ASYA SS : Together.... A Compromise No More Epilogue added 23/2/15

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Amulya

@Amulya9

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#211

nice update
liked it..
choco ye wala asad is so so EC..
hez a man of few words n ye few words me hi misunderstandings hoying
my poor babies...
jaldi confess karo.. I can't c her crying

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tashie

@tashie

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#212

Beautiful update. I did not want the chapter to end.

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Abi

@-ABI-

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#213

unress

Di first tell me for how long r u planning to keep Asad emotionally chalanged? & For how long r u going to make Zoya cry...?

Edited by -ABI- - 11 years ago

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sabrinsz91

@sabrinsz91

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#214

Amazing update
Loved it
Poor Zoya and Asad, sad to see zoya cry
Hope the misunderstanding gets cleared and Asad confesses.

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Niyati Tiwari

@Niyati_T

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#215

Unres

Asad

He is really a BIG EMOTIONALLY CHALLENGED INSAAN

Zoya apne app ko kyun badal rahi hai ? 😲

Even Asad is sad coz of this

Dilshaad play a good wala cupid n dono ko confess karva do😳

Plz keep this Billi free SS 😆

Me waiting for next part😃

Edited by Niya_789 - 11 years ago

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Prashni Singh

@-SilverSparkle-

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#216

Reserved!

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Unreserved!

*cant watch* Asad you silly silly man, just confess to her and relieve her, yourself and us readers from the torture.

Zoya drastically changing herself to a persona she thinks Asad would like and approve off[When actually he fell for her for being who she was and so did we all], is tormenting, the misunderstands she perceives to be the truth of her life and Asad not clarifying the truth of it all is agonizing.

Emotional this certainly is as you stated, hope the degree of anguish decreases with the upcoming updates.

"One after the other Asad gobbled down bowl after bowl of kheer, praising his Ammi to have outdone herself."

"Kheer bahut achi bani hai. Ammi se bhi behtar"

An endearing scene, and he really was adorable.

"From the corner of his eyes Asad saw her settle on the couch once again and soon heard her soft snores. He smiled sadly looking at her sleeping form."

"After a few minutes he walked upto her and kneeled down next to her face and gently pushed back her hair away from her face. Softly caressing her cheek with his fingers he bent closer and in a whisper said what he couldn't say to her when she was awake. "I Love You Zoya...aur yeh nikah nakli nahi hai... Balki issse badi sachai aaj mere zindagi mein aur kuch nahi hai...KUCH BHI NAHI.""

I thought this was excruciatingly beautiful, left behind the essence of a warm fuzzy feel. 💔

P.S The emotional and physical devastation this has had on Zoya, is really overwhelmingly painful, good job on the descriptive writing.

Edited by p_s05 - 11 years ago

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Waqt Zaya

@WaqtZaya

Elite

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#217

res i am too tired to frame a good comment at the moment zzz

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Amandeep

@aman1605

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#218

Originally posted by: ChocoBerry

LOL Sweetheart you resed your spot even before I started sending PMS 😆

Hisi hi hoon main di adaat dallo😆😆

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Ihopelove

@Ihopelove

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#219

Beautiful chapter.

Asad did not like Zoyas change behavior. He wants to see his old zoya. Why cant just asad tell her that he love her.

Poor zoya thinks this nikah just compromise for asad.

U beautifully write their feeling, emotions.

I loved it.

Update next chapter soon.

Eagerly waiting.

Love u.

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mimadima

@mimadima

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#220

wow c'est magnifique j'ai les larmes aux yeux c'est tellement triste j'espre k'asad va prendre les choses en main de l'autre zoya est devenu la parfaite epouse tout ce qu'asad esprait trouver mais tout cela ne vaut plus la.peine il cherche sa zoya bref le prochain chapitre j'espere qu'on aura un peu de romance 😳 😉 👏

Edited by mimadima - 11 years ago