ASYA SS : Together.... A Compromise No More Epilogue added 23/2/15

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PrettYSmile

@PrettYSmile

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Posted: 11 years ago

#221

Amazing. .

U took us to. The old asya land again. ..

How I wish to c them like u said. ...

Amazingly narrated. .

Lovely. ...

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Alone111

@Alone111

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+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#222

Choco... Ye meri zoya nai hai...*sob*
Woh kaha hai... Usse leke Aao...

I do like ocd zoya but in a funny way.. Not dis..

I felt ache in my heart... Poor gal...

Argh asad... Sach boloon... I m angry on him... Though I knw he wasn't at fault... Yaha kuch jyada hi emotionally challenged hai...

He doesn't want to hurt her... He is trying to do so.. But still end up doing it...

Loved kheer part... When he told her that she surpassed dillu *wink*

Somewhere I felt Nc to knw asad doesn't like dis change in zoya...
Cz of him.. For him... I loved it when he remeniced zoya's 1st sheyri on him...

Haha zoya ko akheli na Milne le irritate bhi hua tha..
Aaaww asad k bura laga jab zoya n manaa k bahar jaane k...

I dnt understand if he can't see her in pain nd tears...
Then y doesn't he just tel her that he loves her nd the nikhaah wasn't a nakhli one... Emotionally challenged kahikaaa...
Hell woh hai hiii...

"I Love You Zoya...aur yeh nikah nakli nahi hai... Balki issse badi sachai aaj mere zindagi mein aur kuch nahi hai...KUCH BHI NAHI." I was like *aaawww*

Mat rolao na zoya ko... Ppplllzzz...

I loved it... Continue soon...

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sasir

@sasir

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#223

nice

felt bad for zoya

hope asad confess soon

plz update soon

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Misnomer

@Misnomer

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#224

Wow this was awesome ...

And thanks for the PM ...

Keep writing ... cont. Soonish ...

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Heena

@aarzoo50

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#225

ye Mr. Khan ka RIGHT TIME TO CONFESS aane tak meri zoya ko ALIEN hone ka lisence mil jana hai...😔
wese zoya k dimag ki batti bhi off hai... asad k har word ka ulta matlab le rahi hai...
our optimistic zoya replaced by a total pessimistic one 😭
it hurts a lot choco...
continue soon ... can i ask fr a happy moment... ek second ka hi sahi...

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jas91

@jas91

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#226

res

unres

Asad u were an idiot u r an idiot & u will always remain one🤬

Kon sa muhurat nikalne ka wait hai 😡aakir ye sahi waqt kab ayega😕 jab duniya khatam ho jaegi🤢😡

I wanted 2 beat him black & blue 4 making Zoya cry so much😡 widin 24 hours of their wedding😭

Stupid, idiot, emotionally retarded, insensitive insaan😡 Zoya couch pe soti hai aur khud maje se pure bed pe phel ke sota hai.😡 Atleast Zoya se keh sakta hai 2 sleep on bed.

Dillu is right in her place she's giving Asad chances & supporting Zoya 😊

I wanna know where is Najma in all this & even if i hate her but where is Tannu u wrote this story based on 10 days challenge & she was in KV than.😕

Was really felt like crying when 2 times Zoya's heart hoped 4 Asad 2 support her & it failed😡

"Shukriya. Par aapko yeh sab karne ki zaroorat nahi hai." As Zoya heard what he said her heart sank and again his words echoed in her ears and literally pounded in her head "Yeh nikah nakli hai."

Zoya looked at him with hope in her eyes but again there was no response from him. She lowered her head remorsefully scolding her heart to be giving her all these false hopes all the time.

This breakdown of Zoya was very heart touching😭🥺

Am...Ammi. Yeh nikah Mr. Khan ke liye ek compromise ke alava aur kuch nahi hai... Aur kuch nahi... aise kaise chalega aur kab tak aise chalega Ammi... mein aur nahi kar sakti yeh sab... I can't take it anymore...it has already become too emotionally draining for me Ammi... Unhe bilkul acha nahi laga jab mein unke liye coffee leke gai aur jab meine unka room theek kiya...unhone kuch nahi kaha jab apne kaha ki vo karma ab mera bhi hai...ammi I can't force myself on him...kuch samajh nahi aa raha ki mein kya karoon." She cried to her hearts content.

Wanted 2 break a pot on his head when he confessed when she was sleeping😡

Zoya ko rulane main no. 1😭 but can never make her smile

Forgive me 4 d frustartion dear but i m hating this Asad😡 aur Agar uski pyaari tameejdaar salwaar kamiz clad bf 🐷 bhi is story ka part hai so Zoya will feel more miserable.🥺😭 Kya kuch happy nahi hai is story main😒

Edited by jas91 - 11 years ago

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aseela sha

@aseelashah

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#227

wonderful update as usual

pls dont make my babies cry so much

pls update soon

thanks for pm

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ak020203

@ak020203

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#228

Great update. .

Loved it. .

Thanks for updating

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Amin21Khpulwak

@Amin21Khpulwak

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#229

oh what a heart touching update yaar

it was so so 😭

loved it hop asad to do something ASAP cant see zoya breaking down like this

brilliantly doene yaaar 👏

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Asif

@asifiqbalsh

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#230

Lovely update
Asad tried to tell zoya abt his feeling but failing. He saw hurt in her eyes, wanted to consoled her but wait for right time. He confessed his feeling to sleeping zoya. I wish she was not sleeping. Hope he will confess soon as I don't want to see zoya in pain. Continue soon plz. Thanks for pm