interesting story

awsome update
loved it
loved this different version of aahil and sanam
continue soon
nd thnx 4r pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
#17
Aahil is taking Sanam home.. And you left it just there..
Very interesting story you have here, can't wait for part 2 as I'm dying to know why Sanam needed money so desperately that she'd want to be an escort
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Posted: 11 years ago
#18
Juliet yet another ss
I just love when u write an ss
Cuz their always amazing
I guess this is the first time ur writing a dark story
Can't wait to read more
Update soon
And thanks for the pm
Love,
Marcoe🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
#19
Awesome + Intresting Concept...👏

Just Love It...😊

Every Scene From Starting To Ending Is Mind-blowing...👍🏼

Waiting For Next Part Eagerly So Update Soon...😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#20
Interesting concept
Loved the 1st part
Pls continue soon!
Thanks for the pm😉

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