AsYa SS- BROKEN WINGS #2 - imp note on page 71(8/10)

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jas91

@jas91

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#211

Originally posted by: kaussar
Aww Jas... thats such a lovely thing you said...you made my day... i really have doubts when writing intimate scenes... and since this story is about two people who love each other so passionately... and their love and bond is equally emotional and physical.. so need to show the intimate parts as well especially when it was needed to alleviate Asad's insecurities... but since i haven't written intimate scenes till this SS and because i don't want them to be too explicit, i was apprehensive... but now i'm happy since you all said it's good.😃

I know Kitu that's why i said it was brilliant & u wrote it beautifully i didn't felt like dhake se scene daal diya d scene was necessary 2 remove Asad's insecurities so that Asya get back 2gather & story moves forward.😃

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taznim

@kaussar

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#212

Originally posted by: Linsie

Thanks Linsie...so you have started reading the story.. glad you are loving it.😃

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taznim

@kaussar

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#213

Originally posted by: Linsie
2.

so asad waited for her... but she dont remember
anything...
her confuse behavior worried ayaan..

so finally she decide to stay away from ayaan
to understand what happen the lost 2 months...

yea Asad was totally broken and missing her badly and not knowing what happened to her and on the other side Zoya had lost her memory and didn't even know that Asad existed in her life.😭

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sweetnandu

@sweetnandu

Voyager

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Posted: 11 years ago

#214

just came across this story..
loved the way u r writng..
pls pm me wen u update the nxt part

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aseela sha

@aseelashah

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#215

Dear Kausser i read ur story in one go

Its breathtakingly beautiful

I love it so so much

Pls pls update soon

And do pm me next time

I will buddy u😃

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Kavya

@_Lungidance_

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#216

Read all part.
It was fabulous..

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Amin21Khpulwak

@Amin21Khpulwak

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#217

Hey kaussar yaar

What a ss 👏

Read all in one go and love it so much

I send u buddy request pkz accept it cuase I want pm.

Eagerly waiting for next update

Who is this and how will zoya handle it

Update soonish

Waiting

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sweetnandu

@sweetnandu

Voyager

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Posted: 11 years ago

#218

this is one of the beautiful stories i have read till date.. i couldn't stop it till i finish reading all parts together..
so marvelously written...
every emotion..every detail was excellently portrayed👏👏
pls update soonish and pm me when u update the next part