AsYa SS- BROKEN WINGS #2 - imp note on page 71(8/10) - Page 21

Originally posted by: kaussar

Jas still no news?...very busy day for me... but i have been thinking of her whole day... so sad.. i'm sure she is alright but lack of communication is worrying isn't it?😭

Originally posted by: jas91

I know Amu news bulletins r scaring me😭😭

Originally posted by: jas91

Yeah no news still😭😭

Originally posted by: Amulya9

😭 gowtu showed me a pic heenu sent her... water level in her backyard..its average I mean k feel house is in a good state ...so just pray that she should come online soon..stay strong baby..bt shes off from fb .. 5 days hogaya..

Originally posted by: kals82

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first post .. second time in a row...😉

atlast zoya and asad moved on... zoya made him realise love overcomes anything ...

i loved it.. though shy... nice to see her try to seduce asad..

and right now.. asad needs that zoya to take all the initiatives..

loved the way she is helping him..

the execise, swimming.. the kitchen.. and even in the bedroom...😉😉

so romance over... next to drama... i guess..

what have they planned...

waiting for it..

did rahid and dilshad know zoya presence here..

u wrote it is 2 weeks... shouldnt they be back...

Originally posted by: jas91

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Brilliant updt Kitu👏

Thanks Jas..😃

Zoya's determination was d highlight of this updt⭐️⭐️⭐️

She was determined 2 make Asad better now & get back his confidence & she succeeded 2😉
Yea Zoya is very determined and brave... she faced everything including Asad's moods.. and it's only Zoya's love and care that would help him right now and so its good Zoya was stubborn and determined.

when she talked wid Doc who told her about Asad she became sad but was hopeful😊

Wid physicians help Asad started improving😃

Asad loved swimming & she thought of making Asad try that out😳

I got nostalgic remembering d scene when Zoya saw him 1st time while swimming😭
Yea Asad was so full of life and loved to do so many things like swimming, skiing and sailing... and Zoya had seen all that even during the short time they were together and she understands how much he must be missing all that.

she remembers there HM when she wore Bikini 1st time😳

wid there kiss Asad got restless & pushed her away & Zoya analysed why he did so

but she was determined 2 make him comfortable in every way possible & removed his fears😊

I loved this thing btw them that they communicate & sought there problems very imp point 4 a successful marriage life👏 yep.. and from the beginning they were like that.😃

so finally they made love that scene was beautifully written👏👏👏 thanks jas... glad you liked that part.

& someone came at Asya's happy home's doorsteps Zoya has idea who that could b😲

I just hope my Asya stays 2gather & i know they will😃 let d villian come😡😆
hehe yea... let them come... lets see what they can do.😉

PS- Never doubt urself deary u r really gifted👏. I love ur wring style since ur last FF & u make even very simple scenes brilliant & so far i loved ur writings😃. & this inmate scene was needed 2 deal Asad's insecurities & i knew this scene will come😊 & it was beautiful not vulgar so just chill it was wonderful😉. I loved d whole updt.😃.. Aww Jas... thats such a lovely thing you said...you made my day... i really have doubts when writing intimate scenes... and since this story is about two people who love each other so passionately... and their love and bond is equally emotional and physical.. so need to show the intimate parts as well especially when it was needed to alleviate Asad's insecurities... but since i haven't written intimate scenes till this SS and because i don't want them to be too explicit, i was apprehensive... but now i'm happy since you all said it's good.😃

Originally posted by: Amulya9

aww I know baby... 🤗 aks n afu told me that she's in safe place bt couldn't contact her kyu ki no network...she vl come online soon

Originally posted by: Amulya9

😭 gowtu showed me a pic heenu sent her... water level in her backyard..its average I mean k feel house is in a good state ...so just pray that she should come online soon..stay strong baby..bt shes off from fb .. 5 days hogaya..