SaHil OS : Realisation --- Part 2 ( updated) 29/08 PG 6

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Hey guys... 😃Okay so this is my first try on writing a one shot .. So please forgive me for any errors ( grammatical or informational) .. First let me introduce myself


I am Aanisah and i am from South Africa .. I love watching Qubool Hai .. was watching from the very first episode of AsYa :$ .. I am very friendly and very talkative ..😆


I have made quite a few friends here on IF .. namely Mishti aka Annie ( @LilGreenRobot.), Mrina aka Mrinalini( @-Mrinalini-) and Emaani .. also not forgetting Farz 😳


Okay so here it goes ... Comments and Criticism is allowed .


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"AAHIL!!" screamed Sanam from downstairs in the living room after hearing what sounded like a gunshot.

They all rushed up to the room where they had heard that life threatening noise, and there he was, all messed up and smothered with his own blood. Aahil came out of the room walking like a zombie, half dead and half alive. This shocked Sanam and everyone that was surrounding her. Suddenly Aahil reaches Sanam and falls on her, putting his weight on her because he had no energy to lift himself up.


"S-S-Sanam-m " murmured Aahil while he gritted his teeth.


Without thinking any further, they called for an ambulance and that's when they got the news that he might not be able to live long. This shattered Sanam and she broke down feeling empty although she herself didn't know why. She suddenly started to remember the times she had with Aahil, GOOD AND BAD, everything came flushing back to her like a sudden storm that lasts for a few seconds. Sanam didn't know what was happening to her until she felt a hand on her shoulder telling her to accompany Aahil to the hospital as that is his wife.


While walking in the hospital with Aahil lying on the stretcher, Sanam kept on screaming " Aahil!! Open your eyes!! You can't leave me and go!"


Sanam was beginning to breakdown physically, mentally and emotionally . She had never experienced something like this, even when Badi Ammi had to be rushed to the hospital, she never worried like this. Tears were just rolling out like a tsunami from someone's eyes. She reached the nearest Dargah hoping that her duaa to the Almighty will help Aahil get a new lease of life and they will start afresh with their married life, and that's when Sanam realised that she has fallen in Love with The Aahil Raza Ibrahim !!


She couldn't believe it at first but then it dawned upon her that the feelings she gets when she is around Aahil are none other than Love. She has finally fallen in love with her husband.


Sanam was overwhelmed with her revelation but saddened at the next because the love of her life is inside some horrible room fighting for his life.


She made her way back to the hospital only to find out that the operation was success=ful but Aahil is still unconscious and has a little bit of a brain damage. She became terrified hearing this.


" What if he doesn't remember me anymore?" Sanam thought as she was allowed to enter the room where Aahil was.


Sanam sat by Aahil's bedside and started weeping .. This time it was a mixture of emotions ( happiness, sadness, love, overwhelmed, shock). Sanam began talking while crying.


"Aahil, I know we have our moments and that in all those moments all we do is fight and criticise one another. Every couple has to have their ups and downs whether the nikaah is fake or not. And in our case it is fake and we have our ups and downs all the time . There is not time for love because none of us thing we have the ability to love ." Sanam paused for a moment .. holding back some the tears that were now threatening to fall out.


Aahil, i need to confess something to you.. I think i have fallen in love with you and i want to spend the rest of my life with you. I don't just want 3 months .. i want an eternity. Now that would only be possible if you wake up, Aahil. PLEASE WAKE UP, AAhil ... i need you , i want you and I LOVE YOU WITH ALL MY HEART " Sanam said feeling a little embarrassed although Aahil is in a semi conscious state.


After finally revealing her heart out to a semi conscious Aahil, Sanam felt relieved and somewhat joyous. She couldn't wait to start a new life with MR Aahil Raza Ibrahim. But she wasn't sure whether he loved her back. Even though that thought had popped up in Sanam's head, she chose to be an optimist and plan the future with her husband .


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Whew! Okay, so i am finally done with my one shot .. I am not too happy with this as this was wriiten without any planning whatsoever. It was dribs and drabs from my head and from the precap ..

Please leave your comments and criticism is more than welcome ..😊


I will learn more if you guys tell me my errors .. and I haven't proof read .. so please bear with me😳


Do let me know how it was

PART 2 -- Page 6

Love


~ANNI aka Mishti&Mrina's Bae 😳

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Posted: 10 years ago
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AWWW is it that badd????
no one is leaving any comments or criticising me even ...😭
please read it and let me know.. so I know where my mistakes are
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Posted: 10 years ago
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It was really gud u shuld av written more. I anyways love sahil os"s u shuld write more
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awww.. Bae.. That was a wonderful first attempt! 👏
Though I don't follow the show, I really loved it. I love Aahil.. ❤️
You should continue to write! You're good at it! 😃
Love you.. <3
Your Munchkins! 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
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It's a very good one. I always like Sahil's stories. Please continue.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Very emotional OS...
The urgency and desperateness of the situation is described very well ...👏

Finally Sanam blurts out her feelings in that gushing way she does so well.

Wonderful OS...⭐️
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Annie it was juts fabulous!! Loved it to the core! <3
Its so much relateable to the current situation right now, and I can totally relate to it. Beautifuull and very well written it was!
Loved how she blurted out her feelings in front of him and the shock that surrounded her after seeing him like that.
Gorgeous stuff! Write more! :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice os
U should continue this os
I want to know after aahil reaction
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Beautifully written👏 you should write often😃
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Originally posted by: -Mrinalini-

Awww.. Bae.. That was a wonderful first attempt!👏

Though I don't follow the show, I really loved it. I love Aahil.. ❤️
You should continue to write! You're good at it! 😃
Love you.. <3
Your Munchkins! 😉



Awww Munchkins 😳

Thank You sooo muchh ... It was really supposed to be dedicated to you and MISHTI but then it didn't turn out as good 😭

Hopefully I will start writing more and then it will be worthy of dedicating it to you and Mishti 😳

Your Bae 😳
Love You :*

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